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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey friends, again trying my hand in a drabble. Actually I was hearing the song from Veer Zara and realized the song was completely suitable for the current track. So, here I am writing it.

NOTE: Do not expect it has a happy ending as title itself says what has store.. Its going to be a emotional one, so if you don't like to read, you can avoid.

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Thank you.BR]

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Okay.. Here I am posting... Please read it... I hope you like it...

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Aur Phir Chal Diye... Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan...

Australia

Ishita drive back to her house after closing her clinic, Aaliya slept next to the driving seat. Ishita caressed her hair very affectionately, now she is the only reason that Ishita is alive. Somewhere she felt contended having a girl like Aaliya, this girl always use to make Ishita remember about her daughter - her daughter Ruhi, who called her Mumma for the first time. Though Ruhi wasn't her biological daughter, but she was her strength, her breathe that Ishita was living. But on that day everything shattered into pieces. Ishita lost everything in a single moment, her life turned upside down, the most precious persons of her life went away from her. As the incident occurred in her mind, she pressed the break in a jerk. Tears rolled out from her eyes, she never wished to have a life like this!! She wanted to take away her life but God sent someone in her life once again - Aaliya.. Ishita looked at her and smiled feeling contend.

Delhi

"Papa!! Papa!!" A 6years old girl ran out from her room seeing her father's arrival, without wasting time she jumped into his lap, "Papa.. See!! What I bought for you today." She showed him a trophy written 'best father' Raman's eyes filled with tears, he kissed on Pihu's forehead.

"Papa.. You like it?" Raman nodded with tears in his eyes, little Pihu wiped his tears gently and said, "Don't cry papa. You're the best papa in this world." Raman remembered Ruhi like how she used to console him when he was in pain, Raman looked at Pihu's face, she is the complete replica of Ruhi, the same eyes, the same smile and the same antics which Ruhi used to do.

"Pihu.. Go and play with dadi.." Raman landed her on floor and walked inside with the trophy, on his way he collide with Toshiji, "Raman?" As he heard her calling, he stopped, "Raman you remembered next week Ruhi and..." But Raman didn't let her finish, "Yes maa!! I remembered everything." He walked in.

"Raman every year.. I try to make you remember about Ishita's death..but all you remembered was about Ruhi only.. Why don't you understand Ishita hadn't at any fault. She did which she felt right, she was a mother. She would have thought about her kids safety. She didn't killed Ruhi, she was her life.." She cried bitterly.

Australia

Ishita made Aaliya sleep saying a bed time story, the story which Ruhi always demanded to listen...and every night when Ishita told her the story her eyes filled with tears. Aaliya wiped her tears with her tiny hands, "Amma? Why are you crying?" Ishita kissed her hand and made her sleep.

Ishita was resting her head on the headboard, Aaliya was holding her hand tightly near to her chest and that remembered about Ruhi how she used to stay to her Ishimaa. Ishita's eyes filled with tears, her every night went like this, it had been seven years, but the incident was still fresh in her mind, the accusations, the harsh words which Raman said to her was still fresh, she was holding the pain in her heart from last seven years. She wanted to kill herself, she couldn't bear the pain of loosing her daughter, she wanted to go to her Ruhi and that's why she tried to commit suicide.

Ishita was standing at the edge of the cliff from where Nidhi's car fall, tears were continuously rolling down from her eyes, she wasn't a murderer, she didn't kill her Ruhi..she wanted to save her. Raman's bitter words were ringing in her ears, he accused on her motherhood love. He accused, she is the worse than a step mother... He had break all his relationship with her. "We were together for Ruhi...now when she isn't present in between us then there is no meaning to stay together. From today I'm breaking all my relationship from you Ishita!!" All she could remember was his words only. The mind was corrupt with Raman's words and Ruhi's scream...her scream to save her from Nidhi... Ishita couldn't take it anymore, she closed her ears with her both palm. "I'm sorry Ruhi...your Ishimaa couldn't save you. I'm sorry." She collapsed on the ground crying. "You choose your baby over Ruhi. Ishita today you proved there is none more selfish than you, I'm helpless, else I would have not left you, from today, there is no place for you in my life." She remembered what Raman said to her, she cried aloud but in next moment, she wiped her tears, "No. I can't live without you Ruhi...your Ishimaa is coming to you bachha!!" She made her mind to kill herself, she stood up and jumped from the edge...

One month later

Ishita opened her eyes, she had no idea where she was...she only remembered what she did last in her sense, Ishita looked around and found a nurse who worriedly rushed out calling the doctor... She realized she was in hospital.

"Doctor... Who took me here?" She asked once the doctor checked her when he doctor showed her the guy, "Mani you?"

From that day, Ishita was living with Abhimanyu, from six month she couldn't overcome from the trauma, she almost forget to live when Abhimanyu asked her to start a fresh life. They moved to Australia where Ishita came to know about Aaliya - Abhi's daughter who stayed with her grandparents after her mother's death. She was only one year old when Ishita met with her. Ishita felt contend when she met with her, it was the same feeling when she met Ruhi for the first time. This girl became her life to live and for her Ishita became her Amma!!

