La Douleur Exquise: Devakshi Drabbles Update Page 14 - 27.08.2016 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was fantastic! Hope this actually happens lol.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: moon14

Awesome os .
One request plz write from dev's pov also.



I'm thinking about it. However Dev is more complex and the tv serial one is confusing me at the point. Let's see.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhoopkinarey

That was fantastic! Hope this actually happens lol.


Lol, I think there is a censor board. So it seems unlikely. But wish..


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey, this was a lovely read. You described the family lives of Dev and Sonakshi aptly. I also liked how you made it realistic without the frills and pom-poms, flying duppatas etc. looking forward to more of such OS's or even SS/FF's
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So wonderfully written! Please write more!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kennashreign

Hey, this was a lovely read. You described the family lives of Dev and Sonakshi aptly. I also liked how you made it realistic without the frills and pom-poms, flying duppatas etc. looking forward to more of such OS's or even SS/FF's


I have really liked the writers drawing the parallel between the two families in the serial. And it has worked out well for establishing the two characters too. i just caught with Friday episode and Elena as an extension of Bose family was too good. I must say I love the Bose family and hope that the rest of Dixit family learns something from them.

I am glad you liked Dev and Sonakshi's journey of love.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: dancedanceRR

So wonderfully written! Please write more!


Thanks. I am trying on something for Dev.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: c85rie



I have really liked the writers drawing the parallel between the two families in the serial. And it has worked out well for establishing the two characters too. i just caught with Friday episode and Elena as an extension of Bose family was too good. I must say I love the Bose family and hope that the rest of Dixit family learns something from them.

I am glad you liked Dev and Sonakshi's journey of love.


I second your thoughts..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amazingly written, could absolutely imagine each and every word that you had written. Really great job!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Omg omg
That was so so intense
She kissed him.. Ahhh
Awesome
Lovely concept
And so well written
There are more parts right..?

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