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@rtms

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Posted: 9 years ago

its amazing.loved it.happy to read it as i always had these questions in mind.got an answer to it through this os.beautiful confrontation.best part was the ending,action speaks louder than words.

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Iqra

@iQraaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

Lachu this is amazing !!!! 👏👏 You nailed it again!!! 😃😃

oh gosh i want something like this to happen soon !! 😕Amazing girl ! 🤗❤️

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Ami

@beebutterfly

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Posted: 9 years ago

Loved the realistic feel of it, you made DS into a much more believable character than what he is in the show, not to mention someone with more emotions/expressions than what he is made to enact.

I wish the CVs incorporate something similar to what you wrote whenever there is a confrontation because would love to see it played out with Thapki being a little more sure of her feelings for Bihaan maybe.

Great piece of writing!👍🏼

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Ayaan78

@Ayaan78

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

very nice idea.. awesome update..

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