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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Really enjoyed it...
So finally Aastha has realised that she love shlok...😳
Thank you👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai Sai. Good morning yaar. Thanks for your update and pm. Thanks for your reply also.
Sai ur reply encourages our so much. That's y v r writing like an OS.
Nice update. Through out the whole update I enjoyed . From now love blossoms in our cute ashloks.
V were waiting for this. U wrote ur update superb. Really no words yaar. I only said by my view.
Hats of u. I am readed so much ff and ss and OS about our ashlok. But ur ff is going to the heart directly.
Everyone stories are nice. Thanks for all writers. Because of u people v r seeing our Beautiful Ashlok chemistry once again. 👏
Sai the first part it was super hot. Really yesterday I was feared but u do itt nicely.
The kiss only astha known with whom she kissed. But shlok he didn't recognize who was with him
but Sai please remember shlok it otherwise some misunderstand will come between them.
Once again don't make astha cry. From now she wants to loved and pampered by everyone pls.
Between their passionate kiss he lighty confessed.I liked it but I want shlok to know that.he felt unconscious. She changed his clothes arey asthu didn't u get shy. Before leaving him she hugged him and kissed arey something is coming on the way yaar waw 😉
She went to her home with her belongs but she was lost in shlok.
Kalindi gauri Ankush they were really confused by her behaviour. Arey gauri u r right astha is in love now.
Astha's and gauri's chatting was super and exited.
She got the appointment order. Arey Ankush y u r observing ur sister so much. U will know slowly yaar.
The teasing part loved it yaar 👏 .
Shlok woke up arey u didn't remember anything. K leave u will also know it yaar.
Niranjan varad and Anjali's talking also was super.
I think they are going to make shlok to marrying astha
If that's y they gave her the job as shlok PA for astha 👏
From now v r going to witness office romance yaar.
Speaking about marriage shlok went to office but on the way he was thinking about astha . He wants to see her once but like his mind reader he saw she eating pani Puri with gauri.
Waw. Super shot yaar.
But today shlok is going to get shock and same happy because she is going to be his PA.
But the last phone call is something danger. I think the one person will be Suresh
But the other man?
Anyway nice update yaar. Really really v enjoyed a lot.
Thanks for creating the magic for us.
V always wait for ur updates.
Keep rocking. Trust u
Continue sooon... 👏


thanks a lot chechi u r rocking comments in ur own way thanks for taking time to read and for writing so nicely
hope u continue supporting me like this magic!! me seriously oho this is the weirdest compliment but thanks a lot

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Well it was indeed a passionate update... But confused by the last phone call thing!!


thank u so much
phone call phone call phone call dont bother about it
keep it up
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: coolhi1988

awesome update..
well written👏👏
loved ur teaser style..
gud going...
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..


thanks a lot didi
hmm aapse hi tho seekkha hain akhir main bhi aapki chatr jo hain 😆
thank u u liked it hope i wont disappoint u till the end
keep on supporting like this
pleasure is mine
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chickyhoney

Confuse about last part but it was sooo hot update


yeah i wrote for u ppl to confuse dont worry it will be revealed later
thanks for liking it hmm u want more romance right k u will get it

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: syvalini

hai sai...

well written
finally got to know eachother missing equally,
n nice surprise gave to shlok by niru baba,
atlast love blosoms bet ashlok in the coming updates,
still we have surprises i think in the coming way...
thank u bro for such a wonderful update
keep going...


thank u akka
hmm yes for now they r missing each other
surprise tho nahi hain i thought it was boring to u ppl
so for some excitement in ff jus added that little part
anyway thanks for ur support 😃
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

I can't understand this last part

I am waiting to see ashlok together
Thank you waiting for next update
Take care

hmm u will know about it in the course of time
dont worry they r always together without their knowledge k
thanks for ur support
u too keep smiling and take care 😃
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Awesome update...

Really enjoyed it...
So finally Aastha has realised that she love shlok...😳
Thank you👏

thank u 😉
hmm now its turn for Shlok to realise
thanks for commenting 😃
Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 24



Aastha "Sir main aapki PA hoon aaj hi office main join hua." And she twirled on both sides. Shlok was shocked and took her with him to his father's cabin. Shlok "Baba ye kya hain Aastha mera PA ye aapne kiya hain kya." Niranjan smiled and said "Haan Shlok tumhe koi problem hain kya."


Aastha "Gud morning Sir." Niranjan "Gud morning beta." Shlok "aap kyun kiya aisa ye ladkiyaan kaam badathe hain kam nahi kar sakte." Aastha "Kya main badathi hoon aur aapne kya kiya us din if u wouldn't have followed me I could have gone there one day b4 itself aapki vaje se main der hogayi aap badathe hain kaam main nahi u cant say like this b4 seeing my work if u want to reject me then bear me for 1 month and then say wat can girls do samje aap." And she strode away.


Shlok just stared at her wat has he got himself into. Aastha went to her cabin. Niranjan "Shlok beta whatever she said is right u have to give her a chance lets see for 1 month k now go and also Suresh was not there right so someone should replace him right so I chose Aastha."


