||Tumse Hi Tumse||FF||Twinj|| Chapter 6 pg-17||Something Special|| - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: amlavs

Hlo...nice...pl update soon...its exciting...

thank you!! yaa sure i will contiue it soon!!
the prologue will be out 2mrw!!😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Duumps

Very nice banner.

The story is also very different.
Looking forward to your update.


thankuu!! it will be updates 2mrw with the prologue!!😃😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey! The characters n banner is lovely 😳
Once updated , plz p.m. me 😉😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Abhia2Twinj4eva

<font color="#ff0000">Hey! The characters n banner is lovely😳</font>

<font color="#ff0000">Once updated , plz p.m. me😉😳</font>



Yaa sure thanku!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sherni_Jerry

interesting
pls continue



Thankuu... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting...continue soon and pm me... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Prologue

i is just a mild part of the story with a bit heart break!! i hope u like it!!


phone ringss!!!

Twinkle taneja was reading a wedding magazine and picks up her phone

Twinkle- han bolo

boy- hey mmm plzzz come to our place!!

Twinkle- our place but y!!

boy- i wanna tellu smthn really important

Twinkle- tum bahut tensed lag rahe hoo, kya baat hai?

boy-tensed naaa I am not tensed and another thing jis ladke ki shadi ho rahi ho na uski aawaz aisi hi naikalti hai

Twinkle-hawww!! how rude is that

boy- what rude!

Twinkle- ohh come on Yuvi m ur fiance and tum mujhse hi aisi baat kar rahe hoo!!

Yuvi- yaa yaa ok now meet me in 1 hour

Twinkle- lekin kahan

Yuvi- are i told naa our place

Twinkle- okkk love u

Yuvi- hmmm

Twinkle- are kya hmmm love u toh bolo

Yuvi- i have to gooo

Twinkle- are

calll cut...

Twinkle comes from back and hugs leela her cool maa!!

leela(laughing)- are kya ho gaya!!

Twinkle- maa meri life mein sab kuch kitna perfect hai naa..baba ji ne mujhe sab kuch de diya hai...mera matlab hai dekho pehle toh mujhe baba ji ne aapki jaisiperfect maa dii, phir mera dance ka dream bhi poora karwaya and at last mujhe mera true love youvi bhi mil gaya!!

leela- true ka toh pata nahin lekin

Twinkle- ohh come on maa i love him and he loves me too!!

leela- Twinkle tu ek baar soch le puttar abhi toh sirf tumhari engagement hui hai nth much wo casinova tumhare liye thik nahin hai

Twinkle- maaa!! meri shadi hai 6 din baad aur aap ye baate leke baithe hoo!!

smrit- par

Twinkle- no par maa!!

leela- tu is sahaadi se khush hai?

Twinkle- offcourse maa i love him

leela- toh thik hai puttar..meri khushi bhi teri khushi mein hai!!

Twinkle- love u!! okkk byyy

leela- khan jaa rahi hai tu Twinkle??

Twinkle( by keeping her bag on her shoulder)- Yuvi se milne

leela- isss time

Twinkle- matlab!!

leela- tumhe aaj mera sath chalna tha shooping par

Twinkle- maaa jab mai aaa aaungi tab chalungi aur tab tak aap sharon aur swayam ko leke jaao na they will help u

leela- sharon and swayam!! r u serious agar mai unhe sath leke jaungi naa toh mujhe shooping ki advice kam unke jhagde zyada sunai denge unhe dekh kar koi ye nhin keh sakta ki wo dono shadi shuda hai

Twinkle- hehhehe!! okk byyy mai jaa rahi hoon

leela- byyy putar khayal rakhna apna... huh!! Chal leela abb sharon aur swayam ko hi call kar

at the cafeee!!

Twinkle was sitting and waiting for Yuvi too come looking at her engagement ring and smiling

Yuvi- Twinkle!!

