TwiNj OS::Tum Meri Jaan Ho 28.3.16

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Posted: 9 years ago
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OS::Tum Meri Jaan Hoo

"Mama ji mamaji woh kunj woh bhag raha tha,maine usse bus stand par dekha"Told yuvi to choudhry.
"Kya woh chora bhag raha,uski himmat kaise hui,Ib toh woh chora nahi bachega,Sangram sab choro ne le aur chalo bus stand ajj toh uss kunj ki kahani khatam hi kar dete hai"said choudhry.

Rajjo heard this and tried to stop choudhry but he pushed her away and left for bus stand.

Rajjo ran to outhouse "Twinkle ji twinkle ji"
"Kya hua rajjo sab theek toh hai?" Asked twinkle.
And Rajjo told her everything,twinkle's fear was coming true,what if something happens to him,how will she live without him,withhout caring for anything twinkle ran towardd the bus stop with rajjo following her behind.

"HAhahahahah Ab kaise bachayegi twinkle tu apne kunj ko ajj uski kahan toh khatam,He is finished and then you will be mine" said yuvi to himself.

"Kith gaya yeh chora dhondo usne aur mere pass lekar aao,ajj toh uska kissa khatam"Roared choudhry standing on bust stand.

"Dekhiye choudhry sahab yeh raha woh chora,le aya hun mai isse apke pass"said one of the man of choudhry.

"Tu nahi janta chore tune kitni badi galti ki hai bhagne ke koshish karne ki,meri beti ko pet se karke bhaag ne wala tha tujhe toh mai ab na chodunga"he said to kunj.
Kunj was bieng held by two guys,samgram punched kunj hard in his stomanch,and punched him again on the face,making the side of his lips bleed,kunj was bound so he was not able to fight back the attacks thrown at him,"Bas kar sangram ab isne toh mai khatam karunga" said choidhry pushing sangram aside and pointing his riffle at kunj,he was just going to shoot kunj but stopped due to Twinkle coming infront of kunj,"Ruk jaiye choudhry ji".

"Aee chori hat jaa samne se ,ajj toh mai iss chore ko nahi chodunga hamare parivaar ki izzat barbad karke yeh bhag waha tha" said choudhry.

Hatt rey churi said sangram pushing twinkle roughly on the road and she fell on the road,Kunj took all the attacks on him silently but How dare he hurt twinkle,with all his might kunj pushed the two mans who were holding him and punched samrat hard into his face making him fall flat on the ground,"Hath kaise lagaya tune usko haan" and he again punched samrat who was trying to get up from the floor,"Teri itni himat chore " said choudhry and choudhry pointed the gun at kunj once again this time also twinkle came inbetween and hugged kunj tightly .
"Chori hatt jaa tu baar baar kyu aa jati hai isse bachane"said choudhry.
"Because he is my husband kyunki yeh pati hai mera Kunj sarna hai yeh aur mai hun Mrs.Twinkle kunj sarna" said twinkle loud enough so that everyone heard it.
"Yeh tu kya bol rahi hai chori yeh tera pati kaise ho sakta hai" asked choudhry.
"She is saying truth bapu,kunj ji twinkle ji ke pati hai bhai nahi,woh toh mere jhoot ki wajah se they have to do this drama and they got into soo much problem,kunj ji is not the person I love ,He is raja and he didnt came when I had to elope with him,I was going to commit suicide but kunj ji stopped me and took me back home and then it all happen,Bapu they are innocent ismai inki koi bhi galti nahi hai inhe chod dijiye"Said rajjo.
The riffle dropped on the ground from choudhry's hands "Itna bada jhoot" he said and slapped rajjo hard "Itna bada jhoot aur tune in dono ko bhi iss jhoot mai daal diya ajj toh mere hatho se ek masoom ki jaan chali jati,Sangram iss chori ne lekar ghar chalo"Ordered choudhry.
Folding his hands infront of twinkle "Beti mujhe maaf karde meri Chori ki wajah se tujhe aur tere pati ko itna sab sehna padha,Aur tum dono sab sehte raho Maaf kardena mujhe kunj"Said choudhry.
"Nahi choudhry ji mafi ki zarorat mahi hai,App bas rajjo ko kuch mat kijiye ga"Said twinkle.
"Apna khoon hai woh puttar usse toh ek kharoch bhi na marr sako hun par haan usse naraz hun,lekin ab uske raja ko dhondne ki zimmedari meri,aur haan beti ajj shadi karwake nahi karke jana,rajjo ki na sahi apni dusri beti ki shadi toh kara sakon hun mai,agar tum wapas aye toh samjh lunga tumne mujhe maaf kar diya" said choudhry and he left.
Taking kunj to her car twinkle drove to the outhouse,making him seated on the couch twinle hugged kunj tight and cried.
"Twinkle tum ro kyu rahi hoo"said kunj running his hand over her hairs.
"Agar*sob*Tumhe*sob*kuch*sob* ho jata *sob* toh"she said in between her cries and cried more loudly.
"Twinkle I am fine see,nothing has happened to me samjhi tum,bus chup ho jao ab"he said hugging her back.
"Agar tumhe kuch ho jata toh mai toh marr hi jati kunj"she said hugging him tighter.
"Twinkle bas kuch nahi hua hai aur marne ki baat mat karo"he said sternly.
Her hands wrapped more tightly around his body,hugging him as tight as possible.

