TEI OS: Why Me? - Page 3

Originally posted by: teddyyy

RESSS!
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Bro what the heck. You could've given me a little warning. You know I'm all up in my feels right now and this was just too much for my heart :P FIRSTLY, I'd like to say thank you so much for dedicating such a beautiful piece to me. Angst is definitely your thing, honestly like every time you write an OS, I say okay this one is my favorite but then you write another one and I'm like okey nah this is it LOL. And like this one is just so super special right now cause I got a dedication which is making me feel pretty awesome and also this reminds me of our fangirling from last night which is great memories and then like DUDE THE ANGST. It amuses me so much how you wrote this so long ago but it fits sooo perfectly with the upcoming track. Like I don't think you even need to do an analysis because your language is so beautiful that the OS was so perfect in portraying the emotions of both characters and their stances on the situation. I sympathize and understand both of them in their positions and the fact that you were able to express it all in a creative way and not a statement type of way is honestly awe worthy.

I especially love how you pick up on some things about Kunj & Twinkle's relationship and they become such a huge part of the story! Like Kunj saying Twinkle never has an answer when needed; it's true. She always has the best intentions but she can't be open about them for one reason or another and it causes distance in their relationship. I feel like Kunj should have been more understanding and rational and so I was like whaaat in the beginning but then when the part came about him worrying about losing her if Yuvi turns good CAUSE HES FIRSTHAND SEEN HER LOVE FOR HIM KILLLED ME LIKE OMG DUDE YES. He saw how blindly she was after Yuvi. BUT MY FAVORITE LINE FROM THE OS!!!!--- when twinkle says that she loved Yuvi with eyes closed but Kunj with eyes open, oh my god. Dude you stole my heart. THAT WAS PERFECT!

Twinkles dialogues in general were so fabulous I couldn't deal Yaar. The trust factor has always been so sensitive between them and now Kunj reacting like this because of pictures and her asking if this is how it would always be... :/ BUT THE LAST LINE. I kinda hate you lmao. It was a smack in the face. Happiness is always short lived for them </3

OMG WAIT I ALMOST FORGOT YOU KNOW WHAT KILLED ME THO DUDE THE SCENE OF HIM PICKING HER UP FROM THE BALCONY. The way you described the heavy eye lid thing and then Kunj seeing what he did to twinkle and her wanting to cuddle into him but holding his wrist!!! ALL IN FRONT OF MY EYES. It was perfect. Nothing less. I love you!

Originally posted by: areeba_blossom

BRO WHAT THE HECK BRO!! Like how is that you're responses are making me cry every damn time! Like this is more beautiful then what i wrote!!

I always wanted to do something with Kunj and pictures of Twinkle's modeling for Miss Amritsar or with Yuvi and when i wrote this I was kind of certain that this might happen but then it was wishful thinking too. I don;t know, i just needed to write this out once I saw Kunj yelling at her in the hospital after Manohar had a heart attack.

OMGG YES OUR FANGIRLING! it was one hell of a night and lot of fun as well!

I'm so glad you liked the dialogues because I thought I was getting very cheesy but omg good that i didn't turn it into a mushy thing which i feared it'll turn into.

i'm sorry or the last line. Maybe i'll do a sequel to this to make up for the heartache?

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR LIKE LITERALLY AMAZING RESPONSE

Originally posted by: docritu99

Areeba.. U blown me away..

My thoughts are still hovering in their bedroom..and m not in my senses..

So realistic buddy.. I felt like everything is happening ryt In front of my eyes.. And m still in their land..

Angry Sarna with hurt twinkle.. Deadly combo.. I was flat at the way twinks explained him with so genuineness so simplicity.. And it was well received by kunj.. After her words he can't stand by his doubts..and he is one such awesome man to apologise then and there without showing male ego..

Wow..I loved each and every bits of it..

Lastly.. Areeba u r genius..

Plz don't abondon such awesome stories in ur laptop.. If u have more let them get their deserved praises..

Originally posted by: teddyyy

LOL Areeba I say dude, bro, homie so much with you that sometimes I forget we have real names 😆 OH MY GOSH NO NOT EVEN CLOSE yaar! What you wrote was absolutely amazing, I'm gonna read other OS's and reply to some comments on mine and then read yours again before I hit the sack 😆

It just fit so well into this track and it shows how subtracks have built so beautifully up to this point cause the way you portrayed the characters was the best!

I'm waiting for the climax episode to air 😆 We will lose our shiz 😆

Oh nah, I know whatchu mean cause since I started writing, I feel like my cheesy personality spills into my work so I'm more aware of what cheesy dialogues are and this was quite the opposite!

HA YES PERFECT, I HAVE NO MORE COMPLAINTS. A SEQUEL WOULD BE THE BEST! Take your time, but post it before you go to Paki 🤣

Originally posted by: harshi2000

Nice Areeba
Very well written

Originally posted by: MaliciousAngel

Areeba i am so very sorry for being late. This shot was beautifully. So simple and yet so beautiful. The smallest of things have such a huge impact in one's life and those pictures she kept,brought kunj's insecurities to surface and then the apology. I can't even say what all i feel about that. I absolutely loved this one, to be short.

God i think i'm gonna join your fanclub. You are awesome