Shlok was very happy he don't know y he was smiling and was going to his cabin but stopped outside her cabin and saw her dancing. Kya ye pagal hogayi kya. Aastha was dancing by singing a tune "lala laala laalalala.." our ebp title song. Shlok smiled and took his phone and recorded it. Wat happened to her he thought. Sach main pagal hain.


He went to his cabin. She has to know about him she wanted him to confess her. She want to know wat he does all the day so she shyly went to his cabin. Shlok took his phone and started playing it despite he has lot of work. Aastha slowly came to his cabin. She was shy. Shlok observed it ye ladki sharma kyun rahe hain. Shlok stood up.


Aastha saw him and said "aap ka time table chahiye mujhe." Shlok came near her and said "Kya baat hain aaj bohut khush ho tum." Shlok was nearing her. Aastha "matlab." He took his phone and shown her dance. Aastha was shocked. Aastha "Ye aapke paas pls mujhe dejiye ye." Shlok "nahi." Aastha "Shlok aap tang kyun kar rahe hain iss tarah aap kisi ka video karna galat hain aap mujhe dijiye pls."


She asked such if she asks even a moon he might even bring that. Shlok "achcha theek hain then u have to do wat I say k." Aastha was in dilemma but said yes. Shlok came forward by removing his coat. Aastha gulped a bit "Ye aap kya kar raha hain." Kai ya akdu abs ach main kiss karega kya and tensed even more her heart beat raised.


Shlok still neared her removing his sleeves and backed her until she was cornered to the door. Shlok put his hands on either side of her. Aastha was nervous and also excited. She gulped a bit again. Shlok said "hug me." Aastha "Kya!!!" Shlok "I said hug me." Aastha saw him into his eyes. She downed her head and slowly hugged him. Shlok "tighter." She hugged even tighter. Both of them smiled inwards. After wards Aastha broke the hug and saw him into his eyes.


She was trying to leave but he caught her again. Shlok "Don't u want this video." Aastha "chahiye pls give it to me." Shlok still neared her. Shlok "aur ek kaam karna hain." Aastha nervously "kkk..ya." Shlok "Kiss me." And he tapped his finger on his cheek. Aastha "Kya!!!kyun I wont kiss u."


Shlok "theek hain I will show it to every one." Aastha "aap na theek hain." And she was kissing him maintaining some distance from him. But Shlok brought her closer by pulling her closer by holding her waist. Shlok "ab kiss karo."


Aastha didn't say anything but closed her eyesand went on tiptoes and kissed him on cheek but she didn't stop she opened her eyes and titled his face and gave kiss on other cheek too and she smiled. Shlok "arey wa double offer." Their faces were inches away. Shlok smelled her scent. This is making him crazy.


Shlok "kal raat tum kaha the." Aastha was shocked. Aastha "Kyun I was in home." Shlok caught her chin and lifted her head more. Aastha's body was shivering. Her body temperature is also increasing. Shlok "tum batao y did u dance haan." She was wriggling in his hold. Shlok didn't let her go. Aastha "ye aap kya kar rahe hain koi apni PA ke saath aisa karta hain kya."


Shlok "achcha wen u kissed me in mandir wat did u think then haan u said think it as a thanks chalo koi baat nahi I wont feel anything but u forgot to say thanks yesterday after the whole incident so I took thanks myself." And he left her. Aastha "aap ab wo video dijiye mujhe pls."


Shlok deleted that video infront of her and gave her the time table too. She came to cabin panting and left a huge sigh "ye akdu kyun nahi maanthe hain ki mujhse pyaar karthe hain sach main bohut bada akdu hain." Here Shlok was feeling happy seeing her here. Aastha "hmm I have to make him confess but how she thought."


Shlok was also thinking "ye kya ho raha hain aaj tak kisi ladki se aisa nahi kiya lekin aaj kyun kya hain Aastha ke saath." He bcame impatient and went to her cabin and he saw Aastha talking with Sankalp. He came there still they were talking. Shlok "Ye kya ho raha hain am I paying u ppl to chat each other haan aur tum apni laptop leke aao meri cabin ko."


Aastha "Yes Sir." And was thinking isse kya hogaya suddenly kyun chilla rahe hain and she got it he was jealous. She intentionally got up and was going and turned again and said "Sankalp shall we go to coffee in the break." Sankalp "Yeah Sure."


Shlok watched each and every bit. Aastha followed him. Shlok entered his cabin angrily. She observed it. She knows he is jealous. Shlok sat in his chair like a boss and said her to sit there. Aastha sat and opened her lappy. Shlok asked her to note down. She noted it as it is. He also gave her some work and said he want it asap. She was leaving. He asked her to sit there itself and do the work.


Aastha "nahi I will go to my cabin." Shlok "nahi u wil sit here and do the work I m the boss u have to do whatever I say now sit here." He shouted at her. Aastha feared a bit and sat there. Aastha was thinking akdu kahin ka if he loves me that much then y cant he say haan buddhu. Shlok didn't let her to have break.


