SANGINI/RAGSAN FF: Kuch toh hain Rabta C10 Pg 12 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: foresight

beautiful part...loved their care and bonding for each other...wonder how the wedding will stop...also wonder when they look at the kundali will they look at sanskar and find that it is perfect match...then what...😉 😃 😃 ...waiting for your next update...amazing ketki 👏

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ck1234

Too cute...Sanky...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soumya.D.

Amazing updt continue soon ..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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ch-12?????? when will u update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 10

Ragini Sanskarke sath neeche aati hain. Sujata unhe dekhti hain,"Ye kya Sanskar itna bandhanke kaha jaa raha hain tu?" Sanskar Raginika hath pakadkar,"Main ghumne jaa raha hu dostke sath hain na dost?" Ragini uska hath chodti hain,"Ji...ji wo Chachiji wo bas hum aisehi Sanskarko leke mandir jaa rahe the... hum jaye?"

Sujata : Haa jao beta, lekin akeli isse lekar mat jana, tumhare sath Ramu kaka bhi aayenge, agar isse kuch hua to tum akeli nahi sambhal paogi isse. Sujata Ramu Kakako RAGSANke sath bhejte hain. Waha Annapurnaka phone aata hain wo Sujata ko GF MM aaneke bareme batati hain. Sujata phone rakhkar,"Tabhi me sochu iss choriko apne ghar nahi jana tha ke... achha hua lekin ab Sanskar shant to rahega". Wo kamme lag jati hain.

Ragini Sanskarke sath Mandir aati hain. Mandirme wo bhagwanke samne hath jodti hain,"Hum kya kare bhagwanji? Apne pariwarwalonko kaise bataye ki ye shadi hum nahi kar sakte. Kaise bataye apne pariwarwalonko ki Laksh humse pyar nahi karte wo Swarase pyar karte hain aur usise shadi karna chahte hain. Bhagwanji aap jante hain, dadaji dadine abhi abhi papase bat karni shuru ki hain, maa aur Swarako unlogone abhi tak apnaya nahi hain aur aiseme agar unho pata chala ki Swaraki wajahse humari shadi tut rahi hain to gharme tufan aayega, aur hum ye bhi jante hain ki Swara kabhi Lakshka pyar nahi apnayegi wo bhi humare wajahse, lekin ye bhi utnahi sach hain agar Lakshne humse shadi ki to na hum unke sath khush reh payenge aur na wo humare sath... aise me hum kya kare bhagwanji? Hume sahi raah dikhayiye bhagwanji...hume kuch samajme nahi aa raha..."uske aankhose pani aata hain. Sanskar usse awaj deta hain,"Dost... dost kitni der khadi ho, chalo na waha gardenme jake khelte hain". Ragini aankhe kholkar pochti hain. "Dost tum ro kyu rahi ho?"

Ragini : Are nahi hum ro nahi rahe, wo to bas humari aankhme kuch chala gaya hoga. Achha tum batao kya keh rahe the?

Sanskar : Ruko dost, tumhari aankhme kuch chala gaya hain na ek minute haa... wo apne pocketme kuch dhundhta hain... Kaha gaya yar... yahi pe rakha tha...

Ragini : Kya dhundh rahe ho Sanskar?

Sanskar : Ruko na dost... haa mil gaya... wo pocketse hanky nikalta hain,, Dost tum apni aankhe aisi thodi neeche karo me phuu karta hu... Ragini same karti hain Sanskar dheerese blow karta hain. Ragini uske taraf dekhti hain. UsseSanskarka itna karib aana ajib lagta hain. Wo turant chehra ghumati hain. Kya hua dost?

Ragini : Kuch... kuch nahi... aankhme jo chala gaya tha wo nikal gaya... achha Sanskar ek bat batao tum mujhe dost dost kyu bulate ho?

Sanskar : Kyuki tum meri dost ho... wo hasta hain, Kya dost tum kaisa sawal puch rahi ho...

Ragini : Are tum bhi to mere dost ho par me to tumhe names bulati hu na to tum bhi mujhe names bulao na...

Sanskar : Haan ye sahi hain par mujhe to tumhara nam patahi nahi hain... wo bachhonki tarah muh banata hain.

Ragini : Me batati hu na. Mera nam Ragini hain. Tum mujhe abhise Ragini bulaoge... thik hain?

Sanskar : Haa thik hain me tumhe Ragini dost bulaunga...

Ragini : Ragini dost nahi sirf Ragini...

Sanskar : Ok... me tumhe sirf Ragini bulaunga... dono shake hand karte hain.

