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CrazzyBusy

@CrazzyBusy

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

Part 15: CLICK HERE

Do like and comment!

Thank you to all, who commented on the previous part, and liked it.

Please-please do leave me a proper comment and press the likes button to motivate me.

Enjoy!

-Mariam

PS:

The past will be reveled in bits and pieces, thru Maan flashback at certain events and point.

So have patient, and yeah the main story will start after the party ends, for which I am trying to type as much as I can and update as soon as I can...

So stay tuned for the Deceitful Love to Start...

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fict

@fict

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#452

Maan was reminded of the past and went back to the mansion where it all happened. Painful for him as he relived that moment. Geet was praying for his safe return home. waiting for next.

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sagorika93

@sagorika93

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#453

nice update ...
maan ki haal dekhke ab toh mei aur curious ho gayi past ko janne mei ...
geet ko maan ki fikar ho rehi hai ..I also wonder why ? kyunki woh hi toh chahati thi maan se dur rehena n all ...
precp looks interesting ..can't wait for next...

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#454

poor maan his past was not leaving him..waiting for next part

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mitali10

@mitali10

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#455

Read in one go...thanks for the beautiful story...Update soon...

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jasika

@jasika08

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#456

Nice update

Waiting for next update. .

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#457

Lovely update maan marched to his old home where was all his dark memories he remembered how geet was right no matter how hard u try the past never leaves u always come back haunting u when we least expects it the caretaker shocked to see maan tried to stop him very well knowing that maan won't able to handle himself once he reaches in the mansion pushing him away geet waiting for maan getting worried poured her frustration maan very harshly told she is just his employee so why she cares for him geet though hurt but knows maan is right

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#458

Painful

Maan remembering his past

Geet is worried for maan n waiting for him

But maan' words her that she is only employe nothing else so no need for this caring

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

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Posted: 9 years ago

#459

hi thanks 4 updating! Hw r u?? terrific emotional update! superbly written! Feeling 4 Maan! Maan relives the past! Maan in pain! Geet asks Maan where he was! he says she is just a mere employee n has no right 2 question him! she leaves! update soon! awesome precap

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crazymaneetian

@crazymaneetian

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#460

i have so fallen in love with ths story...you have crafted it well ...waiting for the madness to begin and the passion to rise..beautiful etching of characters...looking forward :)

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