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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Sorry if u left wrong

Really sorry I didn't had any wrong intention to make u sad

its ok dear...mai n akbhi kisi ke baat ka bura nahi maanti..for you i am uploading the chapter 1 part 1 today within 5 min
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 1

10 DAYS BEFORE

Today she is very happy. Today is her birthday. She turns 24 today. So she took halfway leave from her office. She want to spend her day with her small but happy family.

Her family arranged a small house party on her birthday. She used to love this kind of homely birthday parties. They decorated their drawing room with her favourite blue and yellow colour balloons and ribbons. Her mother prepared all her favourite dishes. In starter kakori kebab, chicken chilly pakora, paneer tikka and potato pepper fry. In main course keema paratha, tulsi pualo, chicken chengizi and veg stew and in dessert Jodha's favourite singhare ka halwa and rose kulfi. All her fav dishes. (belive me guys during writing my toungue having slippery...muh me paani aa gaya hai yaar itnwe saare pakwano ka naam likhte likhte...he he)

From 7pm all guests started to arrive from all neighbourhood. Gifts given to Jodha. She is looking pretty as an angle fallen from heaven wearing a deep navy blue ghagra salwar with light makeup. She cut the cake and all sings " Happy birthday to you ..." with full volume they have in their voice.

Al guests praises her mother for giving them all a chance to have delicious dinner in this special occasion. Nearly 11pm all guest returned to their respective house after enjoying a beautiful warm homily birthday party.

It's nearly 12am. Midnight. Jodha was sitting in front of mirror taking off the makeup and jewelleries.

"didi, you know bade boodhe kehte hai, ke raat 12 baje ke baad bhoot sheher ke chakkar lagane nikalte hai,Unke lambe lambe daant, lambe lambe nakhun, laal laal rasgulle jaise anankhe or saap ke jaise lammmbe jibh hote hai. She paused for a moment "kahi unmese kuch humare ghar me aa gaya to? Sukanya imitate a horrible haunted voice.

"sukanya, aaj hi ghost kyu ayenge? Unko dharti e aane ke lie koi special discount mil raha hai kya aaj?"

"arry ahi didi, who kyahai na, aaj unki favorite Jodha ka janam din hai and mom ne kitne ache ache dishes banaye the. Tohn bhooto mese bhukkad bhi to hote honge na...to jin jin bhooto ko khana pasand hai who to aaj rat humare son eke baad ghar pe halla bolnge na?" sukanya started giggling.

"kya sukana tum bhi na! bhootwoot kuch nhi hota. Or main kya bhooto ki raani hu jo sb bhoot mere huzur me pesh hone yaha ayenge?"

no didi, bt who kya hain na tum itni sundar ho, kya pata koi bhoot humare ghar se khana churane aye or use tumse yaar ho jaaye?" sukanya mischiviously asked

"Dhaat! Paagl ladki" Jodha slapped her little sis's arm "chal so jaa tera kal college hain na."

Jodha went to bathroom and came out wearing a a baby pink night dress with blue stripe. She went towars the bed and dozed off in a minute.

It was nearly 1:30 at night. Suddenly Jodha's sleep got disturbed. Don't know why she suffocated. In somewhere in her mind she knows there is another thing in this room beside them two. She silently sit on the bed. Looking here and there. She know there is something in this room changed. After sometime she come to know the change is in the air of the room. There is an unknown fragrance in the air of this room. And shockingly it is a manly cologne. Which is most unexpected. She inhale the smell of cologne. No, this is not that cologne that her father used to have. Her heart started to race in high voltage speed. Is that there anyone in this room? She started to fear. Bt with all her courage she slide her chadar and wear her slippers.

Suddenly she looked at the mirror. Always she can used to see outside balcony from the window on her back. But today she is watching something unusual thing. She saw a dark shadow was standing there in the outside window. Bt the moment she looked towards backward the dark shadow slide away in electric speed. No one was there. She came out no, there is no one.

But when she turn right she saw the shadow was going toward the roof. She follows.

When she reached the rooftop, she again didn't see anyone. So she decided to go backside of their attic. But again she failed to see anyone there. She was about to go down to her room suddenly she saw on the rooftop of the attic. Oh my god! What was that! A dark shadowy human figure standing on the top of the attic roof.

She looked up. A minimum 5'9' tall shadow was standing there. Her full body started to sweat. Her eyes gone wide in fear. Her mouth go open in shock. But the next moment she saw and hear something which nobody can expect to watch or see.