She went on like that. She also forgot to take break. At lunch Shlok closed his lappy and was leaving and saw her sleeping and was thinking haan ye ladki meri jaan lelegi kaam ki vakt main so rahe hain. Shlok "Oh hello utho." Aastha suddenly woke up and stretched her hands widely as she did in her home. Shlok again lost in her. Aastha "arey pls let me sleep for some more time Shlok." And she was trying to sleep again. Ye ladki kya kar rahi hain.


Shlok furiously shook "Oh hello kya kar rahe ho tum wat r u doing in working hours haan I will fire u now itself come lets go to Baba." Aastha "arey aap itni tension kyun le rahe hain dekho I completed ur work but u didn't give me break at all then how m I supposed to work all the time haan it is ur fault u should have given break that's y I slept samje aap ab chodiye mujhe I have to go to home to have lunch if u want to pls come Aai also wants to see u once pls Shlok ek baar aao na."


Shlok "nahi ab nahi I will come later now Kavya has lunch break I have to pick her and then have to go home." Aastha "achcha theek hain then I will come with u." Shlok was confused. Ye ladki kya kar rahe hain. Aastha "arey aise kya dekh rahe ho." Shlok came down and just kissed her on cheek. Shlok "morning u gave 2 kisses so I returned one."


Aastha "achcha will u return all the kisses which I give." Shlok left a sigh and was thinking kuch nahi ho sakta tumhara total gone case hain. Aastha smiled and said to move. Shlok and Aastha went to his car. She also called her Aai and said she is going to Shlok's house. Aastha was non-stop chatting with him. Shlok cant take it any more. He stopped the car and asked her to get down. Aastha "Shlok kyun." Shlok "I asked u to get down."


Aastha got down. Shlok closed the door and went away. Aastha opened her mouth in shock. Haan ye ladka kitna badtameez hain koi aisi vaisi ladki ko aise akele chodta hain kya akdu kahin ka. Wat made him to do so. Shlok was thinking pehle bohut calm hain oh my god she is a tornado man how can anyone bear her haan. Shlok thought wat he just did he himself didn't feel it is right so he went back where she stood and opened the door for her.


Aastha angrily closed the door and said "nahi chahiye aapki madad jo karna hain karlo." And she was walking away. Haan ye ladki kya kar rahi hain I never understand her. She walked for long. Shlok just kept staring at her and got down and was chasing her now. He got her and dragged her in the traffic and made her sit. She again got down. Shlok "Aastha bachpana chodo and get in." Aastha "nahi kyun gayi the pehle." And she was walking away.


Shlok got frustrated and shouted at her loudly "Aastha chalo chup chap don't u get it haan ek baar bolne se samajmain nahi aata hain kya." Aastha was feared but got in and was shedding silent tears. Shlok too got in. She was looking out the window. Shlok didn't feel it right and said "Sorry." That's it she cant control.


She turned and saw him with tearful eyes and cried out and said "Kyun kiya aap aisa kyun y did u leave me like that bohut bure ho tum Shlok u r very bad I hate u do u know how it hurts." She was beating him on his shoulder with her hands. Shlok made her calm down by kissing her "I said na I m sorry but pls don't talk much see my ears r bleeding pls meri maa be silent for sometime mujhe bohut bhoog lagi hain."

Episode 25

Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai sai gud evening. Thanks for ur pm and updaate and for your reply.
Nice update yaar 👏 . Really I liked it.

Astha's entry was super by saying she is shlok's PA.
He got stunned. Arey waw shlok from now she will be always with you.
Niranjan's question I liked if there is any problem nahi baba from now u can also witness ur sons romance.
Waw super Sai. I think u r going to make our heart to beat fast. 👏
Arey shlok how can u say girls don't do any job nice. U r wrong and ur drama queen is going to prove it yaar. She is right give her a chance then u can understand before knowing anything u can't take any decision bear her for one month yaar. Shlok hear ur baba's words give yr princess one chance.
We know u will be happy for this decision naughty boy 😉 .
Shlok y stopped in front of astha's cabin to see her henna. But u saw her dance and u recorded arey y u doing this hmmm.
She wants to know about him and went to his cabin and shlok playing in mobile knowing astha is coming in his cabin. Waw super 👏
Astha asked his time table of shlok . But wat made him arey shoes the video and black mailing asking hug and kiss . Sai really now v r happy u started love between ashloks. After that he deleted the video.
Both them were happy. We can't wait till next day evening so much exited yaar.astha was in her cabin shlok wants to see her. When he went he saw she talking to sankalp . Shlok is jealousy now. He called her to his cabin arey waw he didn't allow her to go to her cabin or take a break because of jealous. 👏
Shlok didn't give her a break so after work she slept on the desk.
He called here and they went to shlok house. But astha our drama queen henna how can she sit like a ideal. She will be not stop chatterbox. Shlok can't bear y he told her to get down from the car if something happens to her who will be responsible.
Shlok went back and took her with him but she was hurt. V also r angry with you shlok 😡
But seeing her u told sorry but u gave her kiss very nice.
Arey Sai u took our to another world yaar. Really ur ff v enjoyed it. Thanks yaar keep rocking. V r waiting
Continue soon...
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago

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