Ishra TS - Trying to win her back shot 5 on page 17 added on 13th july

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As I was so bored n I was just surfing through the channels I got stuck with the film Sanam Re on star gold. N the exact time heroine said some dialogue that "dil todne ki haq sirf tumhe nahin Aakash". Well it do click in my mind n I was thinking to write a story on that dialogue. I don't know how it's going to turn out.

Well my second story credit always goes to my Divan ke Deewanis.🤗

Love U all.

N haan this is a return gift to someone from our forum. None other than Akriti
aka Akku.

Hetuu,Pooh, Pooja Di n Raksha Di a belated gift from me.

A special dedication to my pyaari Pankhuri Di n Inshu Di.

N this is a congratulation gift for my Ishra locker aka Sapna

She knows for what it is!😉

N finally I'm dedicating this to my two devils. Sri n Ani. If it's not for them I shouldn't have known that I do have a talent of writing in me.😆

I'm writing this after watching the olv where Raman declares that he wanted to marry Shagun. So I'm also angry at CVs not Raman. I can't promise a happy ending.

N haan this idea is taken by some write up that I'd read from IF only. I don't remember who had written it. I'm sorry whoever it is.

N I'm dedicating this to my most favourite character in YHM Adi n my latest crush Abhishek Verma

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Shot 2- Page 4
Teaser - Page 8
Shot 3- Page 12
Shot 4-Page 14
Teaser - Page 15
Shot5 - Page 17



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Trying to win her back


After seven years she's coming to there where she belong to. Her house to her Raman. Is she welcomed here again? She do know that everyone wants her back in their life. But the one who's her life didn't wants her back to his life for making it theirs. She can't ever forget those words that he told her 7 years ago in that hospital. Neither can she forget the words that he told her recently. She knows it he shows his anger only to the ones whom he loved. Then also she don't want to be back in his life as she's afraid that she'll again cause him some lose.

He can see that she's coming back to him, back to his life. But do he wants her back in his life? Of course he wants her back. She's the only one who can make this stone hearted RKB to Raman. Her Raman. But do he wants this Ishita in his life? The one who just listen to whatever he says; the one who doesn't even react. No he don't want this Ishita. What he wants back is his JKR. He wants back that Ishita who had come up to the airport to stop him from going away from the family. He wants that Ishita who always ready to fight with him for her rights. N he know what exactly he wants to do for bringing that side of hers n he's going to do that only.

As she stepped towards their house he had done the exact thing as per his plans. He took out all her memories that he had kept secretly from all his family members throwing all of them towards her. Shocking at the realisation that he still hates her; her steps halted there.

Raman: Tumhari himmat kaise hui yahan waapas aane ki? Tumne kya socha ki main tumhe apni ghar mein aane dungi?

[How dare U come here? What did U think that I'll allow U inside my house?]

She kept mum. She don't want to explain anything to him. She knows him inside out. She knows him so very well then also she didn't felt the need to explain her situation to him. She didn't want to give him piece of her mind. Still she felt that she's at fault. Whatever he's doing to her; she deserves it.

Raman: Tumhari saari yaadon ko jalakar main ek nayee shuruwaat karne jaa rahi hoon. Mujhe tumhari naam se bhi nafrat hai Ishita. Na mujhe tumhe meri aas paas chaahiye aur naahi meri bachon ki aas paas. Mujhe afsoos to iss baat ka hai ki tum mar kyun nahin gayi.

[I'm going to start afresh by burning all your memories. I even hate your name. I want U neither anywhere near nor my children's. ]

Saying so he burned all those things that he kept close to his heart for almost seven years. The things which were his solace. The things which had given him the much needed peace reminding she's right there for him. He can't believe that he do burned it.

After burning those things he glanced at her side. Still there's no reaction from her side. She just kept on looking at him burning those things once which were their life. She didn't tried to stop him. She didn't tried to protest. She still has those dead looks in her eyes which were once full of liveliness.

Being failed at his first attempt to bring back his JKR he was about to go back to his house their came his ex-wife. Seeing her he felt may be she can help him out of this. But he don't have time to discuss it with her n he was going to do what is in his mind.

Shagun: Raman yeh kya kar rahi ho tum?

[What are U doing Raman?]

Raman; Acha hua Shagun tum waapas aagayi aur wo bhi correct time pe.

[It's good that U are back Shagun. U came on correct time]

Not getting any clue of what's happening there in her absence she just passed without noticing the lady who stood there only to be get shocked by the reality of her life.

Shagun: Ishita; Tum zinda ho?

[Ishita are U alive?]

She asked Ishita only to get back silence. Raman was watching her to find out any reaction from her side only to be disappointed by her reaction. She didn't reacted to anyone there. She didn't acknowledged anyone's presence there unless he declared something that turned her world upside down.

Raman: Tum isse kya baat kar rahi ho shagun. Main batati hoon tumko sab kuch. She was very much alive for these seven years. She was living with her so called friend Mani taking care of his sister's children jabki mere bache unki maa ki bina jee rahi thi. Main bhi kisko Maa bula rahi hoon. Yeh toh unki maa nahin hoona.

[What are U talking to her Shaagun? I'll tell U everything. She was very much alive for these seven years. She was living with her so called friend Mani taking care of his Siter's children when my children where living without their mother. Who am I calling mother. She's not their real mother na?]