He came and stood in front of her tabletwinkle too stood up

Twinkle-ohhh! soo tum aagaye u know m waiting since soo long

Yuvi-m sorry

Twinkle- its okk

Yuvi- m sry again

Twinkle- are uski koi zaroorat nahin hai

Yuvi- wooo!! mmm i wanna tell u smthn

Twinkle- bolo

Yuvi- tum samiksha ko janti hoo

Twinkle- obviously she is ur best frn!!

Yuvi- i love her

Twinkle- i know u love her aakihir sab log apne best frnbs ko pyaar karte hai

Twinkle said smiling wide

Yuvi- Twinkle not that love i really love her she is my life

Twinkle- Yuvi stop joking

Yuvi- m not joking Twinkle

samiksha enters

saiksha- Twinkle Yuvi and i love each other and we r together now

Twinkle was hell shoked

Twinkle- ww..what!!

Yuvi(with a sad face)-yy..ye.yess!!

Twinkle sat on the chair looking hell shocked towards them

Yuvi- i dont know how but i i realised that u r not my true love i love samiksha

Twinkle shedded few tear drops

smaiksha- Twinkle dont cry!! plzzz i am sorry

samiksha was to keep her hand on Twinkle's sholuder

Twinkle- stop!! dare u touch me

She warned her!! She was hell angry that time and surely at an urge of breaking

Yuvi- Twinkle listen too meee!!

Twinkle(shouting)- kya sunu mai Yuvi abhi bhi kuch sunane le liye baki hai

Yuvi held her hand

Yuvi- Twinkle i know maine tumhare sath galat kiya but plz forgive me

Twinkle- forgive!!

Twinkle stood up and gave a slap to Yuvi!!

smaiksha- Yuvi!!

Yuvi- Twinkle jitna marna chahti hoo marlo but plzz forgive me

she then took the hell ring out of her hand

Twinkle- this is it right!!!

she gave the ring to Yuvi by holding his hand

Yuvi's eyes were even red and he was crying too

Twinkle then took samiksha's hand and kept in Yuvi's hand and made her wear Twinkle's ring

Twinkle- enjoy ur life Yuvi!! just enjoy it and one more thing aaj ke bad mujhe kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana

Yuvi- but Twinkle

Twinkle without hearing anythn left from there

Yuvi then hugged to samiksha

all this was noticed by everyone in the cafee and also by a boy who stood there in the cafee

kunj- thank god kunj atleast tune kabhi kisi ladki ka dil aise nahin toda phir chahe tune naa jane kitno ke sath breakup kiya!! huh!!

Twinkle came back home...

Twinkle's eyes were red and swelled up!!

sharon- Twinkle dekho hamne kitni shooping ki aaj

and then everyone looks at her she was to fall down

swayam- Twinkle!!

they all three ran towrds her and swayam held her she was lying on the floor

leela bought a glass of water for her

Twinkle threw the glass all were shocked by her such action!! No one has ever seen her like this...she than hugged leela and cried like hell

leela-Twinkle hua kya hai plzzz batao toh sahi!!

Twinkle forwaded her hand and everyone was shoked to see no ring in her hand

sharon- Twinkle where is ur ring??

Twinkle- sab khatam ho gaya maaa everything is finished Yuvi kisi aur se pyaar karta hai hamari enegement toot chuki hai

She spoke with hurt evident in her voice

swayam- ye tum kya keh rahi hoon

Twinkle hugged swayam and started crying again

sharon- Twinkle kuch khatam nahin hua hai we...we will talk to Yuvi

Twinkle- nahin no one will talk to him he is happy and let him be happy

sharon- but

Twinkle- no but sharon maaa plzzz sabhi realatives ko phone karke bol doo and sharon swayam tum dono sari arramgeents cancel kardo and i am going in my room aur plzz kuch der ke liye mujhe akela chod do

Twinkle left from there!!

leela- yee kya hua hai meri beti ko

sharon- aanti! plzzz dont cry

swayam- haan aanti Twinkle wo bilkul thik ho jayegi she is really a very brave girl

leela- haan mai jaanti hoon puttar!!

scene shifts to Twinkle's roomm...

