Our love shall not know death - A Swasan TS(Part 3-Final Updated-Pg 6)

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PenguinBaby

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Posted: 9 years ago

#51

Oh my! Will you believe me if I said that I cried? That was soo good!!! Just superb👏😉

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: bloomnskyrules
This part was brilliant! I was close to hyperventilating until I read that whole Kavitha rhing was a dream! *phew*
That was one epic confession and I loved that paragraph and I was close to tears along with Sanskaar. I truly hope that Swara confessing to Sanskaar is not that far off into the future in the show either but I am not holding my breath...
Will wait eagerly for the update of your other fic!

Haha! Surprise! 😛I love how like Swara everyone else too thought she was back😆 Arey.Me no RS or Ekta re. Bring dead people back?😆 SwaSan have enough problems as it is because of Swara Devi's mahaanta. Sometimes I seriously feel like Sanskaar should just say "Frankly dear, I don't give a damn" and just walk away from all the madness. But then obviously I know he can only truly be happy when he gets her love in return so my heart wants that for him too

I loved writing that confession. It made me very very very happy😃 Aww..🤗 Jhappi for making you tear up. I'm happy that you loved it that much.

Ugh! Swara's confession on the show... I'm not holding my breath either. This is definitely going to continue for month and a half or 2 before anything remotely positive can happen. Indian serials.

Yes I will start working on it today , hopefully will be able to put up a part by sunday😊

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: asexualflower
Hey Geetha,

Wow your 3S was just tooo good!
The first part was super cute, the fact that instead of telling him her feelings she ended up getting into an argument with him! 😆 Even though I didn't understand the manga and GWTW references I liked the part all the same. In fact you made me want to read GWTW. And just wondering the manga you referenced, is that the only plot for manga or are there others? Cause I know there are other stories like Sailor Moon and stuff but I'm not sure if they're also called manga. 😕 Sorry if that was a stupid question.
Also the second part was too cute, that made me excited to read the last part.
And then in the last part I was basically holding my breath the entire time when Kavita showed up. I was like OH NO! And when I found out it was a dream I was somehow relieved and disappointed at the same time. I was like phew Lakshya really isn't kidnapping Swara. But at the same time I was like aw man the whole Kavita returning thing had lots of potential.
But then I got to the end and any sort of disappointment I'd had vanished completely. I LOVE LOVE LOVE Swara's confession. All the things she listed to make Sanskaar realize she truly loved him. It was like the cutest thing ever. Oh and with the third part I finally understood the title. It was quite a fitting title I must say!
Overall great 3S and I can't wait to read more of your stuff. 😳
Thanks for the PM by the way!
Oh and I read your little note at the top for partners. Please do update soon! I've been waiting and waiting for Swara and Sanskaar to finally meet each other. Of course the background information you've been providing in the past few parts is important too, but I can't wait to see the confrontation! Of course I don't mean to rush you, I'm just an impatient person. 😛
Anyways once again great 3S

- Sapna

Hey Sapna🤗

It's great to have your feedback on this one. I knew you were reading almost every update and I was very happy to know that you were so fond of my work. It's a great feeling.I had this huge smile on my face the entire time I was reading it.😃

About the manga part- Sailor Moon itself is another manga Sapna. Manga is a generic term used for all japanese comics. Hmm...how do I put it? It's the same as novels.There are obviously a lot of stories of different genre right? Same way even manga has different stories with different genre. Inuyasha was one story , Sailor moon is another story. I hope that answered the question? It was not at all a stupid question re. Even if it was why sorry? I ask a lot of stupid questions, you learn something different every time😛

The second part was definitely lot less serious and fun to write about too. I am happy to read how much everyone liked that part. Wasn't very sure about how it would be received. Now I am happy that I decided to make it fun. Especially because the last one was a serious one except the very end ofcourse😆

