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hermosoanu123

@hermosoanu123

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

Will b joining u in this journey.ur words always takes me to the other unknown world where characters r so real nd der journey always leaves u in trance .beautiful start ,kabhie kismet anjaane se dastak de deti Ki aapko pata hi nahi chaltha .kab aapki duniya ek anjaan raah Mein chal padi hai ,manzil paane ko .
..continue soon

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spoorthi28

@spoorthi28

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Ji app likhte jaye aur hum padte😳

I do want to say so much but i don't want the flow of the writer to break...

Keep writing😊

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

Its Simply Beautiful

and I'm glad you've decided to extend this story

so Maan and Geet would continue on meeting each other when

both already feel that the other is so mesmerizing beautiful

their second meeting was rather an unusual place as Maan had to travel by bus and there he sees Geet he stares at her been so intrigued while she knows he is looking at her all the time

I wonder when they start talking what would it be like

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

hi thanks 4 continuing! wonderful update! superbly written! Maaneet met again n that too in the bus! Maan admires her! she feels his gaze on her! update soon

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Vidhi24

@Vidhi24

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

A beautiful start of a lovely story, would love to read more

Do continue soon

Waiting

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Wow, beautiful narration!

Their paths are already intertwined, their fate sealed together. It will be interesting to see their journey towards each other.

Please continue soon.

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

Its very interesting they continue meet but they dont talk but they quiet fallen for each other i liked second meeting maan keep looking at her its really beautiful

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

Nice story

Waiting to see where this conspiracy take them to..they met second time that to be coincidencently hope someone start initiative to talk with other one