ARSHI SS - OUTBURST !!

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Sheetal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Seems interesting will read over this weekend then will update my review

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.IPKKND.

@.IPKKND.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

How I wish this was played out in IPKKND

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seeta naipaul

@seeta_naips

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Loved it

Made me cry for all the pain Khushi endured

Khushi forgave Arnav to easily he should have suffered for all the torment he gave Khushi

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YaSha0512

@YaSha0512

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

WOW simmi this was beyond AMAZING...

the way u described everyones emotions was spot on

n this time I actually felt sorry for Shyam

it was an awesome twist to how the main story on tv was

I was in tears all way through it

n the ending ...OH BOY

when next contest in IF comes round plz enter this as im sure it would be a hit

thanks for pm n plz keep em comin

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Savera84

@Savera84

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

Nicely conceptualized and well written.
Cheers...

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nihasan

@nihasan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

I almost thought that khushi will die..

But really beautiful..was expecting arnav to repent a little more

Loved it

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annys

@annys

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Beautiful story. Very different angle.

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frustrated12233

@frustrated12233

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

*re joicing in arhi dreamland*

Story ended

*still there* * shaking myself off*

Huh??!! Finally back to earth!!😛

How the hell on earth did I miss ths!!!??? Like really THISS???!!!!

actually I knw ...the level one idiot I am... I had my siggies option off hence never saw ur index siggie!!!*facepalm*

I feel like I was robbed off such precious treasure!!! I feel so deprived!!!

This is one my MOST FAVOURITE stories!!! Like LITERALLY!! IV been dying to read something like ths!!

Actually IV got ths strange attraction, love , madness for tht 'cliff wala arnav' , fr tht 'running after ambulance arnav ( oh man he looked all freaking adorable... When he couldn't even utter 'khushi' properly with the growing fear of loosing her *sigh*)

So ths was an apt super apt example of it!!

Loved it with all my heart ...

I wanted the same for HKT ...like khushi to meet an accident instead of arnav ..nonetheless what u wrote was far better than what I imagined... :) n it was needed as well

Coming back to OUTBURST I wish frm the bottom of my heart tht ths OUTBURST happened in d show as well... U knw u can give the writers a check! ;)

It would HV been a lot better than arnav forcing to stop khushi using his cruel ASR ways!!

Anyways I really felt proud of khushi in ur story ...she kept her point BT was forgiving as well instead of the khushi in the show who took it all silently n forgave him!!

Above all shyam was the best in ur story!! The best of all IV red in NY other fanfic!! Ur positive approach towards him was different a good different ofcourse!!

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frustrated12233

@frustrated12233

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Tada not now! I'm not done yet!!😉

So where was I??

Oh yeah ... D story was very well written...

Splendid job girl ...

Uv no idea how elated I'm r8 now... It was like a breath of fresh air ...or shall I say like a breath I wanted ...(erm!! It sounds pathetic! R8)

The Anjali in ths story was too an interesting character!!

Overall best efforts were put n grl take a bow!!

P.S-I had written a much longer reply thn ths... Trust me much much longer BT ths bloody net ditched me the very same moment when I pressed POST REPLY n glaring on my face was CONNECTION ERROR ...

I so wanted to throw my phone some where ...*sigh* BT I can't u knw ths is my living force *pout*

Hence I retyped as much as I could!! Sorry!!!