At MM

Sari GF MM aate hain. DP, AP aur puri MF unka swagat karti hain. Dadi Raginiko dhundhti hain. Sujata unhe batati hain ki RAGSAN bahar gaye hain. Ye sunkar dadi gussa ho jati hain. Annapurna Lakshko neeche bulati hain. Laksh Swara ek dusre ke taraf dekhte hain. Thodi derme RAGSANbhi waha aate hain. Dadi gussese Raginike taraf dekhti hain. Ragini sabke per chukar Sharmishthake pass aakar bethati hain. Sanskarbhi Raginike jaise sabke per chuta hain except DP. Jab Sanskar dadike pass aata hain tab wo apne per peeche karti hain. Ragini ye bat dekhti hain par wo kuch bolti nahi. Sanskar aur neeche jhukkar dadike per pakadta hain. Dadi chillakar,"Ae chore kya kar raha hain tu?" Sanskar gussese dadiki taraf dekhkar,"toh me aapke per chu raha than a to aapne per peeche kyu liye isliye maine per khiche..." Sab log haste hain... DP Sujatake taraf dekhta hain. Sujata turant Sanskarko uske roomme janeko kehti hain. Raginiko ye bat achhi nahi lagti par wo kuch kar nahi pati. Sanskar Raginike taraf dekhta hain,"Dost me abhi jaa raha hu, tum bhi aaao na".

Ragini : Sanskar, me thodi der bad aaungi abhi tum jao... Sanskar wahase jata hain.

Swara Raginike pass aati hain,"Ragini mujhe... mujhe tumse bat karni hain..."

Ragini : Swara, abhi hume aapse koi baat nahi karni.

Swara : Ragini please...

Ragini : Swara... Swara muh banati hain. Ragini usse mana nahi kar pati. Wo Sharmishthake taraf dekhti hain, Maa hume aur Swarako kuch jaruri baat karni hain par yahase kaise hum jaye?

Sharmishtha : Ragu beta, bat to tum dono ghar jake bhi kar sakti ho na abhi yahape impossible hain.

Swara : Maa please kuch solution batayiye na...

Annapurna : Sharmishthaji, kya bat hain koi samsya hain?

Sharmishtha : Ji nahi wo bachhe puch rahe the ki panditjiko aaneme kitna samay hain? Darsal Raginiko uski dostka jaruri phone aanewala tha lekin uski phone ki battery khatam hui to wo Swarake phone pe call karnewali hain.

Annapurna : Are itnisi bat hain na, jao Ragini beta apne dostse bat karo, Panditjiko aaneme abhi 15-20 minute hain. Ragini aur Swara bahar lawnme jate hain.

Swara : Ragini please mujhse ek bar bat to karo, aur ye kya subahse kaha gayab thi tum? Pata hain mujhe kitni phikar ho rahi thi tumhari...

Ragini : Agar sachem fikar hoti to tum aise behave nahi karti Swara...

Swara : Ragini please mera yakin mano, tum jaise samaj rahi ho waisa kuch nahi hain.

Ragini : Achha to Lakshne jo hume bataya wo galat hain Swara? Aur jo humne apne kanose suna wo bhi galat tha?

Swara : Ragini wo sirf aadha sach tha. Mera yakin mano me Lakshse pyar nahi karti. Wo tumhara mangetar hain Ragini. Wo meri behenka mangetar hain. Me usse pyar kaise kar sakti hu? Ye galat hain.

Ragini : Laksh bhi humse pyar nahi karte Swara, wo tumse pyar karte hain.

Swara : Par me nahi karti usse pyar... wo ladka achha nahi hain, wo rat rat bhar dostonke sath ghumta hain, masti karta hain, usse horse riding pasand hain aur mujhe ghodepe bithna tak pasand nahi hain. Humare likes bahot alag hain Ragini, aur sabse badi bat wo tumhara mangetar hain, hum aaj yaha tum donoke shadika muhurat niklwane aaye hain...

Ragini : Swara, jo bate mujhe pata honi chahiye wo tumhe pata hain aur tum bol rahi ho tumhe unse pyar nahi... achha ek bat bata agar wo mere mangetar nahi hote to... kyat u Lakshko apnati?

Swara : Ragini, bate isliye pata hain kyuki mujhe dostone batayi hain...

Ragini : Mere dusre sawal ka jawab do Swara... Agar Laksh mere mangetar nahi hote to tum unhe apnati?

Swara : Ragini... ye tum kya bol rahi ho??? Aisa nahi ho sakta... ye galat hain.

Ragini : Sahi aur galat ka faisla tum kyu kar rahi ho Swara? Mujhe sirf haa ya na batao, jab bhi me tumhe tumhare prince charming ke expectations puchti thi tab tum bilkul waise batati thi jaise Lakshme wo sare gun hain... to tumhe nahi lagta Swara ki Laksh mujhse jyada tumhe suit karte hain... Dekho Swara me manti hu tum apni faisla nahi le sakti par kamse kam sach to bolhi sakti ho na... batao agar Laksh mere mangetar nahi hote to kya tum unhe apnati???

Swara : Ragini... Me abhi... tabhi unhe Sharmishtha ki awaj aati hain..

Sharmishtha : Ragu... Shona... ye tum log kya bol rahe ho... SWARAGINI shock hokar peeche dekhti hain.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
i really liked how this ragini is so resolved suljhi hui in her thought process. the way she handled it was really good. no point in destroying everyone's life...you have still kept a tight lid on the suspense...how did ragsan happen instead...waiting for it :) beautiful update and dialogues as always
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
nice update... give more RagSan scene...

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