||Tumse Hi Tumse||FF||Twinj|| Chapter 6 pg-17||Something Special|| - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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take ur time!! 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: amlavs

Nice...kunj is like a casnivova type it seems...

But superb...continue soon...


yup he is!! mentioned in the characters!! 😊

thanku!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-1

The Journey Begins

sharon- wo soo gayi hai aur aap chinta mat kijiyeaap bhi jakar rest kijiye mai aur swayam hai yahan par dhyan rakhne ke liye

leela- thankuu soo much beta

swayam- app jaiye aabbb!!

leela left tooo...

swayam- I still can't believe how is it possible

Sharon- same here I mean just look at Twinkle usne kya step uthaya tha!!

Swayam sit on the sofa holding his head and Sharon sat beside him and consoled him and they both slept on the sofa itself

In morning when Sharon woke up she sensed something is burning and then leela too enters there

Leela- Sharon puttar kuch jal raha hai!

Sharon wakes up swayam

And they all after seeing here n there got to know that the smell was coming from garden and they rushes there

They saw a basket of iron which was being burned and Twinkle was throwing one by one some things in that

Twinkle(smiling)- good morning

Sharon- Twinkle ye sab

Twinkle-kya

Leela- ye aag!!

Twinkle- ohh yeh!! Wo actually mai apne pas Yuvi ki ek bhi memory nahin rakhna chahti thi so decided to burn them and see m feeling so happy n fresh now

All the three look at each other

Swayam- but Twinkle

Twinkle- are kya sab but but karte rehte hoo I am f9 now don't worry

Twinkle then picks up a bundle of the cards given to her by Yuvi she slowly started throwing them in fire one by one and then the card come which was given by Yuvi the time he proposed her she opened that card and tear drop shedded from her eye and she with an angry face threw all the cards in fire and cleaned her face and then with a smile came and hugged Leela, watching them both hugging sharon too joins the hug followed by swayam making it a cute and emotional moment for their family!!

Scene at kunj's house...

Kunj was working out and just then his frns nil and rahul comes there

Nil and Rahul- hey bro!!

Kunj(low tone)- hey

He then gets down of the treadmill and sits with a towel in his hand and they both too sits

Nil- kya hua tujhe tere face ko dekh kar toh aisa lag raha hai jaisa tu poori rat soya hi na ho

Kunj- han wo actually neend hi nahin aa rahi thi

Rahul- kyu

Kunj- wo kal maine ek ladki ko dekha tha jab mai caf gaya tha uska break hua tha and she was really sad u know uske fianc ne use ditch kiya and she loved him soo much

Rahul- to kya hua

Kunj- jab mai raat ko ghar wappas aa raha tha toh wo apne room ki balcony se jump kar ke sucide karne ki koshish kar rahi thi and I saved her life!! Bas usi ke bare mein soch soch kar neend nahin aa rahi thi. Tumhe pata hai her eyes were swelled but still she looked soo angelic as if there was no effect on her beauty

Rahul- ohh toh seedha bol naa ki tujhe wo pasand aa gayi

Nil- haan

Kunj- had hai!! Yaar u know tumhe kabhi kuch batana hi nahin chahiye kyunki kuch bhi bolo tumhara dimag ghoom phir kar ek hi jagah par aa jata hai

Nil(dramatically)- woh toh hai

They all three giggles

Nil- ohh ham toh tujhe wo batana bhool hi gaye jo ham batane aaye the

Rahul- ohh han

Kunj- bollo

Rahul- ham kal subah jaa rahe hain

Kunj- kahan

Rahul- trip pe!!

Kunj-wow!! Kahan

Nil- manali

Kunj- cool

Rahul- chal tu apna bag pack kar liyo okk byy ab mujh jana hai

Nil- mujhe bhi

They both leaves from there and kunj was thinking smthn when nil comes back

Nil(mockingly)- usi ladki ke bare mein soch raha hai?

Kunj- han!!...Nahin pagal hai kya tu chal nikal yahan se

Nil runs from there laughing and shouting - jane kyun dil jata haii!!!!!

Kunj was giggling on his stupid yet cute behavior regarding the girl whom he just met yesterday!! How silly he thought of himself!!

Kunj- chal kunj packing karle

Twinkle's home...

Twinkle- maa mai kal subah manali jaa rahi hoon

Leela- what akele??

Twinkle- haan bcoz mai kuch din ke liye yahan se door jana chahti hoon

Sharon- toh mai bhi tumhare sath chalungi

Swayam- n mai bhi

Twinkle- no ways I wanna spend some time alone plzzz

Leela- okkk

Sharon- mmm drop toh karne aa sakte hai!!

Swayam- waise tum jaa kaise rahi hoo??

Twinkle- bus se

Swaron- what bus se!!!

Twinkle- han

Sharon- lekin bus Twinkle!! Have u gone mad Mumbai- manali aur wo bhi bus se

Twinkle- han bcoz I want to enjoy each n every moment of this trip ham MP Aur Delhi se hote hue jayenge it will be fun!!

