Ek villan- a rajat uttara story. Completed

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Aheli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: harshitaloomba1

Sorry ... Aheli..

Its absolutely ok dear. No need to feel sorry.😳

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98

Its absolutely ok dear. No need to feel sorry.😳

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: iam_aheli_98
Dear Harshita.😊
This was a emotional and heart touching update.😳 Was feeling really bad for Uttara.😭 And to some extent for Rajat too.😭 Loved the 1st part. Plzz update the next part soon. And thanks for the pm.😃
With love.
Aheli.

Thanks for reading

Sure I will update asap

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: dewcute
Nice update girl

Very well written

I think ,u will soon make me ship this couple...!

Glad u liked it

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: naujoker
Wow! Something new!

Thanks 😊😊

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: ck1234
nice update...

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BarkhaSingh123

@BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Part-2

There uttara was punishing herself where as rajat was in jail.

He wanted God to punish him for the sins he commited. He and his lawyer tried their best and proved swara's attempt to murder an accident, all the 3 girls he cheated earlier n uttara case was also shown as a matter of personal choice thus he was in jail 5 years well for now 4 years and 6 months more. The reason for doing this was not escaping from the punishment but the darkness in him, he wanted to get out of this mess ASAP but sanskaar Maheshwari was no less he was trying to reopen the case n increase his punishment, he wanted to proov those crimes but swara n other MM wasis asked him to move on.

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe

Kyun hum tukdon mein jiye

Ye dil tanha kyun rahe

Kyun hum tukdon mein jiyein

Kyun rooh meri ye sahe

Main adhoora jee raha hoon

Hardum ye keh raha hoon

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai (x2)

He was struggling , with his sole, he still remembered her haterate for him. This was changing him, she was changing him. He needed her, her love. He wanted to change for once , meet her once..

Andheron se tha mera rishta bada

Tune hi ujaalon se waaqif kiya

Ab lauta main hoon inn andheron mein phir

Toh paaya hai khud ko begaana yahaan

Tanhaayi bhi mujhse khafaa ho gayi

Banjaron ne bhi thukra diya

Main adhoora jee raha hoon

Khud par hi ik sazaa hoon

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

he could no more bare all this negativity around him more, this was not new to him. Today also he was around criminals , rapists , killers but this time it was different. As if a punishment to his soul.

He needed some positively, Some goodness but they all were far away from him like her..

Hmm.. tere jism ki woh khushbuein

Ab bhi inn saanson mein zinda hai

Mujhe ho rahi inse ghutan

Mere gale ka ye phanda hai

Aaa..

He saw searching for a new , did not want to die in this jail. He for once wanted to meet her ... He still remembered her slap , her haterate , he wanted to ask for forgiveness once but these walls around him were a hurdle..

Ho.. tere choodiyon ki woh khanak

Yaadon ke kamre mein goonje hai

Sunkar isey aata hai yaad

Haathon mein mere zanjeerin hain

Tuhi aake inko nikaal zaraa

Kar mujhe yahaan se rihaa

He wanted to talk to her once and clear things bit not only these walls but his past was a reason stopping him, he hurted her soo much, he remembered her red wounded hands. She wanted to erase his memories and he wanted to just once say sorry, just once anyhow lessen her pain.. The pain he have her.. He really needed to free himself from his dark past, he was guilty because that darkness took away all her light.. It made her life grey...

Main adhoora jee raha hoon

Ye sadaayein de rahaa hoon (sadaayein: awaaz)

Mujhe teri zaroorat hai

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Wow yr very nice...update soon...

Update other stories too..

Talia

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BarkhaSingh123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: krishuuu
Wow yr very nice...update soon...
Update other stories too..

Talia

Thank you

Yes will do them but just now I am having a maths test so after this Saturday I will, u know abhi if I will focus on them then they need to be handled with much more care n therefore I will update this Sunday