Ek villan- a rajat uttara story. Completed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi everyone I know I won't get much response on this story but still this idea came into my mind so here I am writing it, I don't know what it will turn out to be cause directly I am writing it here well. Pls do reply hope u will like it..
Prologue- swasan and raglak disclosed rajat's truth to the family uttara who was ready in her bridal attire fainted.sanskaar n laksh took her to the bed room and made her lie on her bed , soon she gained conscious, she was hurt and felt cheated as well as guilty for loving a person like him. Soon everyone left the room, her bridal attire was lying on one side of the bed and on the other she was alone and even tears were not escaping her eyes she knew it was no use because he does not deserve these.. She was sitting life lessly on her bed when her gaze shifted to his name on her hand, her heart filled with disgust and eyes clearly showed the emotion. She immediately go up, went to the washroom. She was rubbing her hand continuously to remove his name from her hand.. It turned red n soon was burning when there was some noise in the hall. She immediately went there. Swara was missing, or rather kidnapped by rajat he took her along with him sanskaar and laksh went chasing him she n ragini ran with the police there. But they were late rajat pushed swara off the cliff. Sanskaar now was panicked, uttara tried to calm him but he simply jerked her hand, he along with police searched for swara n found her in a pool of blood all the 4 of them ran with swara to the hospital police had arrested rajat. Uttara moved towards him she and slapped him. It was not new to him, he was a con artist n he had cheated few girls earlier as well. Police was taking him when he saw the redness on her Pam n soon realised the reason for it. She then moved towards a tree n rubbed her hand till they were started bleeding. Rajat who noticed the scenario felt hurt for the 1st time in his 4 years. Uttara was his 4th victim n he played his worst with her, by not only hurting her but also her family. He saw he sitting lifelessly on her knees, she again rubbed her hands on the sand increasing the burning sensation, as punishing herself for loving him. Police was taking him, she was the 1st girl who confronted him after his betrayal and this was the 1st time when a few tears escaped his eyes.


Index-
Prologue - above
Part-1 - pg2
Part-2- pg 5
Part-3-pg6
Part-4-pg7
Epilogue-pg9
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Sujayricky thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb idea harshieta 👏
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sujayricky

Superb idea harshieta 👏
Update soon

Thanks for reading sujay
Surely I will by today evening or tomorrow same time as it i
Will be possible 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice idea harshita...
The beginning is fab..do cont soon...
U will surely make me love RajRa soon
.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Radhadreamlove

Nice idea harshita...
The beginning is fab..do cont soon...
U will surely make me love RajRa soon
.😆

Thanks😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey Harshita.😊
Really loved this concept.👏 We always see Uttara in the show as a laadli, bholi-bhali, sehmi hui, chup-chap and shant ladki.😳 But loved this new avatar of her in ur story.😉 Loved this story so much.😃 Hope that CV's bhi humein kuch aisa hi dikhaye Uttara ko when she will get to know about Rajat's truth...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice start. interesting concept. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Hey Harshita.😊
Really loved this concept.👏 We always see Uttara in the show as a laadli, bholi-bhali, sehmi hui, chup-chap and shant ladki.😳 But loved this new avatar of her in ur story.😉 Loved this story so much.😃 Hope that CV's bhi humein kuch aisa hi dikhaye Uttara ko when she will get to know about Rajat's truth...😉

Thanks heli...for reading and liking a concept...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Helee

nice start. interesting concept. 😊

Thanks

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