Wow! You are the first person to mention that you wanted the nightmare and Kavita to be real.😆 See I think Kavita angle has a lot of potential too. If they decide to handle it well. I think somewhere down the line we will definitely see Kavita's incident resurface since they obviously won't have a bigger obstacle than past love after SwaSan milan. But I'm not at all a fan of dead people coming alive on Indian Soaps especially. There will be no logic or common sense in those tracks. Even if they manage to get her back. It will not be handled this way. They will probably make Kavita evil just because they have to justify Sanskaar choosing Swara. Things like moving on and falling out of love won't be enough to make the aunties understand or fetch high TRPs. So I really hope this does not happen. I would rather have Kavita remain normal and good. Because Sanskaar would have never fallen in love with someone evil. He's not Laksh, he actually has brains to see who is right and who is wrong.😊 OMG the reply to the comment got so big😆

I loved to read that the initial disappointment was gone with the confession and the ending. I LOVED writing the confession. Honestly , it brought so much sukoon and tandak to my heart. I am so happy that you loved it as much as you did.🤗 Ah! Glad you caught on to the title. Thank you😊 I love people reading and enjoying what I write Sapna so it really is my pleasure to send PMs and have you guys read it.

I will be soon working on Partners. I know it's been long and I haven't updated. I also know every one is waiting for their confrontation. I honestly don't know how that will happpen and when. Haha! But I am eager to make them meet too so let's see how soon that can happen😆

Thanks love for this wonderful comment. XOXO

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Res. Will reply in detail later Geethu. 🤗 But awesome touch with the nightmare sequence. Thankfully, I did suspect it was Swara's nightmare, else I might have had palpitations!! 😉

Viji🤗

No problem at all. Will wait for your take no matter how long it takes. Haha-The title was a give away huh?😆 Glad to hear you approve😆

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan
awesome ts
loved it

Hey Prachi,

Thank you so much for liking it.

Happy to hear that you loved it.😃

That signature of yours made me grin. I'm so proud that Shantanu, Macey and the team won WOD. It was an amazing performance🥳

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: Messi2
res...unres geets u cracked up lol i know this wasn't a funny fiction nd all dat kavita thing made me so afraid but ...me tho pagal

swara's dream dat it was lakshji plan to separate kavita sanskar was rofl swara thinks ki ji has brain dat he can do all dis double rofl ...

playing football line cracked me up crazy fan hun na ...but the confession nd aftermath was superb

Hey Messi/Jesi,

Haha- I guess you being such a huge football fan I should have expected you to love that line😆

And everyone were scared of Kavita actually taking him away 😃 Loved reading everyone's reactions to it.😆

Hahahaha Laksh definitely has no brains to do all that especially looking at how he's become a puppet in Ragini's hands. The same guy being behind something as big as this especially in the show is no way! Uss bande mein itni akal kaise?🤣 Lol you managed to crack me up with your reasoning for Laksh.

I'm so happy reading how everyone loved the confession. I loved writing that part so damn much. Makes me happy reading that you guys liked it as well🤗

Thank you Messi XOXO

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 9 years ago

#57

Geethu...What do I say about this update? First, you referenced a quote each, from 2 of my very favorite movies. 😊 And in the present climate on the serial, you made my heart very happy by making Swara (if only in a nightmare), extremely insecure about losing Sanskaar to someone else. 😛

I'll be frank, while I'm a HUGE fan of Sanskaar's steady, enduring, unshakable kind of love, I do feel the poor guy has been wearing his heart on his sleeve for too long. In the serial, he's allowing Swara to take him too much for granted (so far at least), and to me, that is not a very promising sign. I mean, Ok, she doesn't love him as yet (or at least, thinks she doesn't), but why impose on him so much, even as a best friend? This is not the Swara we were shown, at the beginning of the serial, who I would have been proud to be friends with, if I knew her personally. This dumbed down version---well, I'm not sure.

So, sadistically, it did give me some joy to see Madam sweat it out on your Fic (though I knew with a fair degree of certainty, that Kavita's reappearance was a nightmare 😛).

Swara's enumeration of all the reasons why she knows she loves Sanskaar, was touching. At least he got convinced, the way Swara has been shooting him down, it certainly would take a lot of effort by her to reassure him!

And the kiss was 😳 ☺️

Nice work, Geethu. I think we can derive more satisfaction from the Fics on the forum these days than on the serial we love so much. 😕 I hope and pray the CVs do a course correction soon.

Edited by CogitoErgoSum - 9 years ago

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Anu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#58

Arrey dear...u gave me heart attack...One sec I thought whether am reading ekta serial update r wt...

