Rishbala OS: Love just happens !!

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lovRishbala

@lovRishbala

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Res unres

Awesome os

Loved this innocent and cute madhu. And sexy and handsome R.k

It doesn't look that this is ur first os u r a very good writer .KEEP WRITING

And the concept was very good

If u ever think to continue it please pm

And thanks for pm😊

Edited by lovRishbala - 9 years ago

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rishbalafan9

@rishbalafan9

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Utterly cute os...cute madhu..in a fix to judge the kisses very natural instinct of a girl first kiss..and one and only rare species superstar rk...⭐️.it was sheer bliss to read the story..amazingly written...⭐️..keep up the good work...⭐️

Thanks for pm..

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-harini-

@-harini-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Very cute OS,Soumi:)
So he gets to marry his dream girl and she gets to marry her superstar :D Nice ! And it was fun to read :)
You can maybe be make this a two shot or three shot , how the relationship progresses till their wedding or so. But after your exams only :)
And instead of 'heart whelming' smile,'heart warming' will be better :)

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Ishu

@Pani.Puri

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

LIAR LIAR MB FORUM ON FIRE 🤣🤣🤣🤣 YES YES YES you are a Liar bcz looking at this OS doesn't looks like that this is your FIRST EVER OS 😳😳😳

W*F I thought that Madz is getting transferred to some other place when she said that her parents are finding her another house 🤣🤣 You cracked me up with that line 😆😆😆 O la la so a middle class simple beauty with brain is gonna get married to a superstar , well that will be shocking for anyone to hear 😆😆

🤣🤣🤣 Oh gosh this handsome man is quite Fast and Furious 😆😆 He tarted with the first kiss so fast that his wife was left bewildered on this sudden assault 😆😆😆 And the second kiss was 3 in one for late , good bye and for not responding 🤣🤣🤣 OHK I thought of something else that the 3 in 1 kiss was for their 3 future children - Maya , Arjun , Vibha by their superstar dad for their Mom 😳😳

🤣🤣🤣 I liked RKs Mom 😆😆 So she knew that his drama king son will create worst impression on the first meet with the brides family by arriving in style and that too late so she actually played her cards of telling the brides family that they will come by 12 🤣🤣 Smart Mom (I think she drinks Bournvita bcz 🤣🤣)

OHK so the families knew each other since their kids childhood and RK has seen Madz in her dream . Ahaan that is why he felt familiar when he entered in their premises . I remember one of the Shakespear's sonnet form The Tempest - Hear my soul pseak , Of the very instant I saw you , Did my heart fly at your service 😳😳

It was a superb and a romantiliciius OS 😳😳😳 . Keep it up Dear 😳😳

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Sana

@luvvivian286

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Awesome os

Cute and beautiful

Loves it

Thanks for the pm

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ananya2010

@ananya2010

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Love just happened to me with this story. Beautiful OS, loved it, loved their POVs.

Congrats on your first OS, do keep writing more. Would love to read them.

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samidsamid

@samidsamid

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

awsm os. ..rk is fastforword honeymoon bhi plan ker liya. .

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Å½eljka StojanoviÄ‡

@zelja89

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Simply loved, awesome OS 😊

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HappySoul-4va

@HappySoul-4va

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

hey girl..thats just awesome so..an OS that too the cutes, naughtiest nah nah hottest...

loved both their pOV's , she is such a beauty that even th THE RK fell for her irresistable charm , also he is a charmer he knows and confident enough that nay girl will fallfor him., hotyy he is lol

So,Madhu's salt ion coffee idea is superb..hmmm shoudl try that lol

and then loved hsi stare game lol he is such a tease and as expcted he kissed her seriously this passionate RK , ufff wish such scenes were there in MB lol...MB2 was way worst in romantic scenes and instead showed some RAP$ scene 😡😡😡

enough of my rant on MB2, so now comes his POV lol she knwocked him down on firt look itself , poor soul is not gettign enough of the kisses ROFL...they are crazy and so are we

Thanks for thsi amazing OS and keep writign more...infact you an make this a story, it would be beautiful to see their journey

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manna43

@manna43

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#20

Loved this os.So cute n lovely update.Love just happens when they met.Naughty rk n arrogant rk n shocked n blushing Madhu.Write more dear.U r an awesome writer.

Thanks for pm.

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