Ishita placed a soft kiss on Aaliya's forehead and gently removed her hand from her grip. Ishita walked to the study table where Aaliya kept a trophy written 'best mom' she caressed the trophy and remembered how Ruhi gave her this kind of trophy and called her mumma... Still the moments were fresh in her mind, it never faded..

Do Pal Ruka Khwabon Ka Karvan...
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahan Hum Kahaan...

Raman walked in his room and kept the trophy beside another trophy, it was the trophy which Ruhi gave to Ishita. He took the trophy in his hand and caressed it. He had lost everything. His Ruhi, his Ishita who were his breath to live. Ruhi - who learn him what daughter meant for every father and Ishita - who learn him to love once again, he had forget to live when Shagun left him but Ishita...from when she entered in his life, everything changed, he started to live... But circumstances never let them to live happily and that's the reason that he is once again alone.

Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan...
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan ...

Tum The Ke Thi Koi Ujli Kiran...
Tum The Yaa Koi Kali Muskayi Thi...

Raman looked at the Ruhi's photo, she had a beautiful smile on her face, the smile whenever Raman looked at that smile, all he remembered was Shagun's face and that led him to stay away from his own daughter. But Ishita made him realize how beautiful her smile was that whenever you look at her, your every stress, every pain would have gone...

Tum The Yaa Sapnon Kaa Thaa Saavan...
Tum The Ke Khushiyon Ki Ghataa Chaayehe Thi...

Though Raman had many memories captured in albums but Ishita... She had nothing with her.. Hardly she got a photo of Raman and Ruhi together. Ishita caressed the photo.. She looked at Ruhi's face, this girl made her dream to have a beautiful happy family - She, her Ishimaa, her papa, her Adi bhaiya and a chotu baby. Ishita remembered how little Ruhi first time asked her papa how a baby could come in women's womb, she demanded Shravan was having a baby and she too wants.. Raman and Ishita had no words to say on that time as they weren't sharing the bond but when their relationship changed, Ruhi's continuous demand made them to step ahead for Ruhi's sake... Ruhi was the thread that brought Raman and Ishita close...

Tum The Ke Thaa Koi Phool Khilaa...
Tum The Yaa Milaa Thaa Mujhe Nayaa Jahaan...

Ishita remembered how her Amma told her that on the day she'll meet someone and instantly fall in love and that happened. She met with Ruhi on the road and Ishita felt connected, she gave her life to save her from the accident, she remembered in a one glance how Ishita gave her entire life to Ruhi, how she wished to be with her, how her mind always captured with Ruhi, how she always thought about Ruhi's happiness first.. And most importantly, for Ruhi she got Raman whom she loves with her full heart. Though sometimes Raman's bitter words hurt her badly but in this seven years she never hated him for a nano second, every time she prayed for his well being..

Do Pal Rukaa Khwabon Kaa Kaarvaan...
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan...

But finally the thread torn breaking every relation, making Raman Ishita parted away..

Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan...
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan ...

Ishita slide down on the floor crying holding the photo close to her heart. She missed Ruhi a lot, she missed Raman a lot but she had no courage to face him once again, she felt herself a curse that for her Ruhi wasn't with them today, they weren't together today.

Days passed

"Dr.Ishita..you have to go to India to attend an audit there.." A senior doctor informed, hearing the word India her heart skipped a beat.

"India? Where in India?" She asked with so much courage and in her heart she prayed it wouldn't Delhi.

"Delhi.."

"No!!" She said getting panicked, but composed herself saying, "I mean..sorry doctor but you know Aaliya is so small, I can't leave her here." She made an excuse to avoid the trip.

"I know doctor but you have no option.you're a senior doctor.. You have some responsibilities. If you can then take Aaliya with you, its about only two days." Unwillingly Ishita agreed to go.

Ishita landed in Delhi airport after seven years, everything changed here a lot. On her way from airport to hotel was silent as silently she was remembering the days which she spent in Delhi, many things changed here a lot. Does her Amma appa shifted somewhere else? Does Bhalla family shifted somewhere else? As soon as the thought occurred in her mind, she consoled herself saying, "No Ishita!! You can't go weak.. Be strong.. Do your work and go back to Australia. You're not meant to be here.." A tear rolled out from her eyes.

It had been two days, Ishita was in Delhi, she had done her work here, after three hours, she has the flight to Australia. Ishita was so restless today.. It was the day when Ruhi left her forever, she was in Delhi today, she wanted to cherish those moments which she spent Ruhi, who knows when she can get another chance to come. Not thinking much, she checked out from hotel before the time. First Ishita visited the park where she and Ruhi used to come when Ruhi used to upset. Ishita was going to get down when she realized it wasn't safe to go out open so she covered her face in a manner that only her eyes were shown. She visited every place and cherish those moments after seven years and finally the car stopped at the place where she lost everything.

