Ratri fs: Ek duje ke liye; part 3 page 4, last part updated page 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

such an emotional update

I really hope bikram is saved
just love the team bonding. trisha worried for raghav and bikram.
update soon


thanks dear. next part shows how responsible, caring and mature person is our own trisha. she can handle any adverse situation, also the extent to which she understands raghav and that he totally depends on her and has full trust on her.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nymphadora12

Great update! A great timeline too! Do update soon!😊


sure i'll try to update soon. thanks. waiting for your next update. please do it soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tasha1994

Such an awesome update trisha was really scared when Raghav was about to get shot .hope bikram is saved soon thanks a lot for this awesome update


thanks alot dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART II

Raghav and Trisha have come to the hospital with Bikram...

Raghav: "doctor... doctor... please kuch kijiye. . Ise goli lagi hai... ise bacha lijiye doctor... please do something doctor " Raghav said to the doctor.

Doctor: "ye to police case hai. Hume police ko inform karna padega".

Trisha: "doctor we all are cbi officers (showing her cbi badge to the doctor). This has happened during an encounter with a criminal. Please aap inka ilaaj shuru kijiye main saari formalities tab tak poori kar deti hoon". Trisha decided to handle the situation herself as she realised Raghav was not in that situation at present.

Doctor: "aap medicolegal paper work aur admission ki formalities poori kar lijiye. Hum inka treatment start kar dete hain. Hope you understand. Hume immediately inka operation karna padega. Khoon bahut beh chukka hai,his condition is very critical. Aapko blood bank jake blood ka bhi arrangement karna hoga".

Trisha: "sure doctor. Aap bata dijiye kitna blood chahiye. We'll arrange it asap".

Trisha came to Raghav who was standing in a corner looking outside the window, shocked and very angry for whatever happened. Trisha placed her hand on his shoulder and said to him.

Trisha: "Raghav tum bilkul chinta mat karo. Bikram ko kuch nahi hoga. Sab theek ho jayega. Tum... tum yahan aakar baitho (she pulled his hand slightly and made him sit on a nearby couch). Main bas abhi kuch der me admission formalities poori karke aati hoon. Ok... you take care. I'll just be back soon".

Trisha completed all the admission and the legal formalities. By that time Rajbir also arrived to the hospital. Both of them donated blood in the hospital blood bank as was advised by the doctor. Bikram was soon taken inside the operation theatre.

Trisha: "Rajbir mujhe lagta hai hume Bikram ki family ko inform kar dena chahiye. Tum kya kehte ho".

Rajbir: "even I feel the same. Agar humne inform nahi kiya aur god forbid use kuch ho gaya to hum uske ghar walo ko kya jawaab denge?"

Trisha: "you are right. Tum unhe call karke bata do. Tab tak main Raghav ke paas jaati hoon. He does not seem to be alright. Use lag raha hai ki yeh sab uski wajah se hua hai. He is blaming himself for everything. Mujhe uske paas jana hoga".

Rajbir: "aisa kaha usne?"

Trisha: "oh come on Rajbir. Har baat boli nahi jati. Tumne uski haalat nahi dekhi thi jab Bikram ko goli lagi thi. Koi bhi use dekh kar bata dega ki uske andar kya chal raha hai."

Rajbir: "sorry boss. Main ek kaam karta hu Bikram ki family ko inform kar deta hu aur medicines jo doctor ne prescribe ki hain wo le aata hu. Aap Raghav ke saath raho".

Trisha: ok

Trisha came back to Raghav and saw him engrossed in his thoughts. He seemed to be really struggling inside. She decided that she is the one who will have to do something. Otherwise Raghav will go into severe depression for his entire life. He was already talking about leaving cbi in the morning. After that he had to go through this stressful day and in the end Bikram got shot while saving him. He was already blaming himself for everything that happened. She knew how important it was for him to catch hold of his dad's murderer. He almost got him but that pervert escaped at the last minute. On the top of it, he disguised himself as the chief and now chief is also missing. No one knows where he is... Bikram is struggling for his life in the hospital. What a prolonged and exhausting, stressful day it has been for the entire team. She thought that she needs to talk to Raghav immediately. He needs her today right now. Or else it might be too late. She knew that only she is the one jisse Raghav apne dil ki baat bata sakta hai, only if she is able to make him speak up. He had just become so quiet after the incident. Trisha came up to Raghav and sat close to him. Rajbir got the prescribed medicines and after that Trisha said to Rajbir

Trisha: "Rajbir bahut raat ho gayi hai. Ek kaam karo tum aur Raghav ghar chale jaao, main yahan ruk jati hu" (though she knew very well that Raghav will never agree to this).

Rajbir: "what are you saying Trisha? Tum Raghav ko lekar ghar jaao, I think he needs rest. Main yahan rukta hu".

Raghav: "main Bikram ko chhodkar kahin nahi jaane wala. Samjhe tum dono". Raghav said angrily as he just could not think of leaving Bikram alone.

Trisha: "ok Raghav don't be angry. As you wish. Rajbir tum ghar chale jaao. Main iske saath yahan hu...ok" (she signalled Rajbir to leave and he agreed and after some time left the hospital)

Thats it in this part. All reviews are most welcome. Thanks

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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you soo much for the update off to read it will
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Short but a wonderful update
I am amazed by Trisha's presence of mind. How maturely she handled the situation
Poor Raghav he has gone through so much in just one day it had been too hectic for him. So much of thing happening around cheif's missing, bikram's shootout and top of that once again he missed the chance to catch the joker. Trisha understands Raghav so well. As she said it's not necessary to say everything eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Short but a wonderful update

I am amazed by Trisha's presence of mind. How maturely she handled the situation
Poor Raghav he has gone through so much in just one day it had been too hectic for him. So much of thing happening around cheif's missing, bikram's shootout and top of that once again he missed the chance to catch the joker. Trisha understands Raghav so well. As she said it's not necessary to say everything eagerly waiting for next part



Thanks for liking the update. Yes Trisha is a very mature person. We have always seen her as the one who is the most practical and rules book following girl. Also she knows the gravity of situation. The most important factor is that whenever raghav is involved, she'll do anything and to whatever extent. That's our very own Trisha.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update. First of all the the character of Trisha is well shown. She is the leader of the entire team and has responsibility of each member. She shows her presence of mind very nicely. Raghav needs her support very much at this point. Raghav is completely broken from heart and only Trisha could join his broken pieces of heart. Hope Bikram will be all right in next update and Raghav will not blame himself for it.😊 please update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: 1973deepak

Wonderful update. First of all the the character of Trisha is well shown. She is the leader of the entire team and has responsibility of each member. She shows her presence of mind very nicely. Raghav needs her support very much at this point. Raghav is completely broken from heart and only Trisha could join his broken pieces of heart. Hope Bikram will be all right in next update and Raghav will not blame himself for it.😊 please update next part soon



Ya Trisha is a very sensible and responsible lady. She very well knows her team, their strengths and weaknesses. She understands the situation in which raghav is at present. For an emotional person like him who has been a victim to brutality since childhood, he is expected to show this type of reaction. He may develop any kind of psychological disturbances in future. Trisha understands this very well, that's why she decided to take the initiative.
Thanks for liking the update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful update👏
Trisha analysing and working on the same is what makes her a great team leader.
Raghav worrying for bikram is not only because he saved his life but because of him losing another person who is close to him.
The emotions were very well put.
Trisha understanding and caring for raghav shows that there is so much more than friendship and support out there.
Understanding the gravity of the situation, you have really penned it out beautifully!
do update soon!

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