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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nadeeka1200

wow sai lovely update

You are rocking yaar
Waiting for next update
Thank you


thanks a lot nadeeka1200
hmm u will get it in few minutes
pleasure is mine
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice going
Shlok is now playing with the emotions
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rd0309

Awww such a cute update... I liked this side of Shlok very much, please keep him like this. Aastha was also very cute.

thanks a lot
hmm lets hope the best
let him realize his love
thanks for support
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: vaishux

Such a lovely and beautiful update...

Aashlok are so cute..😳
Thank you


thank u 😳
pleasure is mine
u ppl r really so encouraging
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dazzles

Nice going
Shlok is now playing with the emotions


he is not playing anything both r going with the flow
he cant keep his hands to himself if he sees her from now
anyway thanks for commenting hope ur xams were gud
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sudhamadhu

Hai sai gud evening. Thanks for ur pm and updaate and for your reply.
Nice update yaar 👏 . Really I liked it.

Astha's entry was super by saying she is shlok's PA.
He got stunned. Arey waw shlok from now she will be always with you.
Niranjan's question I liked if there is any problem nahi baba from now u can also witness ur sons romance.
Waw super Sai. I think u r going to make our heart to beat fast. 👏
Arey shlok how can u say girls don't do any job nice. U r wrong and ur drama queen is going to prove it yaar. She is right give her a chance then u can understand before knowing anything u can't take any decision bear her for one month yaar. Shlok hear ur baba's words give yr princess one chance.
We know u will be happy for this decision naughty boy 😉 .
Shlok y stopped in front of astha's cabin to see her henna. But u saw her dance and u recorded arey y u doing this hmmm.
She wants to know about him and went to his cabin and shlok playing in mobile knowing astha is coming in his cabin. Waw super 👏
Astha asked his time table of shlok . But wat made him arey shoes the video and black mailing asking hug and kiss . Sai really now v r happy u started love between ashloks. After that he deleted the video.
Both them were happy. We can't wait till next day evening so much exited yaar.astha was in her cabin shlok wants to see her. When he went he saw she talking to sankalp . Shlok is jealousy now. He called her to his cabin arey waw he didn't allow her to go to her cabin or take a break because of jealous. 👏
Shlok didn't give her a break so after work she slept on the desk.
He called here and they went to shlok house. But astha our drama queen henna how can she sit like a ideal. She will be not stop chatterbox. Shlok can't bear y he told her to get down from the car if something happens to her who will be responsible.
Shlok went back and took her with him but she was hurt. V also r angry with you shlok 😡
But seeing her u told sorry but u gave her kiss very nice.
Arey Sai u took our to another world yaar. Really ur ff v enjoyed it. Thanks yaar keep rocking. V r waiting
Continue soon...


wow chechi thanks a lot 😃
u wrote it beautifully but it is quite shorter compared to previous one no problem anyway u rocked it chechi i m feeling u r jus hooked to this story thanks a lot chechi u have been a great support to me
hope u continue supporting me like this throughout the journey
thanks a lot again
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Posted: 9 years ago

Episode 25


Aastha smiled in tears. Shlok again touched her nose with his finger and said "Keep smiling u really look cute." Aastha this time blushed instead of smiling. Shlok too smiled and went to pick Kavya from school. Kavya came running to the car. She saw Aastha there. Kavya sat with Aastha in the front seat. Now u guys know wat Shlok must be going through. Aastha is no less than Kavya.


Oh God is she 24 or 14 yaar how is she behaving like a kid. Shlok took glances of her from now and then. Aastha was laughing with Kavya always. She was also tickling her and both of them laughing. Shlok didn't see the vehicle infront of them. Aastha suddenly raised her head and shouted "Shlok." Shlok then came to earth and saw wat is front and applied brake suddenly. Aastha held Kavya tightly.


