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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soapbubble


Where IS that eggy emoticon when you need it! I'm going to order a full dozen!

Eggs!!??😲 But not raw ones plleeej.. A spanish omelette would do😃 with extra sauce😉
(Running for my life)😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dewcute



OK...apart from my name ,I didn,'t get anything 😛

Now I have questions in a jar,should I open it? 😳


Mareez e ishq ka kya hai, Jiya Jiya na jiya...
Sawaal hai toh kayi dil mein... kiya kiya na kiya...

What to say of the love sickened, they might live or they might not
The heart raises so many questions... they might get asked or they might not

😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soapbubble


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<div>Mareez e ishq ka kya hai, Jiya Jiya na jiya...
Sawaal hai toh kayi dil mein... kiya kiya na kiya...

What to say of the love sickened, they might live or they might not
The heart raises so many questions... they might get asked or they might not

😳



Wow...yaar! 😳

At least answer this question
..will I get an update today? 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Darlings,
Sorry to keep you waiting! I had hoped to have it up this morning but wasn't possible.
Update this evening... probably nine-ish IST 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: soapbubble

Darlings,

Sorry to keep you waiting! I had hoped to have it up this morning but wasn't possible.
Update this evening... probably nine-ish IST😛





Bubble...I Love You...

You are Amazing...!

😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
The Best of Things
(Ragya, Swasan) Fan Fiction Series +16
By Bubble

Chapter 68

Lakshya stood at the balcony and looked over at the stunning views of the mountains they were going to enjoy for the next three days. Their suite, at the topmost level of the restored haveli, was tastefully luxurious, wonderfully private and bedecked with flowers... it was fabulous! He stretched happily and turned to say something to his wife.

The words died on his lips. He came to lean against the door. Ragini was standing in front of a full length gilded mirror, carefully unpinning her gold-beaded red dupatta from her hair. She had only a couple of fastenings left to undo and the cloth fell away to one side revealing her ensemble in all its true glory. The ghagra sat low on her tapering hips, a slender chain of gold and rice pearls circled the waist... his eyes travelled up her creamy back, which was almost completely bare - but for a thin band of bejewelled red that represented a choli. From the shoulders a heavily tasseled cord stretched across, tied up in a tantalisingly easy knot... his mouth went dry.

He tried to speak. "Is.. is that what you had under the odhni all day?!"
She looked at him in the mirror with a little smile. "The odhni is to maintain the bride's decorum... and the choli is for the dulha."

She flung the dupatta on the sofa and stretched to reach for the dori behind her.

"I can help with that!" he offered.

She raised her eyebrows at his reflection in the mirror. "Do you need me to invite you?"

"No..." he said, "no, the choli is already doing that!"

+++

The atmosphere in the honeymoon suite was charged with a certain heated awareness from both the people occupying it.

Lakshya lounged in the plush sofa, scooping up his second gulab jamun. They had asked for a room service dinner and the chefs had outdone themselves in sending up a trolley of food to the honeymoon suite... light salads, a fragrant pulav, a platter of Indian flatbreads, a couple of curries, raita and quite an array of sweets. They'd eaten a judicious amount but somehow neither of them could do full justice to the meal.

As she stacked the dishes on the trolley again, Ragini picked up a medium sized glass jar that she hadn't noticed before. In the best Indian tradition, the room service had sent up a jug of badam dhoodh laced with saffron for the groom. She laughed out loud.

Not that her husband needed to depend on these supports, she thought with an uptilt of her lips. The beautiful floral decoration of two intertwined hearts on the king sized bed had been disturbed quite enough already... But she poured the milk into a glass anyway and took it over to where he was sitting.

"The hotel thinks you might need some milk on your suhaag raat, Lakshya!" she held the glass out to him, mischief in her face.

He cast her a loaded look before taking the glass from her hands. "I like this place. They think of everything!"

He raised the glass to his lips and then stopped as she perched near him. "Want some?" he asked.

