Shots on Vidha ' Hum saath saath hai ' Updt shot 2 pg 4 9 ap

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Hello guys it my first shot on vidha i will try to make it nice for you n please let me know how it is ok n show me your support too .


its on the current track .


Ignore my spellying mistake ok here we go



Hum Saath Saath Hai


Shot One


ts start At home raja try to misbehave with dhani as they were alone , dhani hit him throw thing on him n try to run .


She colaspes with viplav n she hug him .


viplav save dhani from raja n warn him to stay away from his wife with an angry tone n glare .


Raja thought " viplav is did not hit him as he thought he may do it but what happen , why he came back , he thought viplav left now he will get dhani but no he came back again " ;he was angry .


Vidha room


viplav hug dhani from behind n say .


Vip " Dhani im sorry to leave you alone , im happy also as you thought of my family , you make me realise what is necessary for me thx a lot " ; he drop a kiss on her neck .


Dhani with shy n happy as her hubby protect her n also know his duties as a husband n as a son ; she hold his hand n smile she reply him .

Dha " viplav i thought you wont understand me n will not be back , when raja misbehave with me i was afraid first then i realise i should fight myself to save me , when i saw you i was relief n happy to know you will not leave me right ? " .


Viplav turn her to him , he smile n hold her hand n say

"Dhani i promise i wont leave you alone again not when this raja is here , im sorry but you know that i would not be able to live without you nah , i was in anger , i could not see my sis life to be ruine n i would not be able to do any thing , i felt helpless , why they did not see their true colors " ; he was sad .


Dhani make him sit on bed n she go on knee on edge of bed n she go on knee hold his hand n say

" Viplav tum fikar matkaro hum saath saath hai na , hum ye pareshani saath mitadegey , hum raja ka asliyat sabko digadege , pareshan hone sai kuch bi hasil nahi hoga , balki hum kuch bi nahi karpawe gey , aur raja woh yehi shahta hain ke hum majbor hojaye aur ghar ko chor dei , hum dono ek hai to har muskil asan hoga hamare liye nah , mujhe tumpar barosa hai , ke tum himmat nahi haroge uske samne hai na tumko sirf apne kusa ko kabu mein karna hoga , raja tumse khele ga " ; she kiss his hand with passionate .


Viplav apreciate her gesture n her love for him which is strong n feel proud to have her in his life as a life partner , he start his antic of love to her , he stand up n make her sit on his lap n say " Dhani tumne saach kahan hum saath saath hai aur ye muskil ghari mein sabkuch asan hoga , mein apne kusei ko control kardu ka , lekin ab mein uss raja ko aisa sabak sikadou ga ke woh kabi bhi ar aurat par buri nazar nahin karpayega , ab raja ki baath choro aur pyaar ki baath kare meri pyari si biwi hmm " .


He caress her waist in a passionate way , which give her shiver n blush too , he cont moving his hand on her bare waist with sensation , she too caress his arm with sensation n try to control her emotions , he start to drop kiss on her neckline , she start to morns with love , viplav make her lay on bed n they make love .


Raja who feel helpless as viplav is back n know he wont be able to do his work , he get frustation angry he throw things in his room .


Shalu enter n saw all the mess she ask what happen . He say he feel lonely as it their first night n he was alone .


Shalu say sorry n hug him ; he hug her n did smirk to fool her .


Next day morning dadaji told them for ritual for raja , n ask dhani to wash raja feet , dhani did a relax sign to viplav but he told her he will do it .



Raja was happy as he humilate vidha n has smile on face n stare at dhani too . Unknown to him viplav poor hot water n burn his feet , he press his feet to wash n he glare him , raja could not stop him nor shout he just say it ok stop now as his feet was burning .


Viplav say " arey rajaji itni jaldi bas kiya huwa ab dona nahin hai , isey mein aise dodu ga ke jab tum chaloge to choch samajke chaloge kahin peiyre ralat raste pe nalejay " ; with a glare n a tone way .


Raja mum say stop now n she saw raja feet being red n knew viplav done something n ask raja if every thing is ok .


Raja just shake his head as yes n try to stand up n walk even being burn he stay as nothing happen n stare viplav .


Dhani was sure viplav done some thing n she smile looks at viplav , viplav wink at her n smile to her .


Viplav ask raja mum they should leave before evenning other wise they will have to stay again n it not good for them to stay in Laws ; with a taunts way .

Mami reply they will go evenning sure n leave with raja mum .


Vidha go in their room , both laugh on raja state . Viplav say
Raja got his first welcome from me dhani , n this was for trying to misbehave with you n will get more in head too ; he laugh .


Dha " Viplav i know this mum will not go from here easily " .


In Raja room


He could not walk due of pain . his mum ask why viplav do this . he told them the reason .


She fume in rage n ask him " why you cant control your lust for dhani , you should wait for the right time to insult her , here there are lots of people , now he ask us to leave too " .


Raja " what how dare he to ask you to leave , you should plan something to not go , viplav i wont leave you now you insult me i will too do with you now " ; with smirk on face .


That is guys my first shot i did not do same like yesterday ep .


Hope you wilk like n will leave your comment too .

i will wait for your humble comment

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice Hansa...👏👏..enjoyed reading it😊
earlier i was a regular viewer of YHM but i quit the show after watching few episodes after Ishra Con scene coz then IKRS started and i got hooked to this show and i had earlier read a few Ishra stories of urs..they are also wonderful...all are nice👍🏼
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thnk u for writing on ViDha Hansa..😳
Good shot..
Hope to see more creativity frm u dear..😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks Hansa for the post
will read and comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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INDEX 😃

SHOT 1 PG 4

Edited by --HANSA-- - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barbie_KK9629

very nice Hansa...👏👏..enjoyed reading it😊

earlier i was a regular viewer of YHM but i quit the show after watching few episodes after Ishra Con scene coz then IKRS started and i got hooked to this show and i had earlier read a few Ishra stories of urs..they are also wonderful...all are nice👍🏼



thank you so much for this huge compliment from you im glad you used to read my works thx a lots
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great effort! Loved reading it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NusiSg

Thnk u for writing on ViDha Hansa..😳
Good shot..
Hope to see more creativity frm u dear..😊



thank you will do my max
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sura123


Thanks Hansa for the post

will read and comment



thank you for like it
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