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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: Commelina
Anyone around ?
Should I update another chapter or will it be too early? :)

Yes plz update

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Mamta-Maaneet

@Mamta-Maaneet

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Anyone around ?
Should I update another chapter or will it be too early? :)[/QUOTE

Pls update ..

Also update " short distance between us" please .

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Taahir

@taahir004

Achiever

+ 10

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

After one month both sees each other but again yes Maan its a waste , he could have went up to Geet but than her friends had assumed his sister to be his girlfriend which saddened Geet

Maan leaving the premier league to accompany his sister to the mall well at least he got to see Geet's face

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

hi thanks 4 updating! terrific update! superbly written! Maan goes shopping wid Annie n is annoyed! he shld have being watching the Premier League! Geet's friends notice him n find him attractive! she turns n sees him! Eye lock! Maan gets 2 see her again! bt he doesn't go n talk 2 her! update soon! please update Distance btwn us! thanks

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vidyaniru

@vidyaniru

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Loving the conspiracy! Nice song choices - reminded me of my school days! Chip of the old block??

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Lovely update. Maan went to a mall with his sister. He saw Geet there after a period of one month. Geet is with her friends. Her friends found him hot. She saw him and amused. One of her friends told about him having girl friend. She is sad.

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Doracake

@Doracake

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Awww poor Geet.

Broken hearted thinking Anwesha as his GF.

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hermosoanu123

@hermosoanu123

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Kaise kahoon tumhe mujhe afsane banane ko ,oh,Geet must have misunderstood him . Pehle hi rukawaat aa gayi .and maan missed the chance to spk to her ...abhi bahut papaad belne hai dono ko ..
😉

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Cartoon.Buff

@Cartoon.Buff

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

They met for the third time and still no luck!

I am totally enjoying this!

Their mall adventure is not over yet, is it?

Please continue soon.

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Amazing story line... And title is really apt...its conspiracy of nature only that they are meeting again and again but alas they are not talking... Eagerly waiting to know how they will start convo or they gonna stare only

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