"Kunj mai tumhe kho nahi sakti"she said,his shoulders getting wet due to her continous tears.
"Twinkle mai kahi nahi jaa raha,bas kar you know I cannot see tears in your eyes stop crying"he said tightning his hold on her.
"Kunj*sob*mujhe bahut*sob*darr lag raha*sob* hai"said twinkle.
"Bus twinkle bus mujhe kuch nahi hua hai,I am fine,stop crying meri jaan,dekh mujhe dekh mai bilkul theek hun"he said forcing her to look at him cupping her cheeks in his hands.
"Kunj I promise you agar tumhe kabhu bhi kuch hoga na so Before anything will arm you I will protect even if I have to give away my life for it,I wont let anything happen to you"said twinkle.
"Shut up twinkle and listen to me Tu aisa kuch bhi nahi karegi,aur dekh mujhe kuch nahi hua hai,And nothing will happen to me I will always stay with you I promise,Comeone now lets sleep kaal subah bahut kaam hai,he said taking her hand in his and took her to the bed,making her lay on the bed,he just moved away to get a glass of water bit twinkle stopped him.by holding his hand,"Kunj dont go Mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai please mat jao"she said.
"Mai sirf pani lene jaa raha hun twinkle abhi do minute mai aya"he said,he came back as soon as he left.
"See I am back"he said taking his place beside her on the bed.
Twinkle quickly hugged him tight and rested her head on his chest,inhaling into his deep and masculin smell,A sense of calmness took over her,and her mind and heart were coming at peace,her fears fading away.
He was cressing her head with his hands,"Twinkle tu itna pareshan mat hua kar,mujhe acha nahi lagta tujhe aise dekhkar"he said.
"Pareshan kaise na hoti tum meri jaan hun"she said and hugged him tighter,his wramth made her fall into sleep in no time and she looked so peacfull while sleeping he thought and slowly the tiredness took over him and he slept too.
"KUUNNJJJ"A loud shout broke his sleep and he found twinkle sitting on the bed,shouting his name over and over again,he quickly got up and touched her shoulder,turning around she hugged him tightly and starting crying ,"Twinkle calm down it was just a bad dream,I am here with you calm down twinkle"he said rubbing her back with his hand.
"Kunj mujhe bahut darr lag raha hai" said twinkle still crying.
"Shhh twinkle I am here ,Dont be afraid mai hun tere sath" He said hugging her tighter.
"Kunj" but her sentence was left incomplete as he slammed his lips on her to shut her up!
His kiss conveyed His presence,his care and concern for her more than anything else,she was stunned for few moments before allowing him to take the dominance in the kiss and allowed herself to melt into his arms,her arms tightly gripping his body,He broke the kiss and looked directly into her eyes,"Twinkle see I am herr and I am not going anywhere I.WILL.NOT.LEAVE.YOU.EVER.Get that into your head and now sleep you need rest,you have taken enough of the stress already mrs.twinkle jaan"he said and she rested her head on his chest,he patted her head and carefully laid down on the bed,she pressed herself more into him,her fear fading away with each passing moment and she drifted into sleep,he was awake entire entire looking at her adorable face,and to make sure that she slept well and the nightmare didnt came back,afterall she is his Jaan!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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weee...cute one...it was absolutely adorable and emotional ..Chaudhry seemed too humble na*laughs*
but anyways...it was as usual one UR pieces so had to be awesome...u write sooo well
btw im sakshi *extends hand for handshake*and im new to the forum*beams* and also I love all stories here ...*blabbers with no knowledge of what im saying*
but I have my favs and ur stories are always one of them !!
it was a lovely storie...keep writing more stuff ...they're lovable !!
-sakshi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..queen..

weee...cute one...it was absolutely adorable and emotional ..Chaudhry seemed too humble na*laughs*

but anyways...it was as usual one UR pieces so had to be awesome...u write sooo well
btw im sakshi *extends hand for handshake*and im new to the forum*beams* and also I love all stories here ...*blabbers with no knowledge of what im saying*
but I have my favs and ur stories are always one of them !!
it was a lovely storie...keep writing more stuff ...they're lovable !!
-sakshi

welcome to the forum Sakshi*Handshake*
Thank you soo much for liking my work and appriciating it!
I'll keep writing and you keep reading😳
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Awesome OS...
Loved it...😳
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Fantastic OS Hridey. Brilliant writing. did u answer my questions in ur thread? not finding it lol.


Thank you so much for this <3
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Loved the OS 😳
Beautifully written
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Hridey this was awesome
Cha gaya tu toh!
Loved each and every word of it.
Hayye pure bliss
Do keep writing
Going to read again lol

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U r d rockstar..
. Just loved it
As usual u have beautiful pen down this one also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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lovely os hridey !!!!!
it was sooo cute afterall she is his jaan!!!!!
loved it
plzzz do write more and update your other stories too
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Loved the OS.
It is amazing.
Waiting for more.
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