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anky_s

@anky_s

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#781

Hi Kalpana, sad to know your down with fever. I happen to be sailing in the same boat these days.. 😕

And the feverish effect was very much apparent on your recent update. It was lacking the magic of you! Though it was good but not magical like your previous updates.

I sadly didn't like Viren departing from this story. He was a good character and a genuine friend to Geet. Even though he knew his love is unrequited but still he cared for Geet and advised her not to let Maan ruin her respect and dignity.

Although, I highly doubt that Maan would ever do that, now that he love her.

Geet was confused with all the things Viren told her and her poor little brain wasn't able to decipher Maan's actions.

Dance practice was nice and the convo too but I was expecting much here. A more intense and deeper conversation.

Take it as constructive criticism here.

Get well soon and take care of your health.

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: Khushibloom
Nice upate. Haww even in such condition you gave update. Please take care of u'r self. Viren confess that he love geet but he don't want to loose his friendship with her. He also told geet about maan. Now geet wants to know what maan feels for her but his answer confused her more and she realised that after mentioning virens name he all of a sudden goes away from there. Now i am eager to know what she hears from khurana brothers.

Of course I updated in that condition! I knew that reading your reviews would make my fever go running to the hills! And it worked! 😃

Seriously, I am fine now! It was the fever that comes everytime weather changes here! Nothing new! Comes every few months! This time it just affected me too much because I haven't been taking care of myself much for last few weeks! Rectified that! Now I am back to normal! Glad you enjoyed the update!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#783

Originally posted by: fict
Hope you feel better soon.

Awesome update. Loved Viren. He knew that Maan and Geet love each other and took it sportingly. True friend indeed. Maan is still in denial mode.

I am better now! Looking forward to see your reaction to the next update!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#784

Originally posted by: -padmarao-
Wonderful update
Viren n geet conversation superb
I think Maan kuch ulta hi bolega to dev... Geet woh sunke dukhi hojayegi
Eagerly waiting for the next update

Actually what you said uska ulta hoga!😃

Not going to say anything else! Eager to see your reaction when I post the next update!😃

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#785

Originally posted by: ms.nautanki
Very nice update and I can't wait for Maan to realize his love for Geet.. A little twists or misunderstanding would add much more thrill to the story😳 something like Maan humiliating Geet or hurting her n then regretting.. Okay it's ur story now m getting carried away 😆
Pls update soon

Oh my my my! You really are getting carried away! Wish I could spice up the story the way you want to and fulfil your wish but this story is based on My Fair Lady and I simply Maaneetized it. So cannot change much! But frankly, this story still has some twists left! Infact, some of the things you mentioned you wished to see will happen in this story too! So just wait and enjoy! And as far as Maan realising his love for Geet, lets just say you will love next update! 😉

Enjoy the next update!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#786

Originally posted by: nitika20
Viren Told Geet that Maan love her...
but poor Baby getting confused over ..
Maan 's on off mood swing ...
hehehe ...😉..
Maan ka English baba re...
topic se jyada Language .. me interest ..
Precap ..
I think...
Viren wali promise se related hi sunegi Geet kuch ...
MU ..😭
take care.. of ur health...
waiting for next part...

Hey no MU! Atleast not in next update!

Next update will actually be delightful!

MU toh nahi honge but Maan is set in his ways and there is promise Geet made! So dont expect a smooth sailing for these two!

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swapna.p

@swapna.p

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#787

nice update..
waiting for next update...

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#788

WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#789

Originally posted by: Tinku2015
👏 nice update n really amazed u have written outstandingly even in ur sickness...felt really bad for viren...he deserves so much love n care n geet for being such a wonderful gentleman...n this egoistic maan doesnt hold a candle next to him...sorry if this is offending bur reallly ...i feel so...waiting for the next...

Thank you dear or your kind words!

And no you did not offend me! I wanted my readers to think Viren is better than Maan! I wanted to show that! So you telling me that Maan does not hold candle in front of Viren is actually the best compliment for me as a writer. It means I actually managed to get it done! So thank you once again for letting me know!

Keep reading!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#790

Originally posted by: anky_s
Hi Kalpana, sad to know your down with fever. I happen to be sailing in the same boat these days.. 😕
And the feverish effect was very much apparent on your recent update. It was lacking the magic of you! Though it was good but not magical like your previous updates.

I sadly didn't like Viren departing from this story. He was a good character and a genuine friend to Geet. Even though he knew his love is unrequited but still he cared for Geet and advised her not to let Maan ruin her respect and dignity.

Although, I highly doubt that Maan would ever do that, now that he love her.

Geet was confused with all the things Viren told her and her poor little brain wasn't able to decipher Maan's actions.

Dance practice was nice and the convo too but I was expecting much here. A more intense and deeper conversation.
Take it as constructive criticism here.

Get well soon and take care of your health.

I agree with you totally there! That update lacked magic! Viren Geet convo was perfect! I just loved it! But the Maaneet convo was horrible! I had planned it to be something beautiful like an argument about love and feelings and all. It was supposed to be deep and filled with metaphors and all. But damn the fever! Destroyed the effect! I actually wanted to postpone the update so that I can get it right but already I update only twice a month. I did not want to deprive even that from my readers! I am thinking of rewriting that convo one day once the story ends! Atleast new readers who read the complete version get something meaningful there! 😕

Thanks for your comment dear! Every reader needs a critic so that they dont destroy the quality for the sake of quantity. Hope you enjoy the next update!