TanShi OS: YOU ARE MINE[Complete] [UPDATED PG 6]

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Hello everyone..

This is my new creation on TANSHI [KRSHA]

HOPE YOU ALL LIKE IT...😳

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Tanu is going towards her room in angry mood.. Rishi is following her...

Tanu please ...please listen me at once ..i have no wrong intention there...wo toh bas !!! rishi is trying to explain his point of view to her..

Tanu turned.. Woh toh bas kya rishi...you always say na that you love me a lot .. n there you are flirting with neha.. what's that?? Bolo rishi... sometimes I thought you are flirting with me too..

Its nothing like that tanu.. you know me very well I can't think of any other girl without you... it was neha who is flirting with me.. Rishi explained..

Tanu interrupts.. Enough rishi... Stop blaming my sister for it.. she is so innocent.. I know her..

No you don't tanu.. you don't know her..please belive me.. rishi is trying to convince tanu..but tanu is not listening to him..

Tanu goes into her room n locked the door... rishi is still standing outside her room.. tanu yaar please .. please belive me .. m not cheating you..

Rishi please go from here... I wanna stay alone... please leave.. tanu replied

Rishi leaves... tanu is very sad at that moment..

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Neha n baani is watching all this by standing behind the wall..

Oh wow.. finally we create a misunderstanding between them.. I think its time to execute the next step of our plan.. neha has a strange smile on her face..

Poor tanu.. she don't even know what is going to happen with her.. tanu tumne rishi se engagement toh kar li par marriage main kabhi bhi hone nhi dungi.. baani smiles..

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At night...

Tanu is standing near the window in looking at the moon.. chaand tu hi bta .. rishi kya sach mein mujhse pyar nhi krta.. kya meri kismet mein uska sath nhi likha.. par tut oh janta hai na ki maine bachpan se sirf rishi se hi pyaar kiya hai ..or uske bina nhi ji skti.. tanu's eyes filled up with tears..

Tanu's phone rings.. its rishi's call ..tanu ignored.. rishi is calling her continuously..

Rishi is getting very desperate to talk with tanu... manjeet enters rishi's room..what happened bhai??? You are looking very tensed..

Nothing chhote... I wanna stay alone for sometime please... rishi ignored manjeet..

No bhai I know there is something that is killing you.. tell me please ..i can't see you in this condition... manjeet continue ..

Chhote please... Rishi requested him...

No please bhai.. you have to tell me... as I know you are very happy yesterday after your engagement with tanu.. so what happened today..are you not satisfied with your engagement... bhai you you don't want to marry tanu I'll talk to mom-dad about that..

No chhote its nothing like that .. I love tanu n wanna marry with her.. but that chipku chachi n her daughter neha are creating misunderstandings between us.. I don't know how to overcome this situation tanu is very upset with me.. rishi explained the whole thing to manjeet...

Oh!! Toh ye baat hai.. chipku chichi or neha ye nhi chachte ki aapki shaadi tanu se ho.. wo jalte hain tanu se... par aap fikar mat kro main unko kabhi kamayb nhi hone dunga.. I have a paln to expose chachi n neha in front of tanu.. majeet tell the plan to rishi..

Wow chhote what a plan... But do you think ahana will help us in this..

She have to help bhai.. akhir uski tanu di ki zindagi ka swaal hai.. I'll talk to her.. now aap so jao kal humein bahut kaam karna hai.. majeet leaves the room..

Rishi lies on the bed ... he tries to sleep but tanu's thoughts has taken up his mind.. he is thinking about tanu..

N there tanu is too thinking about rishi..tanu is fearing of losing her love..

Both are getting desperate...

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'''Teri yaad mein pagal pal pal rota hai...

Bin tere na jage ye na sota hai..

Aksar tanhai mein tujhe pukare..

Na zor dil pe chale..

Haare haare hare..

Hum toh dil se haare...'''

"""Ab jaane hum .. yeh pyar kya hai..

Dard-e-jigar .. mushkil bada hai..

Suntaa nhi.. kehna koi bhi..

Dil bekhabar.. zidd pe adda hai..

Samjhaun kaise isse jaane jaan...

Hare hare hare ...

Hum toh dil se hare.."""

"""Haar iiana.. tuta lage hai..

Sach bhi hume.. jhoota lage hai..

Jaane kahan.. hum aa gye hain..

Sara jahan.. rootha lage hai..

Kya dard dil ne diya..kya kahen..

Haare hare haare..

Hum toh dil se haare.."""

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To be continued...

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Thnxx dear... 😊
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Thnkuu 😊
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amazing dear.. 👏 do write more.. loved it!
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Originally posted by: KratikaSengarKS

amazing dear..👏do write more.. loved it!


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kamal superb awesome love it do more n cont it if possible pm me please
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Originally posted by: --HANSA--

kamal superb awesome love it do more n cont it if possible pm me please


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YOU ARE MINE #2

Next day...

Ahana enters tanu's room.. di are you ready ??? everyone is waiting for you there...

Tanu turned.. m ready... she replied..

Wooww di.. you are looking stunning...rishi jiju will surely get mad seeing you .. ahana smiles n hugged tanu.. Tanu blushes..