That kavitha back scene ...ufffo u have taken my jaan dear...

Thank god it was a dream...

And the end part awe...such a lovely one...

Loved it so much...

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: CogitoErgoSum
Geethu...What do I say about this update? First, you referenced a quote each, from 2 of my very favorite movies. 😊 And in the present climate on the serial, you made my heart very happy by making Swara (if only in a nightmare), extremely insecure about losing Sanskaar to someone else. 😛

I'll be frank, while I'm a HUGE fan of Sanskaar's steady, enduring, unshakable kind of love, I do feel the poor guy has been wearing his heart on his sleeve for too long. In the serial, he's allowing Swara to take him too much for granted (so far at least), and to me, that is not a very promising sign. I mean, Ok, she doesn't love him as yet (or at least, thinks she doesn't), but why impose on him so much, even as a best friend? This is not the Swara we were shown, at the beginning of the serial, who I would have been proud to be friends with, if I knew her personally. This dumbed down version---well, I'm not sure.

So, sadistically, it did give me some joy to see Madam sweat it out on your Fic (though I knew with a fair degree of certainty, that Kavita's reappearance was a nightmare 😛).

Swara's enumeration of all the reasons why she knows she loves Sanskaar, was touching. At least he got convinced, the way Swara has been shooting him down, it certainly would take a lot of effort by her to reassure him!

And the kiss was 😳 ☺️

Nice work, Geethu. I think we can derive more satisfaction from the Fics on the forum these days than on the serial we love so much. 😕 I hope and pray the CVs do a course correction soon.

Viji!🤗🤗

I was actually surprised that no one had given much thought about the title. I really thought I should change it since it was such a dead give away. You certainly managed to catch it though😆

Shouldn't have doubted you for a second.

I am happy that you again loved the quotes.😃 I really wanted Swara to sweat before she confessed. Even if it was a dream. Couldn't just hand my Sanky over to her without her actually realizing how unbelievably for granted she has taken him to be. The confession had to be something that would for sure convince Sanskaar that she has fallen in love with him. I loved writing that part.😃 *sigh* Until we actually get to see it on screen we have to make do with our imagination and creativity

The Swara on the show- I have never known her prior to Sanskaar's entry on the show so I don't know how she was before Viji, But I have heard so many Swara fans saying how they have dumbed her down. What are they trying to do with that character? Every single time I think about her, it makes me want to break something.

I have the same feelings as you regarding Sanskaar's unquestioned ,unyielding belief and his unconditional love for her and the way she has been shown to take all of that for granted. Does she even realize how amazingly selfish she is being right now? What is wrong with that lady. I can understand her not being able to love him back. But no one can be as cruel as she is with the guy who claims to be in love with you. Even in that episode where Sanskaar declares that he doesn't want to take their relationship forward. She keeps quiet, oh that very poor try to tell AP did not even look convincing. She can stand against both the families when it comes to fighting for Ragini's haq( as we witnessed during durga pooja) but when it comes to actually telling the truth, Madam doesn't open her mouth. I can go on and on Viji but I have seriously had enough with her and there is nothing that she can do to redeem herself for everything she is making him go through, at least I will never manage to forgive her. Sanskaar should seriously stop being so mahaan. It makes me want to scream at him just like Kavita in this update did🤔

The kiss😛 My first time writing something like that. Came out alright I guess😆 😳 Had to make them kiss. I just had to!😆

Me too Viji. I have completely given up on getting a sensible SwaSan scene anytime soon. Fics will have to do😭

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago

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misaki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#60

Originally posted by: anu91
Arrey dear...u gave me heart attack...One sec I thought whether am reading ekta serial update r wt...
That kavitha back scene ...ufffo u have taken my jaan dear...
Thank god it was a dream...
And the end part awe...such a lovely one...
Loved it so much...

Hey Anu ,

Arey me no Ekta re!.🤣 No dead bodies coming alive in my fics ever.😆

Lol had to make Swara sweat before she confessed. She should realize Sanskaar is not something to be taken for granted na?

I'm happy that you liked the end. I liked writing it too😳

Thank you. X

Edited by misaki - 9 years ago