Shlok too braced himself tightly. Aastha held Kavya tightly so she didn't hold or brace to anything so due to inertia she bent front and was hit on the head. Shlok was going to stop her but he was late. Aastha's forehead swollen. Aastha squealed in pain. She caught her head. Aastha "Shlok dekhke gaadi nahi chala sakta hain kya." Kavya "didi kya hua dikhao mujhe."


Shlok "Aastha show me where r u hit." Kavya "chachu all bcoz of u u cant drive dekho didi ko chot lagi sorry bolo didi ko." Shlok "Aastha I m sorry arey show it to me first." Aastha took the hand and saw bleeding. Shlok "Aastha u r bleeding." He was worried so much. Shlok "ham hospital chelte." Aastha "nahi Shlok nothing much happened if I apply haldi once that's more than enough we will go to home no problem at all." Shlok "tum pagal hogaya kya nahi I m mad negotiating with u." He simply drove to hospital.

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Kamal "Sir accident hogaya lekin miss hua I m sorry lekin wo log jinda hain." Sameer "heyy ek kaam bhi nahi kar sakte hain kya ab Sir ko kya kahna hain bohut gussa honge ek accident bhi nahi kar sakte aur khud ko professional killer samajte iss kaam keliye tho main paise nahi de sakta hoon bas phone rakhiye." And he cut the call and was fearing how to face his Boss.

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Aastha was refusing but he dragged her to hospital. Kavya "didi hospital chalo if not it will bcome this big." And she shown size by her hands. Aastha smiled at her cute antics. Aastha went in and was dressed at the wound. Shlok "ab kaise lag rahe hain." Aastha "theek hain wat were u doing haan where is ur concentration haan who gave u license." Shlok "I was seeing u ppl u were playing in car as u were thinking u were in ground." Aastha "sab aapki vaje se hua hain chalo abi if u cant drive then give it to me I will drive safer than u."


Shlok was shocked. Shlok "kya can u drive car." Aastha "Haan koi problem hain." Shlok "nahi." They went to their home. Anjali was enlighted to see her there and also worried to see her wound. Anjali "Aastha kya hua yaha." And she examined it. Aastha "kuch nahi aai thodasa accident hain." Haan ye ladki y cant chup kyun nahi rah sakte. Anjali "dekh ke nahi chal sakti tum pagal ladki kal se scooty pe mat jaana Shlok hain na tumhe pick up karne keliye kya hain will u take her to office daily and drop her home."


Kavya "ajju accident chachu ne kiya." Hmm hogaya ye dono ladkiyaan mere jaan lelegi. Anjali "Shlok itni tej chalane ki kya jaroorat thi agar usse kuch hogaya tho itni laaprva." Aastha "Aai leave it ab mujhe bohut bhoog lagi hain khana tayar hain." Anjali "first go and wash urself there in guest room k." Anjali "kitni achchi hain ye ladki sare ladki ki tarah nahi hain." And she went and made sita to serve the lunch. Aastha ate everything silently. Thank god for that Shlok thought. Shlok asked her to leave. Aastha "arey Sir y so soon lets be here for sometime we should not do work immediately hain na Aai." Anjali "yes beta I ask him daily to go slow but ye Baba aur beta ko kuch samaj main nahi aata hain."


Aastha "teek hain aai I will come again fir usko gussa aayega." Shlok and Aastha were leaving in a car. Shlok "Aastha wen did u take ur belongings from the guest house." Aastha again feared and said "kyun Shlok I came in evening and took away everything y Shlok did I forget anything there." Shlok said "nahi." And he looked onto road. Aastha cant stop loving him how care he is lekin ye akdu y cant he realise he is in love with her haan. She looked outside disappointingly.


That day was boring for Aastha but lot of excitement for Shlok. He was enjoying this side of Aastha she was never like b4 wen she is in that guest house god knows how to stop her blabbering. Aastha came to home with little disappointment and went into her room straight away. Ye ladka mujhse romance bhi karte hain lekin I love u nahi kahte hain hmm kya karu jaise ye apne aap mere saath aayegi aur bologi Aastha I cant live without u I love u Aastha I love u so much and she smiled to herself.


