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@Endgame

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Hmm they again meet in a mall but Geet is thinking he has a girlfriend abb toh woh kabhi baat nehi karegi lovely part thnx 4 update

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

very nice

both are restless as not able to see n talk with each other

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Oh they again met on shopping mall but seeing maan with another girl Geet and her friends thought she is his GF oh no how will Geet come to know that that girl is his sister

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

hi thanks 4 updating! awesome update! well written! Maan goes the mall again in hope of meeting her! bt is unsuccessful! Maan restless n so is Geet! she resolves 2 speak 2 him wen she meets him! update soon, pls update Distances btwn us! thanks

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Awesome update. Maan is taking rounds of the places where he saw her earlier but of no use. Geet is also restless not able to see him.

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

so the conspiracy has began, with their paths crossing again and again..
loving the way it is working on their mind and heart..
beautiful updates..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 9 years ago

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Beautiful update!

Waiting for their next time!

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pop77

@pop77

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Nice story,,They see each other but not say any word..I hope Geet talk to him ask about what he feel for her..

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ChandlerBing

@ChandlerBing

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

There's a charm in stories that are simple, where we could connect to the characters and happenings, where we feel that "hey, that could be me" (Not a Justin Beiber reference btw😆). Your stories always were like that to me.

But there's another part of me who sometimes watches Romcoms, who still loves tangled, and goes to Cinderella movie on birthday. That part of me likes the magic and sweetness of a fairytale.

This story my dear friend is a bit of both. It is a simple story with a touch of magic in its narration where fate plays a role, which is why I fall in love with your writing time and again

Edited by ChandlerBing - 9 years ago