That makes some reaction from her. He noticed it. Her eyes they do show anger now. The tears which are still there which is about to flow from them also overpowered by her anger. There he knows it he do had touched a wrong nerve. But still she didn't reacted to him.

Raman: Kya dekh rahi hai tum mujhe? Sach hi toh keh rahi hoon main. Tum toh sauteli maa kehleene ki bhi laayak nahin ho. Aur yeh jo aurat khada hai na mere bhagal mein yeh hai unki asli maa. N haan I'm going to marry her again. She'll not betray me again n I'm sure about it.

[Why are U looking at me like this? I'm telling the truth. U are not even worth to be called as a step mother. N the woman who's standing beside me is their real mother]

Mrs. Bhalla: Puttar yeh tu ki bole jaa rahi hai

[What are u saying son?]

Raman: Mainae kya galat kaha maa? Sachi toh keh rahi hoon. Aap bhi to yahi chaahti thin a ki meri aur shagun ki shaadi ho jaaye

[What wrong I did tell ma? I'm telling the truth na? U also wanted me to marry Shagun]

Mrs. Bhalla: Par Puttar!

Raman: Yeh mera decision hai to get married with Shagun

He told those words side hugging his ex-wife who was stunned by his declaration glancing towards his present wife.

That declaration do undid something inside her. Raising her hands to stop him from going overboard she replied him back.

Ishita: Mr. Raman Bhalla agar aap bhool gayi hai toh main aapko yaad diladoon ki main aaj bhi aapki patni hoon legally. Aur haan agar aapko apni bachon ki asli maa se shaadi karna hi hai toh mujhe divorce dene ki baad kar lena.

[If U forget that I'm still your legally wedded wife let me remember U that. N haan if U want to marry your Children's mother U can but only after giving me divorce]

Saying so she banged the door in front of his face. He was stunned at the reaction. It was not the reaction that he expected from her. But still she reacted to his words. So he was happy.

Turning to the woman who was still in his half embrace he jerked her away from him. Being shocked by his sudden declaration and his behaviour she don't know what will she should do now. Should she be happy that she's getting a second chance or should she be sad for Ishita. She was in a dilemma when her son approached her.

Adi: Shagun Mumma aap ne papa ko roka kyun nahin? Aur aap kyun chup rahi jab papa ne Ishima se aise baat karte wakth?

[Shagun mumma why didn't U stop Papa? N why were u silent when Papa talked to ishima like that?]

Shagun: Main kya bolun Adi? Agar Raman mujhse shaadi karna chaahti hai toh main kya kar sakti hoon?

[What will I talk Adi? If Raman wants to marry me then what can I do about it]

Adi: Par Mumma; U know what forget it mujhe aapse baat hi nahin karni hai

Sighing aloud she looked on the 21 year old who just left her room.

At Iyer house

Replaying all those happenings in her mind she sink on her room's floor crying aloud. She knows it when she came back here she should face his wrath n she was all prepared for it. But not for this; his sudden declaration of marriage to his ex-wife who was always between them from the very first day of their marriage. No one came to her room to check on her as they all know she do need to be alone this time. She don't know whether she should be happy for her Raman or should be sad about her fortune. "Her Raman". Now he's no more hers. Now he's going to be someone else's. Thinking so she drifted into a very disturbed sleep as exhaustion over took her.

At Bhalla house

He don't wanted this type of reaction from her but he's happy that he do have that power to bring the worst in her. He do have the power to bring the JKR in her. N now he knows it which nerve should be pulled to bring her on his way. But still the way he behaved with her was not right. He knows it again he gat remembered of that night which he lost his two angels he again drowned himself in his bottles of alcohols. Exhausted by the events of that day n the power of alcohol lead him also to a not so peaceful slumber which he didn't had for the last seven years.

Edited by Roohachu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted the first part of my story
I'm not so good at giving titles n if any one can give me a nice title pls give it
Thank U

Title credit goes to Akriti aka Akku
Thanks Buddy🤗

Edited by Roohachu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
unress
superb update achu
wht i luvd d most was raman wants ishita in jkr avtaar
n fight with him for all he said to her
let's see wht's nxt
continue soon

thnxx 4 pm
thnxx 4 d gift too its lovely jst lyk u
Edited by akriti154 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res

By your ishra locker 😳

Unres

My ashmi dear updated
And stole my heart
Best was raman wants to bring her back
RKB ne tareeke...when we will see this in show
Cvs where r u...read this
He was harsh for her reaction
Glad she reacted... But i wanna read further
For me it was chotu update
and trust me..it will never be enuf

Post next part soon
its an order
cant wait
update soon
thanks for pm
Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon...although I have no hope from raman anymore...he has reached the lowest level a man can reach!!!!!!!!...one cant stoop more low than this... .
Na na I am wrong... May be he will make love to shagun infront of ishita to hurt her...dont know...what cheapness will he do in the serial ...atleast in ur story I am sure only positive things will happen ao do continue to give us some relief
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update Ashmi loved to see raman's POV and his intentions behind doing dat and wanting his jkr back loved it continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb update..khas serial me aisi hote raman planning to get back his jkr.. thats an amazing story.. thanks for this beautiful update,,.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice one!
do pm me update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it ws nyc..
such a contrast of d olv..
its heaven in front of hell wat cvs r showing n degrading raman...


a much needed story..
thank u..
n continue soo..

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