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Parijatrocks! Your story is very interesting, but the chapter 33 - a complete nightmare !!! 😲
But I like this interesting turn. Perhaps you wanted later on to show how stupid bull became a human?
" ... jalal could never read any womens emotions when he is on the bed with them,..."
It isn't surprising that he had such a large harem. Who wants a second time to go to bed with such a man?
Almost rape, later on riding a horse, one more rape, again riding a horse ...
and he to was astonished she looks exhausted?
In the book on housekeeping, published in the 60-ies of the 20 century. (not a joke, wrote advice seriously):
"...You have to remember that for the arrival of her husband from service, you must be to prepared daily. Prepare the children, wash them, comb and change into a clean, elegant clothes. They should line up and greet the dad when he walks in the door. For such a case, put on a clean apron yourself and try [!!!] adorn themselves - for example, tie a bow in her hair. In conversations with her husband not to join, remember how much he was tired, and that he has to go every day to the service for you - feed him in silence, and only after he read a newspaper, you can try to talk to him. "
And from there, from "Advice for men": "After committing intimate intercourse with your wife, you have to let her go to the bathroom, but don't need to follow her, let her be alone. Perhaps she wants to cry. "
This Jalal different from the one that was in the beginning. I was very interesting to read your story and really want to read how Jalal "become a human". And if he realizes that he loves Jodha, how he will be able to deprive her child?
Sorry for my English.
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