TanShi OS: YOU ARE MINE[Complete] [UPDATED PG 6] - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow your story is super amazing
Totally loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ksfandishi

Wow your story is super amazing

Totally loved it


Thnxx.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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YOU ARE MINE #3

Rishi n neha comes back to home..neha gets down from the car n she has a strange smile on her face...

She started walking towards the house... she enters the room n start running n has tears in her eyes..

She entered tanu's room n start crying...

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Here rishi is searching something in the car.. he is looking very tensed..

Manpreet saw neha walking towards tanu's room... n come outside to join rishi..

Hey bro kaam ho gya kya??? Maine dekha abhi neha ko bhabhi ke room mein jaate hue.. shayad ro rhi thi.. manpreet said

What??? Ab kya drama krne wali hai wo.. rishi asked in tension

Hum yahi toh chahte the na bhai... ki wo drama kre or hum uski sachai sabke samne laye.. manpreet said

Haan chhote lekin jis camera mein uski saari batein record hui hain mujhe wo camera nhi mil rha.. rishi replied

Means jo bhi usne aapse car mein baate ki wo record nhi hui?? Manpreet said in tension..

Record toh hui thi chhote .. maine camera acche se check bhi kiya tha.. par ab wo nhi mil rha hai.. rishi is looking very tensed..his eyes just filled up..chhote .. not this time now.. I dun wanna loose tanu.. I can't live without her ... rishi is in tears..

Dun worry bhai.. we will do something .. don't cry please.. manpreet hugged rishi tightly..

Something then strucked in manpreet's mind.. he called aahana n tell her the whole thing n asked to to something..

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In tanu's room

After seeing neha in tears... tanu asked .. what happened neha?? Why are you crying..please tell me what happened

Neha is just crying... she didn't said a word..

Neha please ... your silence is killing me please tell me what happened.. tanu continues to ask...

Tanu woh rishi.. neha started speaking..

Rishi.. rishi kya neha??? Tanu is getting desperate to know

Tanu uss rishi pe bharosa mat kro.. woh... woh tumhe dokha de rha hai.. he is a bloody cheater.. usne mere sath... neha starts crying again..

Tanu takes few steps back .. tears are just at the point of coming out from her eyes..

Then aahana enters the room...

Stop crying you shameless girl... we are not believing in you crocodile tears.. aahana said very aggressively to neha.. tanu di please don't belive her .. she is just trying to break your trust on jiju.. ahana moves towards tanu...

Tanu is not listening to anyone.. she is moving back slowly.. her foot strikes a bag in the way n dhe is about to fall n ahana balanes her.. di are you alright.. please don't belive neha..ahana said

Tanu take a deep breath n runs outside the room..

Hey you.. stop crying now.. I know you very well n I know jiju didn't nothing wrong to you...ahana said to neha

Neha wipes her tears n smiles.. actually you are right .. usne toh mere sath aisa kuch kiya hi nhi..poor tanu.. she belives everything I said.. neha said

Ahana is looking very aggressively towards her..

Arey mujhe aisa mat dekho.. darr lagta hai tumhe aisa dekh ke.. neha starts laughing loudly..

Or tum logo ko kya laga tha?? Ki tm mujhe tanu ke samne expose kar doge car mein camera laga ke.. how fool you guys are ... you guys think everything is going according to your plan...but it was not so...everything goes accrding to my plan actually tum logo ka plan hume pehle se pta tha.. issiliye jab hum ghr pahunchne toh car se utarte waqt amine camera bhi nikal liya tha... n that dumb tanu belives everything I said... n that poor rishi.. wo toh tanu ko explain krta marr jayega par tanu uska belive nhi karegi n rishi se apni sagai todd degi... or phir main krungi rishi se shadi.. neha is explaining everything to ahana..

Ahana is standing silently..

Kya hua ??? bolti band ho gyi?? Oh sorry tum bologi bhi toh kya?? Tum dono ki life pet oh full stop lag gya hai.. jao dekho apni di ko.. bechari kahin khud ko kuch kar na le... neha said n leaves the room...

Aahana cluches her hands but controls her anger..

When neha leaves manpreet n rishi enters the room...

Bas ek baar tanu mera belive kar le.. iss neha ko toh main kisi bhi halt main nhi bakshunga.. rishi said in anger..

Jiju hume tanu di ko dhundna hoga ..wo neha ki baton se bahut tut chuki hain.. kahin wo sach mein kuch .. ahana is about to speak but rishi intrupted.. kuch nhi hoga meri tanu ko.. or ab hume koi bhi dur nhi kar skta.. ab neha ki sach sab ghar walo ke saamne aayega..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice sad for tanu how she easily she believe neha poor rishi i feel sad for him thx for updting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice. Please continue soon. The best part of your story is that TanShi are engaged.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: --HANSA--

nice sad for tanu how she easily she believe neha poor rishi i feel sad for him thx for updting


Dont worry only one part of story left..
N m sure that's a happy ending..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef

Very nice. Please continue soon. The best part of your story is that TanShi are engaged.


