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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 20

Viren finally decided to confess his feelings to Geet knowing that she was in love with Maan and would never think of him in that way
He has decided to go away as he doesnt want to lose his friendship with Geet

He told Geet that Maan also was in love with her but Maan's reactions have confused her further
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CHAPTER 21. I LOVE HER! I LOVE HER NOT!

 

 

 

 

  "What? What kind of rubbish are you spewing? Are you out of your mind?", Maan snarled as he glared at his younger brother.

The said younger brother aka Dev, seated on the nearby chair casually, simply smirked, "Nope! You know I am right!"

"Oh shut up! You are talking nonsense! I do not have any feelings for that waitress!", Maan spat as he paced the length of his study room.

"Blah! Blah! Blah! Deny all you want! But I know the truth!", Dev replied in a singsong voice and sent a grin to his older brother. It was the morning of the party and Dev and Maan were arguing in the study room.

 

"Rubbish! All rubbish! Why would I want to fall in love with a girl? Why?", Maan continued to pace, "No! I am and will be a bachelor forever!"

"Bachelor?", Dev looked at him surprised, "Who said anything about bachelor?", Dev grinned widely, "I am only saying that you fell in love. You are the one who is talking about remaining a bachelor! Not remaining bachelor means marrying! Wait! But I never said anything about marriage? Bro! I spoke about love, you jumped to marriage! That means you are thinking about marriage! Does that mean..."

 

"Shut up! Just shut up!", Maan growled at his brother, "Don't try to twist my own words against me! What do you think will happen after love? Marriage! Aur kya! And then there will be a woman entering my life and creating chaos!"

 

"Bro! Its not like that! If you love a girl, life won't be that bad!", Dev protested.

"Yeah right! What do you know?", Maan retorted and Dev pouted.

 

"I tell you Dev", Maan explained, "I tell you Dev, I am a normal man!

All I want to do is live my life the way I want!

I want to do what is best for me,

All I want is happiness for me!

Then how can I let love into my life?

Because, remember my dear brother, love brings wife!

And then my life will never remain the same

Because what woman would stay away from changing everything but my name!

One day the curtain, one day the couch,

And then all I will remain a money providing pouch!

Now you tell me why should I fall in love?

Love is nothing but a menace in front of whom I refuse to bow!"

 

 "But Brother!", Dev got up from his seat and faced Maan, "Love is not bad!

You think so, it makes me sad!
Imagine a woman entering your life

You decide whether you want to imagine her as your lover or your wife!

By nagging you constantly she makes sure you eat on time

Oh! Is your head paining? She gives you a glass full of sherbet made of lime!

Imagine someone taking care of you

A woman that is solely devoted to you!"

 

  As Dev spoke, Maan remembered the way Geet made sure he had dinner on time. He smiled as he imagined her making him juice because he was feeling tired. Dev continued to speak,

 

"Love is not as bad as you think.

It is not a poison that you had to drink

It is cure for the loneliness in your life!

I tell you, life is boring without a wife!"

 

"I refuse!", Maan snarled as he vanished the images from his brain, "I refuse to believe in love!

In front of it, I will never bow!

All she will do is dress up and giggle nonstop

Annoying will be her chatter, which I would not be able to stop

She will ask me for expensive things

And expect me to buy anything and everything

I would rather face ten men wielding knives

Because as far as I know they are better than wives!"

 

"But Geet is not like that!", Dev piped in and Maan looked at him in shock. Dev continued.

"Yes Bro! Geet is not like that!

She is not a spoiled brat!

She may chatter a little,

But she will never torture you like that!

Expensive gifts mean nothing to her,

And neither do dressing up

A simple life is what she prefers

She is your tea of cup!"

 

"You mean cup of tea!", Maan interrupted.

"It does not rhyme Bro!", Dev replied and Maan slapped his forehead.

