AarYa OS: Saved By Love

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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aww Jhilly jhu you took a track that not only the cvs forgot about but even we did, more so one that did not make sense at all, then you came up with such a beautiful story.
the first attack on Aarti brought out possessive Yash, one who showed his concern physically as he embraced her, his only wish to comfort her. Aarti too felt save in his arms as he did not even release her as they returned to the house.

then they get ready for and go to the party. you emoted their internal struggle so well. Aarti reluctant to get close out of fear of getting her hopes dashed, Yash confused by his reaction to her yet wanting her to come close, hurt that she walks away. at the party he cannot understand her mood, he is baffled when she refuses to dance, when she agrees to go home.. what happened to his lively Aarti ji? he wants to cheer her up and stops for ice-cream, unwittingly risking his life, she does not even hesitate in her will to save him, save her love.

if she dies she wants him to know that she loves him, that she would die for him. he is baffled by her until he realizes what happened. panic sets in, he rushes her to the hospital. he is frantic with worry, why? because he loves her. our tubelight Yashu realizes his feelings at last.

they are left alone but he is unable to face her, he must feel undeserving of her love, her sacrifice when he did not know his own heart until that moment. he is angry too that she did not think of the children, or of him, of what would happen to them without her in their lives. then love takes over, passion takes over and they become one. secure in his love she is able to voice her innermost desires to him.

I loved the OS Jhilly jhu! I don't know which of your works is my fav anymore but this is one of the top ones for sure 👏👏 you deserve a thousand ⭐️s for this! ❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice OS Jhil. Wish we were able to see a scene like this in PV..
I loved every bit of it so much!
thanks Jhil for sharing it with s.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: caller123

Very nice OS Jhil. Wish we were able to see a scene like this in PV..

I loved every bit of it so much!
thanks Jhil for sharing it with s.

I agree with caller123 amazayn os dear. 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Finally someone has an explanation for the attack on Yash in Mumbai. I always thought it was so random. The attack happened and then nothing. I feel like I got closure, Yeah👏
Thank you so much. Loved the story. Especially the ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful OS. I loved the way that Aarti did not give up on her love and how her distance aand hospitalizationt worked in making Yash realise his feelings for her. Fantastic job
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thanks for the PM it was super i loved
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was amazing and made a lot of sense the third party involved were the goons it give closure to their story a senseless introduction which was left wide open 😆a gaping hole by the writers😆😆 Yash realised and accepted his love for Aarti without Third party{ Prashant help} good job jilly ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS
Poor aarti hopelessly in love with yash
But yash doesn't want to fall in love bcoz his promise to arpita
Oh hell those goons tried to misbehave with aarti
Thank god yash & aman came on time to save her
So yash send them to the jail for illegal mattres long ago
Look like they want to have their revenge with yash
Aarti should have listen to yash & aman to send those goons to the jail
Oh god aarti took the bullets to save yash life
Uff yash was thinking abt arpita when aarti confess her feeling to his even that situation
Thank aarti was saved
At least yash also realize his feelings for aarti
Aarya finally consummated their relationship
At last aarti got her husband love just for herself
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Jhl I loved your take on this tract. Awesome OS. If the CVS could have shown something like this, how great the show would have been. Thank you.

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