TEI OS: Why Me? - Page 4

so apt and so nicely written. you are brilliant. love it. 👍🏼

I have no WORDS to describe how good that was!

Woah areeba nice angsty piece.

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

RES😳

I know I'm late to the party but I need to let all these feels out so bare with me! DAMNN AREEBA, you can't toy with my heart like that. This was so very beautiful and heartbreaking. These two, their love is still so young and prone to misconceptions but their desire to hold on to each other despite the qualms and uncertainties is so freaking beautiful. The way you captured the raw emotions, the angst, God, I'm dying!

Areeba, why would hide such an amazing piece in your laptop?! The world deserves to see this!

This was brilliant. So simple yet so beautiful. I loved how your Os was so simple yet powerful enough for my heart to be all over the place. The feels are real right now. It was so realistic; twinkle keeping pictures of her past that momentarily shook the foundation of her future with Kunj as his insecurities surfaced. But both of them realizing their mistakes and Kunj's "sorry" hayee I can't.

I absolutely loved it!

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

How could you not post this for so longgg Areeba!This was so realistic.

His insecurities and how he did not confront his own feelings,did not say anything to her except for a sorry,brilliant!

And how Twinkle explained herself to him broke my heart,again so realistic.

I have read this twice and i have a feeling that this totally deserves a sequel,Twinkle's words have not exactly helped clear the matter for him,so i would request you to write a sequel to this pleaseee😳

Loved every bit of this.

Originally posted by: rainaM

I know I'm late to the party but I need to let all these feels out so bare with me! DAMNN AREEBA, you can't toy with my heart like that. This was so very beautiful and heartbreaking. These two, their love is still so young and prone to misconceptions but their desire to hold on to each other despite the qualms and uncertainties is so freaking beautiful. The way you captured the raw emotions, the angst, God, I'm dying!

I'd write more, I want to write more but I'm getting late for class so I gotta rush. Keep'em coming girl. your OS's are getting me through the finals season!

Originally posted by: MinnieRose

Areeba, why would hide such an amazing piece in your laptop?! The world deserves to see this!

This was brilliant. So simple yet so beautiful. I loved how your Os was so simple yet powerful enough for my heart to be all over the place. The feels are real right now. It was so realistic; twinkle keeping pictures of her past that momentarily shook the foundation of her future with Kunj as his insecurities surfaced. But both of them realizing their mistakes and Kunj's "sorry" hayee I can't.

I absolutely loved it!