Hmm she thought and sat on her bed combing her hair. Kalindi came with pakoda.Kalindi "Aastha kya hua kaisa hain pehla din." Aastha cheerfully said it was fine and also took pakoda and ate them god she missed her aai's cooking so much. She instantly got tears. Kalindi "Aastha kya hua kyun ro rahi ho." Aastha "kuch nahi Aai bohut miss kiya mujhse kabhi mat door ho jao aai kabhi mat." And she hugged her and cried even more. Kalindi "Aastha calm down calm down Aastha main hamesha tera sath hi hoon aur tum u should not cry like this u should be happy from now bcoz tom...." Ankush "Aai Aai." Kalindi "Aastha ab ye khalo I will tell u later k." Kalindi came and asked Ankush wats the matter. Ankush gave phone to her.


It was Anjali she asked them to come for dinner. Kalindi accepted instantaneously. Kalindi also said Aastha to be ready for dinner. Aastha's face lightnened. She was at cloud9 again. She was going to meet him again. As she said she wore simple saree but looking stunning. She thought I think today he will open up. She also put bangles and also got ready thinking she was having marriage setting.


Kalindi, Aastha and Ankush got ready soon. Ankush "arey kya baat hain didi aaj kya special hain u wore saree today." Kalindi then saw her "arey Aastha u wore saree looks good bohut achchi hain chalo ab late ho raha hain." Within no time they all reached their house. Aastha was nervous wat would he do now. Ankush "hmm didi now I understand y u wore this saree."


Aastha "bhai kya hain don't think so I just wore this that's all k now chele." All of them went in. Niranjan and Anjali welcomed them. Kavya just rushed to her didi. Aastha lifted her up and pulled her cheek. But her eyes were searching for Shlok. Shlok came down in his tracks and T shirt. He looked at her. She was stunning he cant take his eyes off her. Wat the hell did she come from heaven. Is she an angel. Atlast she saw him and blushed a little.


They directly went to dining table. Aastha sat beside her aai and Shlok sat beside his baba. They ate silently. Shlok wantedly touched her feet with his leg. Aastha suddenly saw him. Shlok smiled. Aastha saw him with killing eyes. Shlok didn't do anything again but ate silently again this bothered her. Niranjan asked Ankush wat is he going to do. Ankush said "main apni aai ka dyan rakhunga aur aap fikar mat kijiye I will get job within 20 days." After dinner everyone sat on the sofa.


Shlok got up and asked Aastha to come up to complete the pending work. Aastha went away. Kalindi "dekhiye I want to tell something important to u." Anjali "haan Kalindi ji we too want to talk something important to u." Kalindi "kuch nahi kal Aastha ko dekhne keliye ladke wale aa rahe hain kya aap log bhi aa sakte kuch nahi Avdoot nahi hain na if we late her marriage then it would be difficult later so aap log aa sakte hain na shaam 7pm ko."


Ankush was shocked "lekin Aai u didn't tell me." Kalindi "arey it was happened suddenly so.." Niranjan and Anjali saw each other disappointingly. Anjali "areyy jaroor ye tho achchi baat hain we will come definitely don't worry." Kalindi "thanks thanks a lot aur aap bhi kuch kahne vale the na kya hain wo." Anjali "kuch nai kuch khaas nahi we will tell u tomorrow after settlement." Kalindi "achcha theek hain.." and they went on their own normal chat. Ankush didn't like it.


Aastha came to his room first time and she saw here and there. Suddenly she shouted "aah..." and she ran his whole room and also dropped water glass too. Shlok "Aastha Aastha kya hua bolo." Aastha "Sir see there is rat a big rat chua Shlok dekho udar." Shlok was shocked oh my god wat is she she got feared for a bloody rat. Shlok saw the rat and got rid of it.


