Arshi OS - Arshi's date to the derby.

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RenuHooda

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Posted: 10 years ago

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LOVE HRITHIKDEEPIKA ❤️SANAYAIRANI MY LAST BREATH

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Megha

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Posted: 10 years ago

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oh wow...i mean gud...coz there was only blushing but no teasing!

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Deepa Vasudev

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Sartia,

This OS i have read some 6 months back.. very bfully written.

Tks for such amazing OS>

The boxers and the bathrobe my all time fav.

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-IPK-Forever-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Wow... a beautiful date to Derby!

It reminded me of the scene in the show when Arnav suggests Derby and Khushi finds it so distasteful!

I'm glad she enjoyed the race...

Loved the dance :)

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Sarita

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-
Wow... a beautiful date to Derby!
It reminded me of the scene in the show when Arnav suggests Derby and Khushi finds it so distasteful!
I'm glad she enjoyed the race...
Loved the dance :)

Thank you :)

In that scene I really wanted her to go with him to the Derby, so I decided to pen my version.

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-IPK-Forever-

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: sarita_barun

Thank you :)
In that scene I really wanted her to go with him to the Derby, so I decided to pen my version.

Would have been better, no? Compared to the disaster of a movie date with the entire family!

Your version is a dreamy choice :)

Btw I read some of your other OSs... the threads were locked so I couldn't comment on them but I really enjoyed reading them :)

And I saw that your works are posted in the FF forum... You should post them in the IPK forum so more people will read them :)

Edited by -IPK-Forever- - 10 years ago

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Sarita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: -IPK-Forever-

Would have been better, no? Compared to the disaster of a movie date with the entire family!
Your version is a dreamy choice :)

Btw I read some of your other OSs... the threads were locked so I couldn't comment on them but I really enjoyed reading them :)

And I saw that your works are posted in the FF forum... You should post them in the IPK forum so more people will read them :)

I agree, the cinema was a disaster, poor boy couldn't even sit with his wife. Thanks again :)

Thanks for reading some of the others as well. I got some of the threads unlocked, while others haven't been.

Initially I started off on the ff forum solely, that's why the majority of them are there.

Definitely considering your suggestion of reposting them on the IPK forum.

Edited by sarita_barun - 10 years ago