The shadow's head turns down and it sat on his one knee. Her heart stop. The same cologne started to spread too heavy in the surrounding air. The shadow now fully sat on its one knee, and said in echoing voice which somewhere melted in the thin air...

"Happy Birthday Jodhaaa..."

Jodha was shocked to the core but before she can do something she saw the shadow started to vanish in the air . in a flick of second she saw there was no one In the attic roof, where she saw him.

"Aaahhh..." with a shrill scream Jodha with a thud fell on the roofbase unconscious.







i know it is short...bt as i say early my esktop in coma and i can borrow my uncls lappy fortoday only so i m givng u all the part 1 today. HOPE U ALL LOVE IT


NEXT UPDATE WILL BE AFTER 16 APRIL AS I SAID EARLIER.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Here comes the real bhoot😲 saying "Happy Birthday Jodha"

This story is really very different and interesting
Liked it very much
As you said do continue after 16th April
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Posted: 9 years ago
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FOR ALL THOSE WHOSE WANTS TO KNOWIS JALA IS DEAD? S HE IS A SPIRIT?
MY ANSWER IS "YES BOSS"😆 BUT PYAR KE MAMLEME WOH MARNE KE BAD BHI DILWALA HAI...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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You gave such a long list of menu!!😡I want to eat!!booohooo😭😭 Sukanya and Jodha talks are nice. Just like any siblings do.😆😳 And the last part was damn scary! I mean the way you described it was wow.😃 The tall and handsome ghost (or spirit, whatever) has come to wish Jodha!! Baapre!!
I want to read the next part jald se jald!😭 Who is the spirit? Any old admirer of Jodha or any friend or no one like this? I want to know.😳
It was short but a nice one. And the end left us in more suspense.👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats on ur new story😃
Quite a different concept this is👍🏼
Enjoyed the first part.
Sukanya and Jo's conversation was funny😆
What followed next is scary and ur Jo is really brave.Who would go alone in search of a shadow in the midnight😲At least,I won't😆
Thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Senapatichandri

FOR ALL THOSE WHOSE WANTS TO KNOWIS JALA IS DEAD? S HE IS A SPIRIT?

MY ANSWER IS "YES BOSS"😆 BUT PYAR KE MAMLEME WOH MARNE KE BAD BHI DILWALA HAI...😃

🤣
Great idea really!😃👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

You gave such a long list of menu!!😡I want to eat!!booohooo😭😭 Sukanya and Jodha talks are nice. Just like any siblings do.😆😳 And the last part was damn scary! I mean the way you described it was wow.😃 The tall and handsome ghost (or spirit, whatever) has come to wish Jodha!! Baapre!!

I want to read the next part jald se jald!😭 Who is the spirit? Any old admirer of Jodha or any friend or no one like this? I want to know.😳
It was short but a nice one. And the end left us in more suspense.👏

THE ONLY SPIRIT IN THE STORY IS JALAL YAAR😆.ITNA BI UNDERESTIMATE MAT KAR USE
ACCAH KIA SUSPENCE ME CHOD DIA VARNA NAHI PADHOGE TUM LOG MERI STORY
DONT TELLSGHOST YAAR...GHOCHU TYP LAGTA HAI SUNNE ME...CALL IT SPIRIT...
Edited by Senapatichandri - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fabulous start chandrika
And yes i agree there is a difference between ghost and sprits .
I loved the concept dear
Jalal is the spirit who came to wish jodha on her birthday .
But how did he come to know about Jodha .
I mean i know ghosts spirits bhatakte rehte hai but still there should be a reason for jalal loving her right .
Umm is it like jalal was in love with her when he was alive but due to some unfortunate incident he lost his life
Or something worse than it,he was killed by someone .
But now his spirit wants to get his love back and also punish the culprit who is behind hs murder .

Hmm in both ways it is intetesting .
Anyeays this is my pov
Waiting to read ur side of story :)
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh wow this is soo unique ha..
such m bahut maza aayega is story ko padhne m..
oh so jodha ka birthday ha..suprb..
suku ki baate haha..amazing..bhoot aayenge khana khane..hehe..
last part..oh god..too scary..suspense bhi yar..tall darl shadow..it must be our jallu..spirit hoyeee..
jodha ko chakkar aa gyii..haha..kisi ko bhi aa jate..agr aise koi wish kare to..
cant wait to read more yar..
cont soon buddy..
its really vry different..loved it

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