Akdha ss: A Spiritual Love ON HOLD till august

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys this is my second story on akdha...with a unique story line hope you all enjoy it

*my FF Humesha Tumko Chaha and this SS ki next chapter i will update after 16th april, coz my desktop is now in coma and my borthers exams are ongoing so my father decided woh computer after borther's exm thik karayenge..varna mara bhai padhayi nhi karega..so i m giving it frm my uncles lappy which i borrowed for a day...so bear for some days..agar aage hopey to zarur update dungi...


please guys mujhpe or meri story pe likes nd comments ki barish barsa do varna update nhi dungi



INDEX

*PROLOGUE- BELOW

*CHAPTER 1- PAGE 4

*CHAPTER 2 PAGE 8

*CHAPTER 3 PAGE 15

*CHAPTER 4 PAGE 22


















PROLOGUE

She is in tears. Why shouldn't not? Her father passed away yesterday. Her father. Her best friend. Her backbone left her in this lonely world alone to fight.

Her father Rajeev Mehta was a supportive personality in her family. He always support her in her every decision. For him she has now become a successful Lawyer. He loves his only daughter Jodha very much, and wants her to get settled in her life as soon as possible. But now he is no m re with her.

Jodha climb the stairs towards the roof. She had a chatayi" with her. It's a full moon night. She spread the chaytayi on the roof floor and sat on it. In moon light each and every object is glowing in the dark. Soothing cold breeze giving her burning heart coldness.

Suddenly she felt a small ta on her shoulder. She turn and there he is sitting beside her with a mild smile.

"tum aa gaye? Mujhe to laga ke aaj tum aaoge hi nahi"

"asa tumne socha bhi kaise? Apni sabse azeeez agar dukhi ho to mujhe use khush karne ke lie ana to padhega na?

She smiled a bit. He kept his hand on her cheek and started caring her smooth skin. She look towards him. She saw a pair of eyes looking to her with all love in this world. A tear drop fell from her eyes looking at his love filled eyes for her. His thumb erase the tear drop with care, as it is erasing all her sorrow.

She closed her eyes to fill his ice cold hands shivering touch.

"mujhe chodke kabhi mat jana Jalal. Main bohot akeli padh jaungi. Har rat har dukh such banti hu tumhare sath, eklaute share ho tum ab mere. Ab to papa bhi chale gaye chod ke. Agar tum chale gaye to main mar..." he close her mouth with his cold hand.

"chodke to is dunia ko main kabka jaa chukka hu main Jodha. Yeh baat to tum bhi janti ho. Per khuda kasam tum chodke nhi jaa sakta. Jo sath main jaan rehke nhi paa saka, who mujhe ab mil raha hai. Or is ke lie main kuch bhi kaunga. Main har chees chod sakta hu, per tumhe kabhi nahi. Lekin tum kabhi marne ke baat mat karna. Tum kya jano marna kya hota hai. Chaho to mujhse pucho...marne ke baad kaisa lagta hai"




HOPE U ALL LIKE IT😊

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Shinning_Stuti thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Bhoot???😲😲
Update soon. Can't bear the suspense!😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First of all congrts for new story dear. U know when i start to read joja's part i thought for one second that jalal ghost hona chahiye and what a coincident yehi huaa.
Now i m eagerly waiting for first chapter dear plz update soon
amitaprasad thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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dangerous start in the beginning.is he a ghost? do not make us afraid.clear the confusion soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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what the
is jalal a ghost
oops

awsum
update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ha ha jalal is dead. Very different concept😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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congo for new story dear..
y ky jalal ghost..o teri..xcited to read more re..cont soon..suspense..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congrats for new story👏

Interesting prologue..
Jodha is so sad for her father's death and Jalal speaks to her
Is Jalal a ghost😲

Continue soon, curious to read more..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg jalal is dead
Update soon dear
Can't wait
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow congrts fr new story
Nyc proloug yr continue
Updatee

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