Our love shall not know death - A Swasan TS(Part 3-Final Updated-Pg 6) - Page 7

Originally posted by: Forum.Maniac

Oh my god, Geetu! What an epic finale to an amazing story ❤️

I had so much trouble reading this story, my nephew kept interrupting me and I kept shooting wistful glances at my phone. In the end, I put on Chota Bheem for him and finally managed to finish it 😆

Anyway, coming to Part 1, despite having not read Gone with the Wind and only having a basic idea abt it, I really found their conversation very indulging. Swara's attempt at making Sanskaar know abt her feelings totally backfired. It was hilarious 🤣

Coming to Part 2...I love DP, he send them on a trip. Wish this happens on the show too Sanskaar's speech really made me proud too. Again this is on my wish list too! How cute was he thgh when he childishly refused to remove his jacket and shoes and slept like that. Then Swara helped him after he fell asleep Such a cute scene this was. Sanskaar's reaction to Swara in the saree was adorable too.

Now the FINALE, it was epic. You almost gave me a heartattack 😆 When Sanskaar had that reaction seeing someone, I was hoping it was Ragini and not Kavita while being sure it was Kavita only. The conversation b/w them was really painful, you made me feel sympathy for Swara fr the first time. Beautifully described her feelings at that point of time! Then there was the Laksh twist which again almost gave me a heart attack and then Sanskaar agreeing with Kavita to leave and I was like What? That's not possible. And then, Laksh showed up grabbing Swara and I swear if u had gone on any longer, I wld hav srsly lost it. I was so relieved when it turned out a nightmare 🤣

Swara's hug, her relief, her confession...everything was so romantic and beautiful. Sanskaar's reaction to it made me ☺️

Btw I scrolled up after reading the chapter and noticed the Part 3 title then "Nightmares and Endings". If only my nephew hadn't interrupted me, i wld have read that and saved myself a lot of trouble 😆

Originally posted by: SwaSanForLife

Oh my! Will you believe me if I said that I cried? That was soo good!!! Just superb👏😉

Originally posted by: tootiefrootie11

Geetu 🤗

Thanks for the lovely ending. I thought Mr and Mrs Aggarwaal would have a nubile young daughter but when I read Kavita returns I was like 😲😲 but despite that I was still enjoying Swara's pain at hearing the plain truth from Kavita 😆 (😈).

But then phew- dream or rather nightmare which was dream for us! I loved Swara's confession- thank God the silly girl managed to get her message across and her appreciation for Sanskaar was so soothing for me. The ending made me truly pleased and overall a nice fitting end to a great story! Well done Geetu.

PS: The Shawshank Redemption is always in my list of Top 10 faves- I have watched it more times that I care to remember and have read the book more than once too:) Am a huge King fan.

Originally posted by: ketty84

Love it

Originally posted by: misaki

Hey Sapna🤗

It's great to have your feedback on this one. I knew you were reading almost every update and I was very happy to know that you were so fond of my work. It's a great feeling.I had this huge smile on my face the entire time I was reading it.😃

About the manga part- Sailor Moon itself is another manga Sapna. Manga is a generic term used for all japanese comics. Hmm...how do I put it? It's the same as novels.There are obviously a lot of stories of different genre right? Same way even manga has different stories with different genre. Inuyasha was one story , Sailor moon is another story. I hope that answered the question? It was not at all a stupid question re. Even if it was why sorry? I ask a lot of stupid questions, you learn something different every time😛

The second part was definitely lot less serious and fun to write about too. I am happy to read how much everyone liked that part. Wasn't very sure about how it would be received. Now I am happy that I decided to make it fun. Especially because the last one was a serious one except the very end ofcourse😆

Wow! You are the first person to mention that you wanted the nightmare and Kavita to be real.😆 See I think Kavita angle has a lot of potential too. If they decide to handle it well. I think somewhere down the line we will definitely see Kavita's incident resurface since they obviously won't have a bigger obstacle than past love after SwaSan milan. But I'm not at all a fan of dead people coming alive on Indian Soaps especially. There will be no logic or common sense in those tracks. Even if they manage to get her back. It will not be handled this way. They will probably make Kavita evil just because they have to justify Sanskaar choosing Swara. Things like moving on and falling out of love won't be enough to make the aunties understand or fetch high TRPs. So I really hope this does not happen. I would rather have Kavita remain normal and good. Because Sanskaar would have never fallen in love with someone evil. He's not Laksh, he actually has brains to see who is right and who is wrong.😊 OMG the reply to the comment got so big😆

I loved to read that the initial disappointment was gone with the confession and the ending. I LOVED writing the confession. Honestly , it brought so much sukoon and tandak to my heart. I am so happy that you loved it as much as you did.🤗 Ah! Glad you caught on to the title. Thank you😊 I love people reading and enjoying what I write Sapna so it really is my pleasure to send PMs and have you guys read it.