Thnxx 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely well written too love how ahana confront neha too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So well written loved it !
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YOU ARE MINE #4
M going to find tanu.. I know where can she go... Rishi asked to manpreet n ahana
Jiju we will too go with you.. Ahana said
No ahana firstly i have to talk with tanu.. Rishi answered n leaves the room
Ahana i think we should follow bhai.. He hasn't any proof regarding neha.. Manpreet said n ahana agreed..
Rishi enters in the temple.. Tanu is sitting in front of the statue of maa kali n crying on her fate
Main janta tha tum yahan hi aaogi.. Kali maa ne hi bachpan mein humari jodi bnayi thi aur aaj bhi humare rishte ko ye hi bachayengi.. Rishi said to tanu..
Tanu get up n tirns towards rishi.. Tum yahan kyu aaye ho rishi.. Mujhe tumse koi baat nhi krni pls jao yahan se.. Tanu said
Par mujhe tumse baat karni tanu n you have to listen me too.. Rishi hold tanu's hand.. Tanu please trust me yaar neha is lying.. Maine uske sath kuch nhi kiya.. She's a shameless girl..
Enough rishi.. Please go from here.. Neha ko galat kehne se pehle apni or dekho.. Tali ek hath se toh nhi bajti na.. So don't blame only neha for this.. Tanu said..
No tanu.. Its just a misunderstanding..i love you a lot n loves you always.. Rishi is clearing the fact..
Oh!! so you loves me.. So you can do anything for me.. tanu asked
Ofcourse tanu anthing.. Rishi answered
Then please just go from here.. Tanu said
But tanu.. Rishi said
Please go rishi.. Tanu pushes rishi slightly n turns
Rishi is completely broken.. He's crying n then he leaves.. Rishi is walking lifelessly in the centre of road..
Tanu too crying hard n sits down in front of kali maa..
Ahana n manpreet reached the temple.. Both saw tanu crying..
Di.. What happened.. N where is rishi.. Ahana put her hands on tanu's shoulder n makes her get up..
Bhabhi pls btao na bhai yahan aaye the kya??.. Manpreet asked
Wo chala gya.. Aur muje ab uske baare mein koi bhi baat nhi krni.. Tanu answered
Di aapko unki baat sunni chahiye thi.. Wo jo bhi keh rhe the sahi tha.. Jiju is not cheating you infact neha is cheating you.. Ahana cleared the fact..
Ji babhi ye dekhoye humare paas proof hai.. Jab aap apne room se bahar aa gyi thi toh neha ne sab kuch ahana ke samne bola tha or ahana ne sab phn mein record kar liya tha.. Manpreet plays the recording n tanu is just shocked to hear.. Tanu takes few steps back
Oh no.. It means rishi is right.. N i dont believe him.. I have to stop him.. Tanu runs out of the temple..
Hope sab theek ho jaye.. Manpreet said
Yes just hope.. Ahana replied
Tanu is running on the road finding rishi.. It starts raining.. Rishi is still walking on the road cursing his fate n a lots of thoughts just blowned his mind.. He has no sense of the world.. Even rain is not affecting him. He is walking lifelessly..
Tanu is running, crying, n searching rishi..
Finally he finds rishi walking on the road.. Tanu shouts ''Rishiii''.. Rishi stops n turns..
M sorry tanu.. M not able to gain your trust rishi said with teary eyes.
No rishi infact i m sorry.. M stupid that i didn't believe you.. Tanu is too in tears...
Suddenly tanu saw a car coming fastly towards rishi.. Rishi is standing in centre of the road.. The car is about to hit rishi.. Tanu runs n pushes rishi n car hits tanu.. The road is full of tanu's blood
Rishi rushes towards tanu n pic her n take her to hospital..
Tanu is in OT.. rishi is standing silently outside OT thinking about tanu.. His eyes caught up in tears..
Everyone comes in the hospital after hearing the news of tanu's accident..
Rishi runs n hugs biji tightly... Biji is too in tears.. Biji tanu meri wajah se iss halat mein.. Car toh mujhe hit krne wali thi na par tanu.. Rishi starts crying hard
Biji cuped rishi's face in her hands n said.. teri kismat hai tanu.. Teri har musibat wo apne upar lae leti hai.. Maa kali uski rakhsha karengi.. Usse kuch nhi hoga.. Tu fikar mat kar. Biji hugged rishi..
Then rishi saw neha n baani coming towards him.. Stay away from us.. Just go from here.. Tanu is in this condition just because of you both.. How disgusting relatives you are.. JUst leave.. Rishi said aggresively..
Rishi beta ye tum kya keh rhe ho.. Raj asked to rishi..
Bhai bilkul sahi keh rhe hain dad.. Sab inki wajah se hua hai.. Manpreet answered n explains the whole thing also he played the recording.. All the just shocked..
Biji goes towards neha n slaps her hard.. Just go from here n never dare to come in front of us.. Neha n baani leaves..
I dont even think that thay goes to such extent in the greed of money.. Raj said..
Doctor comes outside the OT.. Rishi runs towards her asked.. hows my tanu doctor?? Is she alright??
No need to worry she's out of danger now.. But still she's unconscious.. DOctor replied..
Rishi takes a deep breath.. Can i go inside..?? Rishi asked
Yes you can.. Doctor answered
Rishi goes inside.. Tanu is lying unconsciously on the bed.. Rishi goes close to her n sits beside her.. Rishi holds tanu's hand n kissed her gently.. He caresed tanu head.. Tanu m sorry.. M always the reason for you getting hurt.. Now i promise i'll never leave you.. Rishi said with tears eyes..
Tanu gains consciousness n holds rishi's hand tightly.. Shh. Stop rishi.. I kbow the truth now.. You did nothing wrong...infact m sorry.. Rishi shuts her mouth n hugs her tightly n said i love you tanu.. I love you a lot ❤️
Tanu hugged him back.. I love you too ❤️
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Happy ending... 😳
Edited by _Kamal_ - 9 years ago

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