 

Dev continued, "With her life will be a bliss

Where every evening you will long for her kiss

Where day and night will blend into one

And Let me tell you, she will be your one and done!

So let go of your inhibitions

And allow your heart to fly,

Because if you did not make your move

There are other gentlemen waiting to try!"

 

"Enough!", Maan spat, "You cannot sway me so easily!

I have been listening to you patiently

But you are trying my patience now,

By trying to make me believe in love!

Woman in your life

Is like plunging in a knife!

Peace is what she will make you crave,

She will make you rant and rave!

Let others try their hand at love,

But Maan Singh Khurana will never bow!"

 

"Ok! As you wish!", Dev shrugged and Maan looked at Dev in shock. He did not expect Dev to give in so easily. He was disappointed that Dev did not fight more. But why am I disappointed? I should be happy that Dev let go of this annoying love topic! Then why I am not happy? Before Maan could think more, Dev spoke up. Maan did not notice the mischief in his younger brother's eyes.

 

"As you wish Bro,

thank you for letting her go

She is beautiful enough

And she is mentally tough

Better than the socialite bore

She is what I wish for and more

Now I will take my chance with her

Maybe we might get together

Get ready Bro because pretty soon, you will find

A Wedding Invitation with Dev and Geet in mind

I will make her my Queen and she will rule my heart

You remain a lonely bachelor while I become her sweetheart!"

 

"Never!", Maan roared as he grabbed Dev's collar and pulled him close.

"I deny you to come near her!"

"Why?"

"Because I LOVE HER!"

 

 Maan stumbled back in shock as his hands unclenched. Dev straightened in collar and grinned eagerly. I did it! I made him jealous enough that he accepted his love! Yes! Dev beta you are awesome!

 

"And the truth is out!", Dev loudly announced.

"And the truth is out!

Please Bro dont pout!
Falling in love is not so bad!

It is time to be glad!"

 

"I love her!", Maan mumbled in shock. He stumbled out of the room and walked away still in daze.

 

"Oh dear!

I think I broke my brother!", Dev mumbled worriedly. Then after few seconds of thinking, he shook his head, "Na! He will be fine by the evening!"

 

Dev walked away singing the song, "Wah wah Raamji! Jodi kya banaayi! Bhaiyya aur Bhabhi ko! Badhai ho Badhai!"

 

Neither men knew that behind the nearby pillar a girl stood listening to everything that happened in the room. Maan loves me? Hey Babaji!

 

Hello people!

I know the update is short!

But what else can I do milord?

Writing poem is not a piece of cake

Especially when there are two men doing give and take!

Maan and Dev arguing is normally not easy to write

Add in the poetry writing style, and this writer is left with no fight!

Tired as I am, I am also eager to hear

Kaisa laga mera poem? Let me know dear!

 

The rant by Maan in the update is actually inspired by the original rant by Henry Higgins in the movie. He sings a song about how letting a woman in your life can create chaos! In the movie, it happens in the start but here I added it later, as I thought it was better suited for Maan being in denial before he accepts his love!

 

Next update, it is party time!

Geet's emotions over the surprising confession will also be shown!

And of course, a romantic dance toh banta hai Boss!

 

Thank you, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

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Posted: 8 years ago
simply superb
loved it.
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Awesome n lovely part 

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Brilliant update. Loved your poem style writingđź‘Ź  Dev made Maan accept that he loves Geet. waiting for next to see Geet's reactions.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Lovely update... The poems r so cute haha
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dev made sure that maan blurt out the truth that he loves Geet and he was successful ..Geet overheared their talks and she was kind of shocked hearing maan confession
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that was awesome, whole debate between dev n maan in poetic way, well done.. n finally maan confessed his love for geet.. it seems more to himself than dev.. n geet too heard. now eagerly waiting for next part
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I bow down to thee dear...
I just loved the poems you penned down...
Finally Maan accepted that he loves Geet...n the credit for that goes to 
 Dev babu...can't wait for the next part...