aww Jhilly jhu you took a track that not only the cvs forgot about but even we did, more so one that did not make sense at all, then you came up with such a beautiful story.
the first attack on Aarti brought out possessive Yash, one who showed his concern physically as he embraced her, his only wish to comfort her. Aarti too felt save in his arms as he did not even release her as they returned to the house.
then they get ready for and go to the party. you emoted their internal struggle so well. Aarti reluctant to get close out of fear of getting her hopes dashed, Yash confused by his reaction to her yet wanting her to come close, hurt that she walks away. at the party he cannot understand her mood, he is baffled when she refuses to dance, when she agrees to go home.. what happened to his lively Aarti ji? he wants to cheer her up and stops for ice-cream, unwittingly risking his life, she does not even hesitate in her will to save him, save her love.
if she dies she wants him to know that she loves him, that she would die for him. he is baffled by her until he realizes what happened. panic sets in, he rushes her to the hospital. he is frantic with worry, why? because he loves her. our tubelight Yashu realizes his feelings at last.
they are left alone but he is unable to face her, he must feel undeserving of her love, her sacrifice when he did not know his own heart until that moment. he is angry too that she did not think of the children, or of him, of what would happen to them without her in their lives. then love takes over, passion takes over and they become one. secure in his love she is able to voice her innermost desires to him.
I loved the OS Jhilly jhu! I don't know which of your works is my fav anymore but this is one of the top ones for sure 👏👏 you deserve a thousand ⭐️s for this! ❤️
Edited by Tessaloni - 9 years ago