She nodded.

He brought the glass to her lips and tilted it slightly. She took two sips and nodded. The milk marked the glass where it had been tilted. With eyes still locked with hers, he raised the glass to his lips, touching precisely where her lips had been and downed the rest in one go. She took the glass away with a raised brow and a provocative half-smile.

In many ways, theirs had been fraught, complicated relationship, but somehow, this one aspect between them had always been absurdly simple. Even in the early days, Lakshya had been attracted to her and found her a generous lover. He had discovered, to his surprise and relief, that they matched each other perfectly - in appetite and in attitude... neither of them cluttered lovemaking with feelings of guilt or hypocrisy. For Ragini, sex had been a tool to begin with; as she gradually relaxed into the relationship however, it had become a source of great pleasure, comfort... and hope! Such compatibility could only bode well for them.
Tonight, the passion between them took on an extra edge. He had taken her a little roughly earlier as he helped her out of her finery... dominant, branding her almost... even when he was spent, he had been loath to leave her, unable to wrench himself away... desperate, yielding to some unknown compulsion to make their coupling last. He had atoned for his ferocity a little... murmuring sweet words of apology... and in appeasing, brought her to peak again.

Now, she brought a bowl of halwa for herself and sat across him, eating it, rifling through a magazine the hotel had provided. Her face was scrubbed clean except for the sindoor in her maang. They had showered together earlier... Her washed tresses were loosely held back in a clasp, tendrils curling dry in the cool breeze. She wore his T shirt - a loose, grey, open necked shirt that threatened to slide off one shoulder. A wisp of hair teased her collar bone and she shook her head absently. She looked up to comment on the article she was perusing, but stopped short at the look in his eyes.
Suddenly breathless, she looked away. She turned deliberately to the paper, staring at it with unseeing eyes. A minute later, he tugged the magazine gently out of her hands, took her hands and pulled her up to stand. She looked into his eyes... they were unsmiling and half-lidded with desire... her lips parted involuntarily in response.

He bent, picked her up in his arms and strode into the bedroom.

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Posted: 9 years ago
I am the first !!!!!!!! 😳

Adi...where are u? 😛

Seems like you are not that good at stalking 😛 😆

Bubble...about the update...! It was beautiful!

Very well written...their love and passion for each other was portrayed beautifully

Ragini and Laksh ...! In this update I found them as Raglak and failed to find them as individuals...

I am eagerly waiting for the next chapter...I just want to see how or when Laksh will name his feelings...that he loves her ...that he 'Loves' Ragini !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its enchanting!! The complexity and simplicity of relationships... You have actually showed massive difference between the two couples, and they are both equally enticing.. Amazing writing Bubble!!👏
RagLak are like two long lost lovers finding each other again.. In a way its true.. They are very comfortable with each other at the same time intent on discovering each other as if new..
I loved how u described the suite, the food, basically the experience of the suite, and Ragini's attire.. Simply put, therefore easy to visualize..😃
Lovely chapter!! Your fic always leaves me warm n happy😊
Love,
Akshata😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh gosh!
That was so nice.
Why is your Raglak romance hotter than swasan 😲😭
Raglak romance pieces are so *I didn't have words to describe it*
Swasan are also aww, but Raglak take the throne in this sphere.
It's not a complaint ,but a typical swasan shipper behaviour🥱❤️
But this Lakshya man. amazingly brilliant. Itna sahi hai yeh Lakshya!
Your chapters instantly bring a smile on the face.
Not the useless drama, the natural feelings coming to surface.
Flawless.
I'm in love with your fanfic!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Bubble baby...
It was...enchanting...whole update was sooo hot...raglak are soo at ease with each other..loved their chemistry...i was blushing hard...

One complain...i want a hot scene for swasan too...no chunu munnu part...whole big part of swasan..romance..

I loved both swasan n raglak..and their way of expressing their love to each other...

Update soon..want next update of swasan...

Talia

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