Ashlok ff: Ye Dil Maange More updated Last Episode 50 - Page 70

Hai Sai gud evening. Thanks for ur updates and pm. Thanks for ur comments reply. Really enjoying ur ff same as comments reply. I am waiting for ur valuable comments reply yaar. It is quite interesting as ur ff. Sai loved ur encouragements for giving us by comments reply. It turns us to write more comments or write an OS. V r blessed to read ur ff and comments. U know if u be late in posting update v will be tensed yaar. That much v loved ur updates yaar. U said wat came on ur mind u wrote. But it is an excellent job. Ur thoughts r taking us to some other world really it is ashlok world. Thanks dearr for giving us a would treat daily.
Astha apologizing to Anjali. It was cute yaar. She knows that she behaved like a child. Anjali scolded her so much and told her to behave like a grown up girl . She is married but behaving like Kavya. Astha became silent waw. Jyothi came and supported astha and told Anjali but she scolded her also. Astha started crying same like small kids fir that also Anjali scolded her. Jyothi took her away to her room. Jyothi told to astha really she looks like a small Kavya. Astha went to niranjan and asked about him. He said he is fine. And he told he is going to transfer his wealth to his sons. But but astha refused and told they only wants their baba with them.
Asthu and baba is chatting and once again told him if Anjali is giving problem v can change her she is also problem for me also. Suddenly Anjali cane and after that the chatting was superb.
Really she is everyone's drama queen. Jyothi and sojal was feeling sad for astha. They went to check her but wat they saw was really touched one Anjali was feeding astha with love only. Jyothi and sojal got stunned jyothi went down with sad but our asthu henna. She went to her and asked about siddarth it was nice part. Jyoti at last agreed. That is nice but I think siddarth is not a good person. He is going to make some thing wrong.
Shlok was thinking about astha he was confused. Now he wants astha with him always ge thought to bring her office daily waw so v can see ashlok office romance. Arey Sai wat yaar u r also becoming naughty hahaha. Loved the way ur presentation yaar. Good going yaar. Reallyu r an excellent writer no doubt. He came home astha asked him wat happens but he didn't say anything he hugged her and kissed her arey romance aagaye. Really unpredictable yaar. Anyway it is nice update yaar.
Arey wat to write yaar today ur half past ff was ashloks romantic moments. Really liked it. I have no words to describe about it because I can't give any explanation. U wrote well. Sai don't make any mistakes please. Shlok now u r the number one romantic person waw. He wants to take her office but astha refused for going to office just for teasing shlok. But making love shlok made her agree arey shlokee u r genius yaar hahaha. Next morning everyone teased her she felt very shy . Again ashlok went to office together. In office after works she got tired and slept. Shlok was loving her so much.
But kalindhi called astha and telling about her father's situation. Thanks u Sai u sent shlok with astha. It is nice yaar. Here comes siddarth yes I am confirming he is not the right person to jyothi. He is behind something otherwise y he is behind niranjans assets. Anyway Sai I enjoyed it u rocked. Keep it up. Continue Sai v r waiting. Trust you so much.
Sorry for my comments delay. I enjoyed it very much. Continue soon...

Originally posted by: Catherine06

Nice update, interesting,waiting to know who calls shlok & about avdoot.

Happy that you are making ashlok live in our heart. aweome they are.

keep updating...FF...

thank u
u will know but warning dont get panic k
yes Ashlok always live in our brain not heart samajla😆
yes they r always awesome
thank u so much

Originally posted by: dazzles

Nice update Sai...
I felt something bad about Sid... Is he genuine...
waiting for the next one

thank u anu
hmm Sid u will know about him soon
yes he is genuine
will update now

Originally posted by: vaishux

Beautiful update...

