Taken: A SwaSan OS. PART B UPDATED *PG 4* 14 Oct

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arshi21

@arshi21

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: preetywoman
OMG!!OMG!!OMG!! 😳
This was so so so cute 😳
Loved every bit of it ❤️

Sanskar really aaid that? 😆
OMG!! I cant stop my laughter and my roomie thinks I have gone crazy 🤣

Please do write more 😛

Thank you😊

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arshi21

@arshi21

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: JazzyM
Good Lord...You nailed the emotions and expressions.
Beautiful take of TAKEN.

Thank you so much :)

@ALL: Thank you so much for your kind comments.

I might write more in future.

Thank you for appreciating my work :)

Means a lot!

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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: arshi21

Thank you so much :)

@ALL: Thank you so much for your kind comments.

I might write more in future.

Thank you for appreciating my work :)

Means a lot!

Forge on...⭐️

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Smilelicious

@Smilelicious

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

So beautiful😳
Loved it, SwaSan were adorable ❤️
Well done 👏
Keep writing 😊

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preetywoman

@preetywoman

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: arshi21

Thank you so much :)

@ALL: Thank you so much for your kind comments.

I might write more in future.

Thank you for appreciating my work :)

Means a lot!

We will be waiting 😛

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JIDHNYASA

@Jidnyasa

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Ohh...

Wow that so cute..

Loved it

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valentina

@RK-ki-Kaneez

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Sweet but the last part was hilarious because she was actually pmsing

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krishuuuuuuuuuu

@krishuuuuuuuuuu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Awww

Sweetest OS...🤗

Loved it...☺️

Talia

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Aheli

@iam_aheli_98

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Awesome OS. Read both the parts together.😊

So cute, sweet and romantic.😳

Loved it.😃

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tootiefrootie11

@tootiefrootie11

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Hello there!

I accidentally stumbled across your OS and the tile intrigued me so I am so glad I read it! I think this is beautifully written 👏. I felt that you developed the account so naturally but with so much tenderness and love, it really came across so well. Loved the way you portrayed Swara's changed feelings and her reactions to it all, which stayed true to the essence of the Swara I like and not the one we often get in the show. Sanskaar was fab- his mix of teasing amusement but overwhelming love perfectly balanced and the end was so blissful with them having finally realised each other's state and told each other. Lovely work!

Best wishes,

Shruti