Manan SS - 'INFATUATION' - IMP. NOTE

CHARACTER SKETCH😆

Manik Malhotra : Tall, Handsome , rich , perfect and honest human being , pure at heart , Introvert but funloving n calm , resposible n down to earth , runs a family business "Malhotra Hotels n Restaurents . Loves his younger brother Dhruv a lots .

Nandini Muthy : Innocent , Funloving girl , always listens to her heart , believes in love , loves her parents

Dhruv Malhotra aka Maddy : Sweet boy but loves to flirt , full on masti guy , reckless ,stubborn, spoilt brat , doesnt beleive in love but love manik .

Rajesh Murthy : Nandini's Father , a simple man of a middle class family .
Shalini Murthy: Nandini's Mother , a working women , a sweet lady .

Mansingh Malhotra : Manik n Dhruv ' father , a down to earth person , a pure desi kind of a person ;) , from amritsar but after lots of hard work ..now settled in mumbaii.
DJ : Manik n Dhruv 's Grandmothet , full on masti punjabii women, funloving sweet , loves her family alot :)
Nyonika Malhotra : manik n dhruv's mother . Sweet lady !
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Helllo beautiful people..i am APOORVA aka APy..,
I am new on this forum...:)
Sry corrction..new to you all but not to IF! .. i am a regurlar reader of this IF.. n after reading all kind of stories .. here i am attempting to write a story of my own... dnt knw from how long i am planinng to write a ffs or may be ss on manan...my characters ever
So finally i am presenting you all my story .." INFATUATION"
HOPE YOU ALL WILL LOVE IT!
n guys as i told u all m attmpting , wriiting for the first tym...so pls forgive ..i do something wrong..:D

Ihav already posted the character sketch...n will post the prologue by nyt..
Ty!
APy ^_^


INDEX

Character sketch + PROLOGUE

PROLOGUE

A boy is running angrily and madly on roads .. traffic is on full swing.. but he neither care about life nor about people who live him.
He is so much frustrated from life ...his eyes are blood shot red , he is uncontrollable ... n suddenly a car came and he bumps into it ... and blood starts ozing from his forehead but no he got up n again starts running away from everything like somewhere down his heart he doesnot wnt to believe wht he saw.., now its raining heavily ... its seems likes sky is also crying on this dark night.


But there is one more person running behind him ... shouting "dhruv dhruv.. pls stop .. dont do it "

Yes person running carelessly is none other than dhruv and his brother , manik , who always wnt him to be safe n sound is running behind him to save his life.
At last , dhruv goes towards a brigde .. n looks frustrately ,restlessly in the river... tears of pain are continously falling from his eyes...he is angry on everyone.. in this world including himself! ..


Opposite to the bridge ... stands manik ... continously shouting him not to jump . There is constantly running road between them manik tries to come near dhruv but..cars are continouly passing by bcoz of which manik can only do one things thats to make him calm by his words only ..he is feeling helpless coz he doesnot knw y his only brother whom he loves so much is so doing this . Why he is angry on him.

Manik agains shouts , "dhruv pls listen to me ...hum ghr chlte hai... wha baat krte pls "
Dhruv looks towrds him angrily n starts walking along with brigde n says " Huhh... just leave me alone... aap ko mil gya na jo aap chate the... jaiye aur khush rhiye "

Manik , "maddy ..tu kyu mjhse bhaag rhaa haii ... " manik said helplessly.

(a/n : dhruvs nickname is maddy)
Dhruv takes out the bottle of alcohol from his coat's pocket starts drinking.

Dhruv, " kya tkleef hai aapko ..jaiye yha se... just leave me aloneee ... "

Manik, " dhruv dekh...agr tu khush ni hai to me kaise reh skta hu...tu mjhe bta...n i promise me sb thk krdungaa ... but pls mjhse bt to kr" manik foldshis hands in front of him.

Dhruv ," kyaa ...kyaa krenge aap...kya smjhte hai aap kudhko ...bhgwaan hai aap ... huhhh...kuchhh thkkk ni kr skte aaap ... kuch bh ni..."

Suddenly in rage of anger, dhruv goes n stands on edge of the brigde n shouts ..
"Kyaa aap mjhe yha se kudhne se bchha skte haiii ..." .

And just by witnessing the scenerio ..manik's heart stop beating for a sec... and he without wasting a moment runs towards dhruv to sav him..but booommms.!

A girl who witnesses all this ..shouts , " mannniiikkk"




Well tried my best...but its my first time...so pls spare me..
Ty
Do tell me wht you all think abt the prologue...
Should i cont?
Till thn byee...
AND WHO ALL WNT PMS ...PLS BUDDY ME..:D

intresting start
Love the concept
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Hey intresting concept

Nice starting..seems like Dhruv is obsessed with Nandini..and MaNan love each other..want to know more

Originally posted by: trupti_ag

Hey intresting concept

Prologue seems similar to climax scene from Dillagi movie

Sunny Deol and Bobby Deol

Do continue soon😊

Well yea ...its kinda same...but shhh :P ;)

Interesting start
Looking forward to read more
Update soonish...

Keep smiling always 😊