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|| Yeh Hai Mohabbatein ||

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~ Chapter 1 ~


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It was rainy night, Ishita was standing near to the window, she was looking nowhere but staring outside, she recalled some moments when suddenly a huge thunder clapped bringing her back to the reality, Ishita wiped her tears and looked at sleeping Ruhi, her face beamed with a smile seeing her daughter's innocent face, she recalled something and left from there.

Ishita waste standing on the terrace, Rudy's smiling face was appearing in her mind, she sighed deeply and dialed a number.

"Hello?"

"I want to meet with you right now." She sternly said.

"Okay. I am coming."

"I'm waiting on terrace."

_0_0_

Ishita was standing under the rain, she was drenched completely when she heard his footsteps, she turned at the door and saw him coming towards him.

"You called me? Is everything alright? Ruhi? Is she fine?" He asked concern.

"Yes. Everything is fine."

"Then? Okay. First let's go inside, you're drenched." He was going to hold her hand when she pulled back her hand. "I am sorry." He apologized.

"I am ready..."

"Ready? Ready for what? I don't get you." He asked confuse.

"I am ready to marry you. But... But I have some conditions." She said looking straight into his eyes.

"Like?"

"We'll marry for Ruhi's sake. You'll be called only her father nothing else. Neither you'll try to show any authorities on me nor me!! Behind four walls we'll be unknown to each other and most important you'll never try to cross any of your limits. Mark my words, I'll never love you nor I will refer you as my husband. I only loved and will love Subhhu." She ended.

"Anything else?" He asked and continued, "If you wouldn't tell me all this then also I won't try to cross any of my limits. I too wanted to marry you just for Ruhi, I don't know why but I felt a connection with her and I only wants to give her father's love that's all." Ishita nodded.

"Why did fate played this cruel game with me?" She cried, he wanted to sooth her pain, he was going to placed his hand on her shoulder but stopped, "Don't cry Ishita. I don't know how much I can, but I will try to fulfill Ruhi's all wishes, she'll be my daughter - Raman Bhalla's daughter Ruhi Raman Bhalla."

Ishita smiled seeing Raman's love for Ruhi, she smiled slightly, "Thank you."

"Go inside.. Ruhi might be alone. If she woke up and doesn't find you then will get afraid. Go!!" Raman said and they turned to their respective ways.

Raman remained there, his eyes were filled with tears though they weren't visible in rain but his eyes were red. Raman looked at Ishita going and remembered something and hit his hand on the wall hard, he gets injured... Raman looked up and shut his eyes tightly to let the tears comes out..

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I hope you like it. I already wrote first part, soon I'll post it. Please drop your comments.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nycc teaser ritika
continue soon
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Nyc one
so ruhi is ishita's daughter
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Is Ruhi Ishita's and Subbu's daughter. Its a complicated start. Any past of Raman; Ishita is teary that I can understand what about Raman.
Will wait for update
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continue soon. a very emotional teaser. raman's heart is pricked seeing ishita's pain
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Originally posted by: akriti154

Nycc teaser ritika
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

Thank u dear
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Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Nyc one

so ruhi is ishita's daughter

Thanks and keep reading.
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Originally posted by: sririt

Is Ruhi Ishita's and Subbu's daughter. Its a complicated start. Any past of Raman; Ishita is teary that I can understand what about Raman.

Will wait for update

Yes Raman has a past, it will reveal after two updates may be!! So keep reading.
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Originally posted by: sheejarjn

continue soon. a very emotional teaser. raman's heart is pricked seeing ishita's pain

Yes,he is in pain too!!

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