Rishbala OS: Love just happens !! - Page 17

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Posted: 9 years ago
Firstly tell me did u get permission from medical department before writing such type of story. Do u know i m getting continously goosebumps after reading and may be if i read it again i will send to medical attention. Omg so naughty rk. I think u can extend it to some more parts showing there their wedding n after life and may be madhu come to know that she is rk dream girl. Thanks for beautiful os.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Risingsun626

Firstly tell me did u get permission from medical department before writing such type of story. Do u know i m getting continously goosebumps after reading and may be if i read it again i will send to medical attention. Omg so naughty rk. I think u can extend it to some more parts showing there their wedding n after life and may be madhu come to know that she is rk dream girl. Thanks for beautiful os.


Thanks for your appreciation buddy! 😃Oho no need medical attention and all 😆

Yeah I am trying for the past week to write next part...but I can't make it like the first part. How to say,...it's not doing justice to the first one...so I am still thinking. Will definitely write if I get nice ideas.

Thanks 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Congratz on your first OS..👏
and loved loved it dear Sumi..⭐️

superb OS and it didn't looked like you are writing for first time..
really such a b'ful story😃 b'fully written..👍🏼
and so cute and lovely..❤️

Madhu and Rk both POVs are too good..❤️

Madhu is getting married to Rk the superstar and Rk at first not liking this all but later he found his dreamgirl in Madhu..😉
he kissed her four times 😲 ☺️
in first meeting😛amazing 😆

and she not getting any clue what's happening but she fell in love with him..
truly said ..Love just happens..title awesome too..⭐️
medical terms ..thanks for them ..i didn't knew it .. Optical fibre..😃

hey why not write some more on it ..there is lot more scope in this story ..

may be Deepali can create trouble in Rishbala wedding and something happening before marriage ..

write when ever you get time ..its just about one meeting na..think about it..if you feel like ..pls cont.it.😳

i am so late to read this but i am latest 😎 one of my forum friend used to say it and i like it too..

so finally i read it..
thanks for the unique and fresh story..🤗

keep writing...keep shinning buddy.👍🏼



Edited by RM14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: RM14

Congratz on your first OS..👏

and loved loved it dear Sumi..⭐️ Thanks Deep! 😃

superb OS and it didn't looked like you are writing for first time..
really such a b'ful story😃 b'fully written..👍🏼
and so cute and lovely..❤️

Madhu and Rk both POVs are too good..❤️

Madhu is getting married to Rk the superstar and Rk at first not liking this all but later he found his dreamgirl in Madhu..😉
he kissed her four times 😲 ☺️
in first meeting😛amazing 😆

and she not getting any clue what's happening but she fell in love with him..
truly said ..Love just happens..title awesome too..⭐️ Once again you found it. Yes I love a reader little more who appreciates the title 😆 Coz that's even more difficult to think for a story! Love you Deep 🤗U know how to make me smile 😃
medical terms ..thanks for them ..i didn't knew it .. Optical fibre..😃 Haha!

hey why not write some more on it ..there is lot more scope in this story ..

may be Deepali can create trouble in Rishbala wedding and something happening before marriage ..

write when ever you get time ..its just about one meeting na..think about it..if you feel like ..pls cont.it.😳

i am so late to read this but i am latest 😎 one of my forum friend used to say it and i like it too..

so finally i read it..
thanks for the unique and fresh story..🤗 Welcome buddy 😊

keep writing...keep shinning buddy.👍🏼 Hopefully! If you are with me, a loyal reader...then chances are there 🤗



Wow Deep you finally read the story! I am overwhelmed to read your response buddy!...Who is the friend who suggested this story?

Haha yeah you are the latest one 😆
Right there is more scope for this story...now my concentration is on completing 'Wanted' and OS for competition. So don't know. But will try definitely 😊 This story will always stay close to my heart ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vishuv

Wow Deep you finally read the story! I am overwhelmed to read your response buddy!...Who is the friend who suggested this story?

Haha yeah you are the latest one 😆
Right there is more scope for this story...now my concentration is on completing 'Wanted' and OS for competition. So don't know. But will try definitely 😊 This story will always stay close to my heart ❤️

Yeah dear finally read it most welcome ..😃and i was saying about the phrase my friend use to say when she came late in any of my or other posts..that "i am not late ..i am latest.." her name is Rasha and i used to call her student and she called me teacher..😳so lovely girl..now she left forum but i missed her very much..❤️
really its such a b'ful story ..⭐️ and ofcourse loved the title too..you choose awesome titles dear..
right .. first complete your other stories and than think about it ..👍🏼
best of luck buddy 👍🏼
sure i am with you ..🤗
but ya my comments and replies can be late..sometimes so bear it please.😆



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Posted: 9 years ago
Oho the teacher is missing her student cum friend Rasha! A very sweet girl it seems. Why did she leave the forum? Is she not active or shifted to other forum?
Yeah dear I will definitely give the thought of continuing...
Never mind late replies and all!
Thanks Deep!
RM14 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vishuv

Oho the teacher is missing her student cum friend Rasha! A very sweet girl it seems. Why did she leave the forum? Is she not active or shifted to other forum?

Yeah dear I will definitely give the thought of continuing...
Never mind late replies and all!
Thanks Deep!

She left the forum ..I don't know much..but ya missing her ..not active..o/w she would be in touch ..really so sweet ..😳
So sweet of you ..sure do try to cont.this b'ful work of yours..welcome dear.😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely OS
Loved the RK effect and Madhu's reaction!
So good it is!

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