Shlok "Aastha Aastha cool down it went away ab utaro mere bed se haan ye ladki ka main kya karu." Aastha suddenly jumped from bed but fell on water and slipped and was going to fall but she caught his collar from behind and both fell on bed Shlok on Aastha. He had a deep eye lock with her. Aastha cleared her throat asking him to get up. Shlok slowly got up and he also helped her but her saree was stuck there and was going to fall.


Shlok stopped her from falling by holding her waist but her pallu slipped away. Her hair on the face moved aside. Shlok had a mesmerizing look at her. He slowly brought her up without breaking eye contact and arranged her pallu and slowly cornered her to the wall. Both were in different island. Shlok took the remaining hair fell on her face and he caught her face with one hand and other hand rounded her waist. Aastha was shivering. Shlok slowly caressed her lips with his thumb.

Episode 26


Edited by Saibhargav - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hai Sai gud morning. Thanks for ur updates pm and ur sweet reply yaar.
U always makes us so curious at last part. Because of that v r waiting to know wat will be next.
I am not praising u. Really u r an excellent writer Sai.
Shlok once again touching her nose and telling her she is cute waw 😉
She is blushing 😉 . But when they r together there will be romance really cute. Sai u r creating the magical chemistry between ashlok once again. Thanks dear. 👏
Then our cute Kavya's entry and shlok witness the two small adorable child chatting and smile.
He can't take eyes from both they r tickling and laughing it was the nice part enjoyed that part yaar.
Arey because of shlok there will be an accident. But astha saw the vehicle right time and shouted.
Shlok always don't look astha . 😉
Astha's head hit on the cars front side it got bleeding. He took her the hospital.
Arey Kavya u r right. Really ur chachu is a akdu hahaha 😛 [BR
Hey Sai u entered two new characters in the story Kamal and Sameer. Sameer is the boss of Kamal
But there is an another boss for them. I think Kamal tried to hit shloks car. Anyway it is scaring yaar.

Shlok took her the hospital seeing hospital kavya's speech was so cute.
And astha u scolding shlok it was superb arey asthu u asked where is his concentration and who gave him the license. Arey astha how can he concentrate in driving because u r with him and u r playing with cute Kavya. 😛
Astha know driving it was a shock for not shlok only it was ours too.waw 👏
They came to AM seeing this Anjali worried and scolded her to driving scooty and told shlok to pick up daily. Arey Anjali already shlok is the driver of asthu. Hahaha. But when she knew that accident is done because of shlok she scolded him but asthu told leave it and she is hungry arey waw she can't hear anyone scolding her prince waw superb
After lunch coming back to office he asked when did she took her belongs from guest house. V know for y he asked he wants to know about that day who kissed him. But our drama queen is nautanki henna haha.
That day she got bored but our hero was enjoying his princess waw.
Sai what to tell yaar.
Anjali invited astha's family for dinner and astha she is in cloud 9. Ankush ur guess is right astha wore the saree for her prince yaar. Kavya camee to astha but astha's eyes were searching shlok waw. He came down butt he got stunned because astha looks gorgeous like an angel from heaven. Waaw.
Their sitting position and shlok touches her feet purposely . Hmmm some one will see yaar.
After dinner shlok called her to finish the work. Arey shlok this is not office. It is house yaar.
Kalindi wat r u doing going to fix astha's marriage it will be only with shlok. Ankush and everyone got shock.
Haha again rat came. But of rat there v will witness their romance yes. The last part superb. V enjoyed ur ff so much Sai. Because of u like people who writing stories is ashlok v r happy.
Sai keep writing always like this.
Trust u m continue soon.
Edited by sudhamadhu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update... Kalindi is seeing groom for astha..
Oh no ... That 's not good
I think niranjali I already think about ashlok's marriage...
And who is behind them next suspense on store
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update...
loved astha-kavya duo..
plz write more scenes on them...
who was behind that accident..?
akhil is back??😲😲
or shlok's past??
continue soon..
thnks 4 d pm..

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