Gud going ...keep it up

Thank you😳😳

thank u so much vaishux

Originally posted by: syvalini

oh god what happen to to avdoot...

wat that sid want to say truth to jyothi,

is he not doing any harm na...

now astha will fogive his father or not...

oho wait na akkiii
hmm u will know about him soon
by now u should have known kni mee medadu pani cheste ga asalu buddhu
hmm u say will she forgive or not
thanks a lot akkiii
oh sorry malli feel ayyara thittinanduku aina parledu le nene ka tittedi padalsinde 😆

Episode 41

Aastha "main jaati hoon." Shlok "kaisi hain aap." Kalindi "main theek hoon aur tum ghar main sab theek hain na." Shlok "haan sab theek hain aur Baba bhi theek hain." Aastha entered her room slowly with tears. She saw him and tears flown even more. Avdoot saw her and suddenly woke up "beta Aastha." Aastha ran to him "Baba."

Avdoot "beta tum theek hain kaisa hain tu itni din hogaye tujhe dekh nahi paya aur tum mujhse baat nahi kar rahi hain Aastha mujhe maaf kijiye Aastha tumhari Baba aisa nahi hain I swear Aastha I swear I wont do it again I m sorry beta." Aastha cried even more and just rushed to him and hugged him tightly "I m sorry Baba I m really sorry ye sab kya hain Baba aap aisa kyun kiya I m sorry aainda aisa nahi karoongi main pls aap kuch kaalijiye." And she cried even more.

Avdoot "nahi beta aisa mat kaho ye mera karmo ki saza hain achcha hi kiya tumne lekin ye Baba apni beti ke bina nahi jih sakta beta nahi..." Aastha "nahi Baba nahi main hamesha aapki hi beti hoon pls Baba aisa mat kahiye main aapse baat karne aayi hoon pls aap mat royiye aur ye kya haal banadiya apne aapko kya hain ye sab Baba mujhe aapko iss tarah dekhi nahi jaati."

Avdoot "teek hain beta ab tum aagayi na main bilkul teek hogaya dekho mujhe kuch nahi hua beta tumne banaye hue khana khana chahta hoon beta." Aastha "abi banake laatha hoon Baba pls aap aisa mat kijiye aur ek baar aai kaise hogayi dekha aapne pls mere liye aap kuch khalo aur mujhse vaada kijiye ki aap aur ek Galati nahi karenge."

Avdoot "haan beta main vaada karta hoon main kuch aur galti nahi karoonga promise beta mujhe tumse baat karne ke baad bohut bhoog lagi hain iss se pehle sach main bhoog nahi lagi." Aastha "aap yahi rukhiye main aathi hoon." And she went out.

Aastha saw Kalindi and yelled "aai itna kuch ho raha hain mujhe kyun nahi bataya ab tak aapne dekha Baba ki haalat." Ankush "hmm dekho kaun kya kah rahi hain itni din se tumko iski parva hi nahi I was shouting at u pls talk to Baba lekin nahi tum apni jidd pe bhaitkar rakhi thi." Aastha "haan tho aap log achchi se dyaan rakh sakti hain na baba ka aap log ki vaja se ho hua ye sab Baba ko."

Shlok was stunned "Oh nautanki sare galti tum ki aur uski guna ye log pe rakh rahe ho." Aastha saw at him furiously "aap sab log ek hogaya na." and she rushed to kitchen and was throwing contents here and there and was trying to make poori bhaji for her father. Kalindi listened her noise and pitied her in laws. Kalindi "Shlok I m sorry we made u to marry a time bomb."

Shlok smiled "hmm ghar main bhi aise hi bohut shaitan karti hain lekin mujhe Aastha aisa hi pasand hain." Both of them smiled but Shlok suddenly realised something and tensed. Ankush observed him. Aastha made everything very fast and went to her Baba mocking them with her tongue. She first made him drink juice and also gave him poori but he asked her to feed him. Avdoot "beta tum us ghar main theek hain na."

Aastha "Baba aap chinta mat kijiye mujhe ek aur maika mil gayi hain aur Shlok se main bohut khush hoon ab teek hain ye khalo jaldi." Avdoot smiled at her and caressed her head and said "hamesha aisa hi khush raho beti." Aastha "if u want me to be like that then u have to be strong not like this k now eat fast office main kaam hain aaj."