Both comes in the hall.. everyone is there waiting for them..

Beautiful... Manpreet said..

Rishi lightly hits on his head.. bhabhi hai teri.😉. rishi gives a big smile to tanu..

Tanu too smiles ..😳

Raj moves towards tanu.. n cupped her face by his hands.. nazar na lag jaye kisi ki meri bahu ko.. 😊

Tanu touches his feet.. god bless you always.. raj said

Sabhi aa gye hain toh chale... kahin humari party mein hum hi late na ho jaye.. biji said to all.

N all moved outside in the parking..

Rishi comes closer to tanu n holds her hand.. tanu looks at him.

M soory tanu.. I didn't meant to hurt you..rishi explained himself

I know rishi n now please I don't want to talk about that topic.. tanu answered..

N then they leave to the party hall..

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They all have a warm welcome there...

Raj n rano start introducing their bahu to everyone in the party...

Rishi tries to talk to tanu .. but tanu is alongwith raj n rano ...s o she didn't reacted even after noticing rishi..

Bhai !! should we start our plan now?? Manpreet asked to rishi..

Chhote firstly you have to do a favour for me.. rishi said.. n whispered something in his ear..

Manpreet smiles n said itni si baat bhai.. I'll do it for sure..

Manpreet leaves..

Suddenly the lights of hall are turned off.. there is darkness in the hall..

Then a one of the light is turned on focusing on manpreet...

Helloo everyone... as you all know we are gathered here for the celebration of the engagement of my lovely brother rishi.. we aren't able to organize this party on the day of engagement because of some family issue.. but now we are here to join my brother rishi's happiness..

The party seems so boring without music n dance.. so I want my bhai n bhabhi to come here n dance together.. manpreet announces

Biji holds tanu's hand n take her to rishi... n rest her hand in rishi's hand..

Rishi n tanu comes in the centre of hall... N did a romantic couple dance..

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BG music:

Mere hath mein tera hath ho...

Sari jannatein mere sath ho..

Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...

Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...

Mere hath mein tera hath ho...

Sari jannatein mere sath ho..

Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...

Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...

...tere dil mein meri ason ko panah mil jaye...

...tere ishq mein meri jaan fanna ho jaye...

Jitne paas hai khushboo saans ke...

Jitne paas honto ke sargam..

Jise sath hai karwat yaad ke...

Jaise sath bahon ke sangam...

Jintne pass pass khawabon ke nazar..

Utne pass tu rehna humsafar...

Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...

Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...

Mere hath mein tera hath ho...

Sari jannatein mere sath ho..

Tu jo paas ho fir kya ye jahan...

Tere pyar mein ho jaun fanna...

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The dance ends n everyone appreciates tanu n rishi...

Manpreet goes towards ahana n said slowly... I wanna talk to you pleae its urgent can we meet in the garden outside...

Oye flirtbaaz ab kaun sa naya drama kar rha hai.. m not coming.. ahana replied..

Dekho please tumhari di ke relation ka sawal hai... you have to come.. manpreet leaves to the garden...

Ahana too followed him... swati noticed going them outside.. n follows them

Manpreet explains the whole thing that how chichi n neha want to break the engagement of tanu n rishi to ahana..

Ahana is just shocked to listen that... uss neha ka toh main muh tod dungi... how she dares to do that..

Ahana tries to go inside the hall n talk to neha but manpreet stops her... please don't do something now .. we have a plan n we need yor help in that..

Rishi too joins them in garden... rishi n manpreet tells the whole plan to ahana n ahana agrees with them..

I don't let chachi n neha to spoils my di's life .. ahana said..

Swati listens everything they talk.. if they will do so... mom n neha will caught in a big problem.. I have to tell everything to mom.. swati leaves

Mom there is a very big problem... said swati to baani.. neha is too there..

What happened swati??? Asked baani curiously

Swati tell them their whole plan ...

Oh!!!! Toh yeh baat hai... don't worry hum unhe unke hi jaal mein fasaenge.. baani hun main baani hai ki nai.. bani smiles..

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After the party ends.. all comes in the parking lounge ..

Neha is about to sit in the car n ahan stops her...

Neha will you do me a favour please ... wo atn di ki dress ka jo order diya tha mehndi ke liye unka call aya tha ki dress ready hai... jiju apni dress laine wahi ja rhe hain or unko nhi pta ki di ki dress kaisi hai.. tumhe pta hai kyunki uss din tum bhi humare sath thi.. so kyat um unke sath chali jaogi.. actually mujhe ghr mein kuch kaam hai nhi toh main hi chali jati... ahana said

Yeah yeah ..why not.. neha answered n went alongwith rishi..

Strange.. issne koi natak hi nhi kiya.. chalo acha hai.. ahana thinks.. n leaves..

Poor ahana.. she don't even thimks what will happen with her di... neha thinks...

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TO BE CONTINUED...
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I THOUGHT IT TO BE ONE SHOT BUT CAN'T ABLE TO END THE STORY SO SOON... SO IT WILL BE OF 3 OR 4 SHOTS.. HOPE ITS OK WITH YOU ALL..

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