Our love shall not know death - A Swasan TS(Part 3-Final Updated-Pg 6) - Page 8

Its Superb.. 👏 ..loved all the parts 😊

Originally posted by: sneharay

Its Superb.. 👏 ..loved all the parts 😊

What brilliant piece of writing. I absolutely loved the 3S. The reference with GWTW was actually pretty good. It does resemble them to a certain extent.

Originally posted by: misaki

Shruti🤗

It was such a pleasure to have you read my work and get to have such amazing feedback, no thanks required re.😕 In fact I should be the one grateful. It gives me immense joy to have people that I know read what I write😃

Re Part 1 - Swara being proud, that was all me😆 I mean seriously if Sanskaar really was my hubby, how could I not be proud of my guy!😉 I loved writing that part since Swara on the show doesn't give him bhaav only. That girl frustrates me to no end! 🤔

Shru - Anime re not Cartoon😭 Anime targets both adult and children and plus its much cooler. Lol now I really sound obsessed. Can't help it😆 Aww! I adore Shin chan but that's again not exactly my kinda anime. If you want to you shoudl really try Inuyasha. Now I really wouldn't mind having another person to obsess over Anime/ Manga😛

Discussing books with loved ones - Unfortunately never had the pleasure. None of the people that I love love reading as much as I do. Here's hoping that changes real soon😆 It really does give you so much insight into a people's mind na? Haha - on the book choice.! 😛 (Me loves the book, sorry Swara😆) Ashley and Ragini obsession - it was the first thing that came to my mind😆

Re Part 2

I despise Shekar and of course share the same feelings as you about DP - really wanted to add that bit in. I really like the guy. Most sensible person after Sanskaar on the show or should I say only 2 sensible people on the show? (RP of course is slowly showing some signs of being Sanky's dad) On EC - you don't like him huh? 😆 I was always Team Edward, read the books only for him otherwise Bella seriously had me going🥱 I really feel like the Swara on the show is definitely Bella to Sanskaar . Pain in the ass and completely useless.😵

I loved writing the wifey - hubby part , we hardly get those on the show. Sanskaar on the bed without changing is again me. Way too lazy😃 Ohh I am so happy you liked the saree part ( was little apprehensive about it , very new to writing and all I hoped it wouldn't come out looking cliche'd and comical) and Sanskaar's reaction, I couldn't stop grinning as I thought about it. Our Sanskaari Sanskaar🤣

Madam has to work hard na? Backless blouse toh banta hain!😉

Re Part 3

Oh I was so happy with all the reactions for Kavita's reentry. 🤣 *sadist muh* Some people were actually slightly disappointed that it was a dream. They wanted Swara madam to suffer more.😆 While others were d confused and thought I had turned into IF- Ekta bringing dead people back. 🤣 I wanted to make Swara suffer!😈 Sanky would never allow for that to happen in real, so dream it was. I loved making her sweat! 😆 Arey no re Shru , I am a sucker for happy endings I can never get myself to write a tragedy unless of course it made sense like GWTW😛

Oh the kick - was to obviously add a little humor after that really draining and serious nightmare stuff. I loved writing it since it was Swara actually tryin to kick Laksh - had to kick hard na?😆 Sorry Sansku😛

But then he got his confession , so I'm sure he's not all that angry at me for it. 😃 I loved writing that confession, wanted to make it real and intimate since it couldn't be filmy and public. I am happy that everyone liked it. I actually thought about letting them stay too honestly , but it had been a long night when I finished writing it, so couldn't write anymore. Sorry😆 but they definitely continued where they left off after they reached MM.

Thank you for this amazing and wonderful Feedback Shruti🤗 Makes me feel really really happy to share it with you guys and get such lovely comments. Makes all the effort so worth it🤗

Originally posted by: amimus

What brilliant piece of writing. I absolutely loved the 3S. The reference with GWTW was actually pretty good. It does resemble them to a certain extent.

Looking forward to read more from you.

OMG!! This 3S was just awesome, brilliantly written!! Just amazing!!👏 I'm speechless. All the 3 parts were so beautiful, but I really loved the last part specially Swara's confession and the consequence after that (the kiss)😉 ☺️ At one point I was really very disappointed to think that Kavita was back in Sanskar's life. But got a huge relief after knowing that it was just Swara's nightmare.😆 But Sanskar was ri8. Only because of this nightmare, Swara was able confess her love for him.😳 Loved it.😊