Manan SS - 'INFATUATION' - IMP. NOTE - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Awesome update
Loved cabir's entry...
Guess Manik has fallen for that girl 😆
Eagerly waiting for next update
Tysm for pm
Ur story is really interesting
Please try n give next update jaldi
Can't wait to read more...

Keep smiling always
N Stay Blessed 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
PROMO

Manik was looking after the preparation of the party.

Then suddenly he heard the sound...of clapping and hooting, from the back side, of the hotel.

dhruv


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Manik and Dhruv were talking..., manik has his hand on dhruv's shoulder.

Manik : nii tu apnii pdhaii pr dhyann de...abhi me smbhal lungaa...

Dhruv turns ...makes a irritated face on the mention of the word " padhai ". N starts walking backwards.

Dhruv :" no bhaiii...not now...plz...aBHI to gradutation khtm huii...aur ab fr MBA...🤢

Manik : " chupp kr ... and get ready ! ... parso se clg shuru haii...

Then only..dhruv collides with something..

Dhruv: " whts this bhaii " dhruv asked excitingly.

Manik smiles. .😊


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HERE IS THE PROMO...

NJOY..N PLZ COMMENT YR!


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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Superb promo... Dhruv's entry is coming in the update...
Waiting for the next part update soon eagerly waiting for the next part...

Thanks for the pm...

I am interested in the story n love to read more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: Sandhya098

Superb promo... Dhruv's entry is coming in the update...

Waiting for the next part update soon eagerly waiting for the next part...

Thanks for the pm...

I am interested in the story n love to read more...


GLAD TO KNW THAT...
Will POST THE NXT PART SOON!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Nycc promo
Update soon


will do it !
tysm 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Dheuv ki entry.. N Manik seems to have a surprise for Dhruv... Thankk u for the promo n the pm
I'm actually loving the story...
Update soon
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Dheuv ki entry.. N Manik seems to have a surprise for Dhruv... Thankk u for the promo n the pm

I'm actually loving the story...
Update soon
😊


i glad u liked it...will post in an hr!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49

CHAPTER :3B

Manik reaches hotel by 9.30...wearing a red kurta and was looking extra hot with that smile on his face.

[MANIK'S ATTIRE]

m

[DHRUV's ATTIRE]

d

[CABIR's ATTIRE]

c

And he is amazed to see that cabir has very efficiently done everything...he went near and hug him.

Manik :"Thax bro...you are my back bone.

Cabir smiles.

Manik's Dad came there ...

Mann: manikk yeh dhruv ka kuchh pta haiii...phn hi ni uthaa rha..

Manic: " don't worry dad wo aajayega"

Mann : acha chl pandit ji bula rhe haii... mahurat ka time ho rha haii...

Manik : Ji papa!...and went to panditji to look after the preparation for the inauguration.

Soon it was...10.30!

Manik was so excited and a his beautiful smile was leaving his face for second.

Panditji: aao manik...n he nod..and sit down for small puja before the inauguration. Manic was continuously looking towards the entrance , waiting for dhruv..

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IN PUNE

In the room of one big 5star hotel, lies dhruv... sleeping on the bed with a girl in his side.There is a complete dark in the room, coz of the closed curtains.

He woke lazily..and walk towards the window ... and open the curtains.

A shiny light of sun, fall on his face...and his eyes got widen and shoutsss..." ohhh shiiittt " and runs to other room to wake up his friends.

"Ronny, Shaila, Junnooo...wakeee up guys its almost 9...common wake uppp" .. and went to the washroom to freshenup...he came out in just 10 min...and take his bike... rushed towards place.

AT NM INTERNATIONAL

Puja ended and everyone is gathered at the entrance of the hotel.

Manik:' panditji hum thoda wait kr skte hai... mera bhai abhi aata hi hoga "

Panditji :' beta .. 10min me shubh mahurat khtm hojayega "

Mann: " manic maine tjhse pehle hi kaha tha ...wo ni nalayak bhul jayega..."

Cabir:" its ok uncle will wait for 5 min."

Manik : " plss dad...bss 5 min... usne mjhe promise kiya tha wo time pr aajayega "

Mann sighes and nods.

After 5min also...dhruv didn't turned up.

Mann : " wait krne ka koi fayeda ni hai beta ...tu vidhii (procedure) purii kr.

Manik with heavy heart did the inauguration and everyone claps..

Just then they heard a sound of clappingss and hootings from the backside.

Manik eyes lit up...coz he know who it is..., and everyone goes towards the voice.

The stage has been setup over the swimming pool.

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PART 3C ...oN THE NXT PAGE ;)

\see ya!😊

Edited by apy1608 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Amazinggg update
Manik dhruv ko unconditinlly pyar krta hai aur apne laad pyar se bigad bhi rha hai...lovd it...continue soon

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