Avdoot "Aastha beti aaj yahi rukhna pls." Shlok "haan Aastha be here for today." Aastha "lekin Shlok office main kaam hain na hamko." Shlok "I will see all that if u want I too will be here." Aastha smiled at him "ab bohut hogaya u go Shlok I will be here don't worry if u want come and pick me at the evening." Shlok worried for her wat if something happens to her he doesn't want to leave her.

He worriedly saw here and there. Ankush observed him keenly. Shlok "teek hain fir main shaam ko aaonga." And he was very reluctant to leave her there. Ankush pulled him to the lonely place and asked wat happened. Shlok "kya hua." Ankush "aap itni tension main kyun hain." Shlok tensed even more. He cant hide anything more he wants to decrease his tension by saying it to someone.

Atlast reluctantly he said everything to him. Ankush looked thoughtful "kaun ho sakta hain do u have enemity with anyone haan." Shlok "nahi" Ankush "tum chinta mat kar police ko inform kiya." Shlok nodded. Ankush "tum chinta mat kar Aastha yaha safe hain aur mujhe wo numbers de main dekhoonga." Shlok gave those numbers to him and said him to keep it secret. Shlok "keep an eye around house too." Ankush nodded.

Shlok went in and saw her cheerfully with her Baba. He saw her with full of love towards her. Aastha suddenly saw him and asked "kya." Shlok "kuch nahi shaam aata hoon." Aastha "teek hain." Shlok went away. Ankush too didn't understand who might it be he went to their room. Ankush saw her happy. Heyy Bappa let her be like this. Ankush too worried. Shlok was restless he shouldn't have left her like that.

He quickly took his phone and called her. Aastha saw her phone and thought isse kya hua abi gaye the. She lifted the call. Aastha "kya hain Shlok abi aap gaye the." Shlok "Aastha kuch nahi wo saputara instituitions ki bare main wo branch ki mail aaye na tumhare mail ka password batayiye mujhe." Aastha shyly said "Ashloklove." Shlok "Kya?"

Aastha spelled each and every letter and said "Ashlok means Aastha and Shlok samaj main aaya buddhu." Shlok felt so much and said "love u Aastha." Aastha "achcha teek hain ab main rakhti hoon." Shlok "haan Aastha kai mat jaana teek hain if u want to go anywhere take Ankush with u k." Aastha "Shlok aap bhi na kabhi kabhi kuch jyaada hi pareshaan hota hain ab main rakhti hoon bye."

Shlok cut the call and immediately called to Ankush and asked him to be careful. Ankush said he will always keep an eye on her. Shlok was working again wen this call came. He didn't lift the call this time. He knows he is just provoking him and he also knows it is him. He intentionally didn't lift it. The other man other side was thinking hmm phone karne ki kya jaroorat hain aaj sab kuch khatam hone wala hain and he cut the call.

Shlok was thinking y didn't he lift the call wat if something important happens and he immediately called to Ankush. He was tensed. Ankush said everything is fine. Wat the hell is happening to me he thought.

Shlok now cant work at all but wat is it yaar who the hell is he wat is his intention wat does he need at all. Shlok was feeling very dark he was restless. He doesn't want to take risk but wat should he do. He didn't know wat to do shall he say it to every one. No he doesn't want to he didn't do anything and to the top of that nothing goes wrong wen he is alert. Shlok started working. Aastha and her father had a lot of chat.

She again said sorry to him. Avdoot smiled and laughed a lot with her. Kalindi felt very happy seeing him like that. It was evening noo threatening call again strange and he also felt strange not even Aastha called him. He immediately called her. Aastha took the phone. Shlok said he is coming now. Aastha said fine. He took some files and went to her home. Shlok took their blessings.

Avdoot "Shlok Aastha ka dyaan rakhna." Shlok "Ji Baba." And they took their blessings and sighed Ankush that he will take care of her. Shlok and Aastha went into the car. Aastha "Shlok ye files kya hain." Shlok "kuch nahi ghar main kaam karne ki." Aastha understood "hmm mera miss kar rahe hain na aap isiliye jaldi aaya na."

