Rishbala OS: Love just happens !!

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SOUWMIYA MURALIDARAN

@vishuv

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

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sapana

@sapnaf52

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

sowmi,loved your writing dear.
love at first time reading,
o god it was your first os,i hardly dout dear.
u write so professionly.
pls write more more on rishbala.
loved the story dear ,it was awesome ,amazing
loved both side pov.
3 kiss in 1 update(in second story yours),progress ha!!!
beautiful species,optical fiber is use for trasmitting power " side effect of exam.
best of luck for exam dear.
keep writing and posting dear afterall u count in writer list .

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Sneh lata

@snehalata

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

Lovely os

Like it😊

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jalebi

@madhurish

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

Love just happened for me too... With this Story...😛😉

Yes i m in love with this OS... with this superstar Rk... & of course with this cute Madhu...

Beautiful story! Loved it baby...👏

Once again u proved ur writing skills... I m at awe of u...

Hehe... So this Rk was not interested in marriage... But then seeing madhu... The girl who came in his dream... He went ahead & kissed her marking her as his... Lovely lovely!

Four kisses in first meet?😲 First one was romantic possessive kiss... 2nd & 3rd were more like a punishment kiss for making him wait for 15 mins & for not responding his first kiss... Lol! How he expect her to respond when he assaulted her suddenly?? She was in the state of shock! First meeting the handsome hot superstar so close & then his dimpled cheeky smile... To top that he kissed her surprising her all the more...😆 Man, he is too fast!

Oh i missed his sweet good bye kiss... Ayee! He is hot & sexy yaar!

Hey, baby... If u could continue this story... Please... U could surely write more on this cute couple... U could show their pre wedding jitters... Their dating... Their wedding... Their love after marriage ... & so on! Pls give a thought to my suggestion dear...

U can write after ur exams... No worries!

Thanks dear...

Edit - oh i forgot to mention about Rk's super smart mom Radha... She knows her nautanki son well i guess.. So she said the wrong timing ... Haha... That was funny! 😆

Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago

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Jyoraj

@Jyoraj

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

Very well written.

cute story.

liked that you gave both pov.

keep writing and thanks for the pm.

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shruthi murali

@shruthi14

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Aww I found it cute and beautiful os!!! I loved madhu's pov more than rk!!

Your first OS is awesome!!

Ahaan madhubala already captured him in his dreams!!

Thanks for pm

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harini

@harini06

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Beautiful os,
loved it
thanks for the pm

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poojitha96

@poojitha96

Navigator

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome os loved it tq for the pm

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Simran Sharma

@srksimran

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Souwmy?...what is this yaar...???😡😡...why are you doing this to me??😡😡...this is unfair...just 1 prolouge and one OS and I am fallen for you...how can this happen??😲

Hahahaha LOL😆😆😆...hat's off to you dear...such a brilliant piece of writting.👏

Such a fast and furious OS it was...first meeting and 3 kisses and he made her his "Biwi" LOL only our Rishbala can do that hehehe...crazy they were. Madhu was so adorable and RK no words just perfect...hehehe initially he didn't want to marry but thanks to his dream he said yes...

they were so crazy thank God they didn't get married the same day...because the pace with which they were coming close to each other no wonder they would have delivered their first baby on the very same day😆...i mean who knows they are our rishbala Right??😉😉😉...OMG what nonsense I am talking sorry for that Souwmy...I should shut my mouth...oopss i mean my finger right away.

Loved it..is this the OS you were talking about or there is another one which you are going to update on 2nd??

Anyway...loved every bit of it

Thank you for the PM Souwmy😉

LOve you

xoxo❤️❤️❤️❤️

Edited by srksimran - 9 years ago