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Sherni_Jerry

@Sherni_Jerry

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

so apt and so nicely written. you are brilliant. love it. 👍🏼

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Lubana

@ASRkiMoonlight

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

I have no WORDS to describe how good that was!

You always write beautifully.

Loved itt.

Want more😊

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Eshita

@tikit

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Woah areeba nice angsty piece.

Why did u not post it before? It was beautiful. I want u to continue this os. Thanks for pm.

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Natasha

@--Natasha--

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: --Natasha--
RES😳

How could you not post this for so longgg Areeba!This was so realistic.

His insecurities and how he did not confront his own feelings,did not say anything to her except for a sorry,brilliant!

And how Twinkle explained herself to him broke my heart,again so realistic.

I have read this twice and i have a feeling that this totally deserves a sequel,Twinkle's words have not exactly helped clear the matter for him,so i would request you to write a sequel to this pleaseee😳

Loved every bit of this.

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Raina S.M

@rainaM

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

I know I'm late to the party but I need to let all these feels out so bare with me! DAMNN AREEBA, you can't toy with my heart like that. This was so very beautiful and heartbreaking. These two, their love is still so young and prone to misconceptions but their desire to hold on to each other despite the qualms and uncertainties is so freaking beautiful. The way you captured the raw emotions, the angst, God, I'm dying!

I'd write more, I want to write more but I'm getting late for class so I gotta rush. Keep'em coming girl. your OS's are getting me through the finals season!

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MinnieRose

@MinnieRose

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Areeba, why would hide such an amazing piece in your laptop?! The world deserves to see this!

This was brilliant. So simple yet so beautiful. I loved how your Os was so simple yet powerful enough for my heart to be all over the place. The feels are real right now. It was so realistic; twinkle keeping pictures of her past that momentarily shook the foundation of her future with Kunj as his insecurities surfaced. But both of them realizing their mistakes and Kunj's "sorry" hayee I can't.

I absolutely loved it!

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: --Natasha--

How could you not post this for so longgg Areeba!This was so realistic.
His insecurities and how he did not confront his own feelings,did not say anything to her except for a sorry,brilliant!
And how Twinkle explained herself to him broke my heart,again so realistic.

I have read this twice and i have a feeling that this totally deserves a sequel,Twinkle's words have not exactly helped clear the matter for him,so i would request you to write a sequel to this pleaseee😳

Loved every bit of this.

Thank You Natasha! I think i might post a sequel to this but no sure how to go around it.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: rainaM
I know I'm late to the party but I need to let all these feels out so bare with me! DAMNN AREEBA, you can't toy with my heart like that. This was so very beautiful and heartbreaking. These two, their love is still so young and prone to misconceptions but their desire to hold on to each other despite the qualms and uncertainties is so freaking beautiful. The way you captured the raw emotions, the angst, God, I'm dying!
I'd write more, I want to write more but I'm getting late for class so I gotta rush. Keep'em coming girl. your OS's are getting me through the finals season!

Thank you Raina! With Kunj being a witness to how crazily Twinkle loved Yuvi, I always thought there will come a day where he will insecure about her past especially with yup always being around.

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dramebaaz.af

@dramebaaz.af

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: MinnieRose
Areeba, why would hide such an amazing piece in your laptop?! The world deserves to see this!

This was brilliant. So simple yet so beautiful. I loved how your Os was so simple yet powerful enough for my heart to be all over the place. The feels are real right now. It was so realistic; twinkle keeping pictures of her past that momentarily shook the foundation of her future with Kunj as his insecurities surfaced. But both of them realizing their mistakes and Kunj's "sorry" hayee I can't.

I absolutely loved it!

Awe thank you minnie mouse!!

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-WalkThatWay-

@-WalkThatWay-

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Awesome..Awesome..Awesome!!

Areeba I don't think I need to dwell on how much I adore your stories, your writing style is so attractive and you wow me time and time again as your story graces this forum

Kunj's insecurity and Twinkles justification was such a pleasurable read..the show is yet to surface a jealous and insecure Kunj, something I an many have been longing to see, your story just made me pine for it all the more..but somehow I think the upcoming track is possibly going to give us just that and that it going to be one joyful watch

Kunj's insecurity and anger go hand in hand, when his insecurity creeps up his angers always follows and his thinking stops, he hurts Twinkle the most when he dismisses her when she tries to explain herself, as stated him shifting to the guest room makes him take irrational decisions which may potentially drive Twinkle away further, here come the trust game again..I really hope the next track in the show brings about all these emotions, I'm dying to see angst

Honestly what a beautiful read..loved it!

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