Shlok smiled "tum hamesha aisa kaise soch sakte hain." Aastha just kissed him on cheek and said "tum world main sabse best patidev." Shlok "raat main dekhoonga." Aastha "chi badmaash chele aap." They went to home calmly. Anjali felt lightened after listening their patch up she too wants to talk with her son.

Dinner was perfect. Shlok suddenly came infront of his aai. Anjali saw him with lot of love in her eyes. Shlok left her to his room. Niranjan was going to sign the papers. He read it once and twice. Anjali was cleaning the paper. Siddharth gave him last juice of the day. He was recovering so fast. He kept the papers away and took it and drank.

Niranjan "hmm Siddharth wo papers de." Siddharth gave those papers to him. Unknown to him he added one more paper in it. Niranjan signed all the papers without reading it. He was sleepy he signed thinking he already read everything. Niranjan said him to put the papers in the cupboard. He took his paper and rest he kept it in. Niranjan tried to sleep. Anjali came there.

Anjali saw him "Siddharth tum cupboard main kya kar raha hain." Niranjan "kuch nahi I told him to put those files there." Anjali "achcha teek hain Siddharth tum ja abi kal se tum nahi honge na." Siddharth smiled and said "ji." He went and Anjali came and slowly sat there.

Anjali "Sahab mujhse nahi ho raha hain kyun Sahab Shlok mujhse itni nafrat kar raha hain meri kya galti hain Sahab pata nahi aur kitni din Sahab main mar jaongi Sahab." Niranjan "Anjali kya hain ye baat main baat karoonga Shlok se tum mat ro pls." Aastha listened everything and felt bad for her.

Episode 42

Hai Sai gud evening yaar. Thanks for ur updates and pm. Nice update 👏
V really enjoyed ur updates yaar. Daily daily u r taking us to some where yaar.😛.
Really I don't know how to write the comments because daily u r progressing so much. 👏.
Really so many suspences and twists. How to describe v don't know. Now v r just enjoying and waiting curiously for the next part. That much impacts u have done to us by ur writing skill. For that u r really appreciatable 👏
Ashlok came to asthas house and shlok and kalindi talk was nice casual talk. Astha went to her room and saw her dad. Really that part was super. Waw dad and daughter crying together .
He apologized to astha for every sins made. And astha she also apologized to her baba. And she told to eat well. But he didn't want to eat but she told she will cook for him. Waw astha was super idea. She came down and yelled at her mother and brother waw astha. But shlok u r right she us nautanki really badmaashi... 😉
Astha cooked and fed her dad that part was superb. She really mocked her mother brother and her cute hubby shlok. Kalindi asking sorry to shlok because asthu. But shlok said he loved astha so much. Shlok was tensed by the phone call. But Ankush saw shlok and asked the reason and shlok told every thing. From now Ankush is also with shlok. Astha will be safe. Shlok doesn't want to go for work but Ankush promised he will look astha so he gone. .
Shlok was restless. He called astha . Arey asthu ur password is ashloklove waw arey it is our ashlok fans password henna hahaha.
Sai I loved it yaar. Super. Shlok came and took astha with him to his house.
Anjali was happy because astha patch uped with her dad.
Arey who called shlok by phone henna. Really siddarth is helping him and siddarths mom is with the villains hand. Siddarth made sign from niranjan. Really I think who is calling shlok is Indrajit sarkar. Siddarth is doing this job for him. It is my guess.
Anyway feels bad for shlok and family .
. Sai v enjoyed it very well. Really it is interesting yaar. U r making us restless. Anyway good going. Keep it up. U r the rocker in writing stories about our sweetest cutest couples Ashlok.
Anyway thanks for your every updates. Continue soon...
V r waiting yaar... 👏

Nice update Sai... Astha patch up with father...

Shlok's care is lovely...
Niranjan signed the paper without reading it...
Mystery mystery mystery mystery mystery

Very mysterious and emotional update. Wonder who is calling Shlok. There's something fishy regarding Siddharth, what were those papers??

wow,why sid added a paper,he is good person or not,who is calling shlok, waiting for the answer.