Leela- fun toh thik hai lekin what long this trip will be??

Twinkle- about 20 days

Leela- 20 days!!

Twinkle- ohooo why u all r sooo worried m not a child I will manage okk!! Abb meri packing mein koi help karwayega yaa phir mujhe hi sab kuch karna hoga!!

Sharon- abbb mai aati hoon

Twinkle- cool jaldi aana

Next day morning 8'o clock twinkle and swaron(Sharon+swayam) were on the bus stop

Sharon- Twinkle take care

Swayam- tumhara bag bhi rakhwa diya maine

Twinkle"okkk thankuuu n m going now byyy!!!

In bus...

Kunj was sitting alone on a seat and and nil Rahul back of him bcoz of their seat numbers and now the bus was waiting only n only for the one member of the trip whose seat ws with kunj!!

Kunj- gyss can u plzz tell me that y r we going by bus cant we go by train or plane

Rahul- are kunj tujhe bataya toh tha naa ham bus se isliye jaa rahe hain taki ham zyada din enjoy karpaye

Kunj- okkk

He makes a face looks out..

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Kunj was looking out of the window and was lost in his thoughts just then a girl wearing shorts and beautiful top enters the bus with a side bag

Guide- we were waiting for u mam since soo long

Girl- m sooo sry (she made a baby face)

Kunj identified the voice and exclaimed slowly Twinkle!!

Every boy sitting there was starring her and all the girls were burning in envy seeing their boys starring her kunj was even staring at her

Guide- there is your seat (pointing with kunj)

Kunj then saw that the seat with him was for Twinkle

She was forwarding towards the seat and then kunj stood up so that she can go inside kunj and she collided because of the less space there Twinkle was not paying any attention on him and was trying to move in

Kunj(in mind)_ ek ye hai!! aur agar koi aur ladki hoti naa toh aab tak toh wo meri aankhon mein dekh kar behosh bhi ho chuki hoti smthn is really different in her

Then suddenly the bus started and due to the sudden jerks kunj and Twinkle fell down on the seat by kunj down and Twinkle up of him

Their eyes met but not for more than 2-3 seconds Twinkle suddenly got up and got in the seats and kunj too stood up they both sat on their seats

Twinkle- sry

Kunj- it's ok

Twinkle was looking out of the window and was some sad as she was again and again getting lost in thoughts of Yuvi

Kunj- mmm can I ask u smthn

As kunj spoke this nil and Rahul stood a bit to see at both of them

Twinkle"hmmm

Kunj- tum parso raat ko sucide kyu karne wali thi

Twinkle- what!! I mean tumhe kaise pata?

Rahul and nil looked each other and understood she was the same girl their friend is mad about!!

Kunj- I was the one who saved ur life

Twinkle- ohhh!! Toh tum ho wo thankuu soo much I don't know what I was going to do

Kunj- BTW kya tum abhi bhi Yuvi se pyaar karti hoo

Twinkle was shocked hearing this

Kunj- wooo I know everything I was present in the caf that time

Twinkle(angry)- excusme I don't think that I want to share my personal life with u sooo u must mind ur own business get that

Kunj- wooo I was just asking chill!!

Twinkle- all the boys are just soo same idiots and duffers jinhe sirf dusro ko hurt karne mein maza aata hai

Twinkle looked out of the window for once again

Kunj sensed smthn and looked up

Kunj- tum dono!!

Twinkle even looked for what happened and whom was her so called seat mate talking to!!

Nil- kara di naa lako ki bezti tune

Rahul- problem kya hai teri kunj

Nil and rahul - huh!!

They both sat down and kunj was still watching up with a weird expression and Twinkle giggled a little on this and turned her face kunj even grinned ear to ear watching that she was atleast smiling on him!!

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So Gyzz how was it?

i hope you like it!!

please do cmnt and like the post!!😃

-vidhi...

Edited by vidhu1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Wow the update was fab😃awesome sweet 😳
A request😳plz p.m. me whenever update is ready fm next time plz 😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
I loved it
Its just awesome
Want them to fall for each other soon
Plzzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

Wow the update was fab😃awesome sweet😳

A request😳plz p.m. me whenever update is ready fm next time plz😳😳



Thanku soo much!! Yaa dont worry i will PM you!!
Actually i didnt PM anyone this time!! 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: iluvtwinj

I loved it

Its just awesome
Want them to fall for each other soon
Plzzz update soon


Thanku for loving it dear!!
TYsm!!
Ya sure next update will be up Soon!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
wow nice update vidhu
loved it
and in 20 days will twinkle fall for kunj huh
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
lovely update
eagerly waiting for Manali trip..😉

pls pm me for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
wow awesome update dear
i just loved it
waiting for their journey to manali
plzzz do continue soon
thanks for the pm dear😃

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