I will be soon working on Partners. I know it's been long and I haven't updated. I also know every one is waiting for their confrontation. I honestly don't know how that will happpen and when. Haha! But I am eager to make them meet too so let's see how soon that can happen😆

Thanks love for this wonderful comment. XOXO

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Originally posted by: Smilelicious

Geetha i'm extremely sorry for unressing now
Coming to the TS, all i can say is that you did a wonderful work 👏
1st part: I loved the reference to the Gone with the Wind and Swara and Sanskar's conversation about it 😳 I never read any Manga, but yeah my sister is obsessed about them 😆 I guess she would love to read this story of yours 😳 I love the character of Swara here, she was trying any possible way to talk with him and confess about her feelings to him, but she didn't get a proper chance.
2nd part: Beautiful part 😳 DP is one of my fav character in the show and he really loved Swara & Sanskar 😳 Loved the part where you mentioned about the kanyadaan that DP did and not Shekhar. The way you analized Swara's character was fab; how she started to wearing sarees just because Sanskar loved her in that, she forced him to sleep on the bed and not in the guest room. Madam ji has to do some mehnaat now to confess her feelings 😉
She wore a backless blouse for her husband? Not bad Swara, not bad 😆 Totally loved Sanskar's reaction here 😳
3rd part: Another amazing update. The Kavita's part literally scared me 😲 Swara's fear of losing Sanskar was depicted superbly 👏 "Was this it? Was this the end for them?She didn't even get to fight for him. I have lost the battle before I could make my final move"
But at the end it was just a dream. Sigh of relief 😆 LOL she managed to kick Sanskar off the bed 🤣
The confession ❤️ Loved every bit of it Geetha 😳 And the kiss ☺️
When will she confess her feelings in the show? I guess we will have to wait for ages there
Wonderful TS Geetha 🤗

Originally posted by: The.Lannister

First & foremost, a BIG thanks for the PM 🤗

@Part 1:

Swara is such a proud wife as she sits in the audience watching Sanskaar address the students. You can almost feel her pride & joy in her husband

How cute is it to find your guy immersed in a cartoon😳 My knowledge of Manga: Shin Chan😆 That's it, and no not the story, just the name

Discussing books with your loved one is such a great way to spend time, you not only talk on something you both love but also get a lot of insight into his character. But could Swara have chosen a worse book for her intended goal??😆 Good comparison of Scarlett's almost unhealthy love for Ashley with Swara's madness for Swaragini🤢 Loved that quote on even the most deathless love wearing out.

@ Part 2:

DP being awesome & perceptive as always! He has always been more of a father to Swara than Shekhar can ever be.

Sanskaar as Edward Cullen? 🤢 Owww Gaaaddd! (Laksh style!) I wonder how many girls were actually listening to anything he said!😛 When the speaker is so handsome you can be assured not many

Oh my cutie just fell asleep without even bothering to change☺️ & swara nagging him like a wife ☺️ Poor thing must have been exhausted after such a long day.

Wifey has deciced to totally KHALLAS her husband this night 😆 Ab dinner mein mann lagna mushkil hai Sanskaar babu 😆 Bahar bahot thand hai?? 🤣 Can he get any cuter

@ Part 3:

Beautiful start with that quote about knowing what we care for when we are afraid of losing them. Sets the tone for the chapter.

You sure know how to give someone a mini heart attack😲 I was so terrified at the way things were getting out of hand😭 First Kavita coming back from the dead😕, then Sanskaar wanting to leave with Kavita😲 then that creep🤢 then that creep actually touching Swara & she not being able to call out to Sanskaar for help I thought you were going to turn this into a tragedy & I was gonna end up crying the whole night...

...but then 🤣 another owww gaaad toh banta hai yaha pe 🤣 why didnt u continue the dream a little bit longer & allow her to kick creepo properly😆 bechare sanskaar ko laath khaani padi 🤣

"My worst nightmare is losing you"...such a sweet & sincere way to confess😳 Why are they leaving? Stay on! I am sure DP would understand😉 & approve😆