Twinkle- aaa!! she shouted

" babba jii kya aap yahi chahte the ki mai aise...aise chilaun toh plzzz pehlle bata dete atleast mujhe itna pain toh nahin hota i can't still believe ye sab... ye sab mere sath hi kyu hua meri kya galti thi maine toh kabhi kisi ko hurt bhi nahin kiya aaj tak phir mere sath kyu hua aisa"

Twinkle was broken she coludn't handle it!! and went to her balcony and climbed on the railing

kunj who was passing from there byy looked at her

kunj- ohh teri ye toh wahi ladki hai!!

Before he could stop her from jumping...Twinkle jumped from her balcony and kunj catched her

Twinkle was faint!!

kunj- heyy listen listen!! (in mind: kya naam tha iska kya naam tha haan Twinkle) hey Twinkle listen Twinkle!!

ye toh uth nahin rahi i guess i should take her inside

kunj ranged the door bell

and the door was opened by sharon

Sharon(smiling)- kunj tum yahan?

Than her eyes travelled down and she couldn't help but shout twinkle's name out in fear and exclamaition

leela and swayam came running

smiriti- sharon kya hua!!

swayam- Twinkle!!

Kunj took her inside before anyone else would come and exclaim out he laid her on the sofa and took some water from the glass kept on table and spilled on her she came to her senses

kunj- tum thik toh hoo

sharon- Twinkle r u alright??

kunj stood up from there

kunj- she was to sucide she jumped from balcony

leela- what!!! Twinkle tu paagal hai!!

Twinkle was not even uttering a word

leela- broke in tears- bol twinkle tu kaise kar sakti hai ye

Twinkle- maa mere paas aur koi option nahin tha

swayam- sucide koi option nahin hai Twinkle

kunj- i know i must not interfare but she need to take rest now rather than being scolded!!

sharon- yaaa mai isse andar leke jaati hoon

they left inside

leela- thanku MR.

kunj- kunj i mean kunj

leela- thanku beta agar tum nahin aate toh pata nahin kya ho jata aaj

kunj- its okk anti maine dekha tha ki Twinkle ke sath kya hua tha i was in the cafee that time when she brooke up with Yuvi!!

swayam- thankuu so much kunj agar tu nahin aata toh shayad ham Twinkle ko kho

kunj- chill bro aisa mat kaho she is reallly brave girl maine dekha tha it was just a drastic step taken by her all she need now is everyone's love and some freshment okk mai abhi chalta hoon

Twinkle's room...

Twinkle- i am sorry sharon

sharon- u should be Twinkle i mean how can u take such a step

Twinkle- m sry i was out of my mind i really didn't knew what to do isliye ye sab hua m sry!! but i promise i will never do this again when yuvi is happy why cant i be!!

sharon- exactly!! now soo jao!!

she switched off the lights of the room and came out

leela- kya hua

sharn- wo soo gayi hai aur aap chinta mat kijiye aap bhi jakar rest kijiye mai aur swayam hai yahan par dhyan rakhne ke liye

leela- thankuu soo much beta

swayam- app jaiye aabbb!!

leela left tooo...


i really hope you all like it!! plzz dont forget to leave your reviews!! 😊

-vidhi

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Necessary Characters for the story are posted!!
do read them for not be confused!!

many of the characters are new entries..i mean separate from the show!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue 😛
Just brilliant 😳how come swaron knows Kunj but not twinkle 😕
Or does she too knows him.?? Weird questions 😆
Plz continue soon 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Resss.
Unres.

Hmm ok read..intro character sketch and prologue.

Loved it.

Hated Yuvi grrr..

Twinkle should not have tried to suicide but thank god Kunj was present to save her.

Hmm.. Her friends.are.so sweet...loved them.

Overall story was. Dhamakedar bindas.

And sorry for delay.

(assignments and project.work)
Edited by MNsTrous - 9 years ago

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