Ishita walked down from car, it was deserted place, she walked to the edge and remembering the incident when suddenly she spotted a car and saw him getting down, her heart skipped beating, she was seeing him after seven years. Ishita quickly hide herself behind some trees so that he couldn't see her. Raman walked to the edge, his eyes were moist, every year on this day Raman comes here, not for Ruhi only...for Ishita also.

"Why did you left me? Why?"

Ishita was hiding so close to him that she could hear him, it had been seven years she didn't hear his voice. Her eyes filled with tears, seeing him in so much pain, the pain for loosing his daughter.

"Tell me Ishita.."

Ishita? Her legs started shivering like hell to hear her name from his mouth. She wanted to go to him, to touch him to feel him..

Tum The Yaa Khushboo Hawaon Mein Thi...
Tum The Yaa Rang Saari Dishaaon Mein The...

Raman collapsed on ground crying bitterly, "I know.. I know Ishita. I was wrong.. I shouldn't have tell you such words, but you knew your Raman..you knew very well I was mad at that time.. We had lost our daughter... Our Ruhi.. Who brought us close. We promised her we'll be together always, then could you break your promise? Tell me Ishita.."

Ishita remembered how Ruhi tied their hand with a dupatta and ask them to promise to be together always.. Ishita couldn't able to control her tears, she sobbed silently.. She never thought Raman would have in so guilt after loosing her... Ishita remembered how Raman took promise from her when he placed the ring inside her finger and she promised him to not leave him ever.

Tum The Yaa Roshni Raahon Mein Thi...
Tum The Yaa Geet Goonje Fizaaon Mein...

"You learn me to love, to live... I was a heartless man, I never showed the love to my daughter but you learn me, you changed me, you gave me everything back. I was complete for you then why did you leave me? I took everything from me... We had lost Ruhi but you were there with me.. But today.. Today I have nothing, I hate you. I hate you Ishita for leaving me alone." He cried and silently Ishita too cried with him.

Tum The Mile Yaa Mili Thi Manzilein...
Tum The Ke Thaa Jaadoo Bharaa Koi Samaa...

Ishita wanted to sooth his pain, she wanted to tell him that she is alive, his Ishita is alive. Ishita stepped ahead to go to him but stooped in a far. From inside her heart, still she felt herself responsible for what happened seven years, she felt responsible for what Raman gone through in these years, she didn't want to go back to him, today she really felt herself curse on their lives. She turned and very steadily, not letting him know, she walked to her car.

Do Pal Rukaa Khwabon Kaa Kaarvaan...
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan...

Raman was so much lost in his thoughts when suddenly he felt her presence. He could feel her, Raman turned and saw her getting inside the car, though he couldn't able to see her face but he had a gut feeling that was Ishita...

"Ishita?" He called her but she didn't stopped today, she felt it would be better to stay away from him, she doesn't want him to give pain anymore. She cried inside the car.

Do Pal Ki Thi Yeh Dilon Ki Daastaan...
Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan...

"Let's go driver!!" She sobbed.

Raman knew it was Ishita, he ran to stop her but in mean time the car started leaving... Raman collapsed on ground realizing, may be he was thinking much, as if it was Ishita then she should have stopped when he called, he cried recalling Ishita and shouted her name in pain...

Aur Phir Chal Diyeh Tum Kahaan Hum Kahaan...

|| THE END ||

I really don't know what I wrote... Whatever came in my mind just penned then down, had no courage to read it.. Please guys, read it and tell me how it was... I'm really nervous about this story...

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kaa1202

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Posted: 9 years ago

I am waiting...😎

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It was good Ritika..

Both of them remembering the past which haunts them till now..

Both missing each other like anything..

She is back & it hurts her to see him like this..

But still she thinks its good for both to part ways.

It was nice drabble yaar & I liked it very much...

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Ritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hey guys!! Updated... Please check... 😊

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

Super duper starting

Waiting for someone to write on current track

Thanks for pm

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty
Super duper starting
Waiting for someone to write on current track
Thanks for pm

Thank u dear

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ishra00

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Posted: 9 years ago

Very emotional. I wish cv had written like this. Plz continue it n unite ishra

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ishra00
Very emotional. I wish cv had written like this. Plz continue it n unite ishra

Well I haven't decide anything yet.. But will try... And thank u..

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anisha960

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Posted: 9 years ago

very nicely written

very beautifully you write d emotions through which might have gone through
I just feel nice that raman still remember ishita n he loves her but hates her for leaving him
thnx fr pm

plz try to continue it n make ishra unite

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Ritika

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: anisha960
very nicely written

very beautifully you write d emotions through which might have gone through
I just feel nice that raman still remember ishita n he loves her but hates her for leaving him
thnx fr pm

plz try to continue it n make ishra unite

Thank u so much dear. I am glad that u liked it.. Yes!! I got same request from one of my reader, I definitely try to make something... Thanks once again

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