Manan SS - 'INFATUATION' - IMP. NOTE - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Awesome promo...
Nandu entry...

The dress is superb...

Waiting for the update...

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: shaan...

Awesome promo...

Seems interesting...
Thnx 4 d pm...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...



ITS is intresting... 😉
keep readinggg...!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nanoNikki

Interesting story read it in one go continue



keeep readingg..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mehak_ahuja

Awesome promo...

The dress is wow..



TYSSmmm 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER :4 - A NEW DAY

A beautiful girl in her early 20's lying in the bed, sleeping peacefully with a constant smile, wearing a cute shorts and top, but her alarm clock which shows 8, is continuously trying to disturb her beauty sleep.

Doors open, and a lady in her early 40's came in, and sighs looking towards her.

Lady : Nandiiinnniii, uufff kya kru me iss ldki ka , firse sote sote smile kr rhi haii.." and smiles looking at her.

"uthhoo nandini...clg nahii jana... aa first day haii...common get up kanna "

Nandini lazily opens her eyes and look towards her alarm clock , and get up with a jerk.

" ohh nooo...its 8.10.,,, she makes a sad pout..and look towards a her mom, " maa ..apne mjhe uthaya kyuu niii "

Shalini, " aacchhajii...itni der se me yha aur kya kr rhii hu" , nandini makes a sad face.

Shalini continues," but aapko apne dream dkhne se fursat milegi tb na.."

Listening bht her dreams, she remembers her dream and smile ... but then a irritated face.

" yeaaa the dreammm,,, huhh maa...aaaj me apne prince charming ka face dkhne hi walii thii...aur aapne uthaa diyaa..." she makes irritated face.

Shalini makes a " iska kuch ni ho skta face " and says ,, tum na nandu bilkul pgl hoti ja rhi hi ho "

N :" no maa... u know hum date pr gye the, its was so beautiful,,, everything was in the colour of love, red,,, carpets, curtains , flowers,,,, aaahhh... and then i heard someone coming towards me, i turn and there was a tall man , coming towards me from the shadow, and he was just about to come in light...but... " she looks towards her maa with a sad pout "

S;" but i came " . shalini said with a playful smile.

N :" huhhh huhh huhhh... i hate you maaa " she said with a crying face "

Shalini laughs , and pull her cheeks ... " now put a full stop on ur dreams and get ready,,, see its already, 8.30."

N:" ohh maa, aap kitna bolte ho, me late hogyi.. " and she ran towards her washroom showing her tongue to shalini.

S:" aachha... tu ruk " but she was gone inside , shalini smiles." Jldi aana , me brkfst lgati hu."

ON THE BRKFST TABLE

Rajesh and Shalini, was already sitting on the brkfst table

Nandini wearing a simple black jeans with denim frock style shirt came there.

N: guddd morninggg appa , " she hugs her father.

R:" gud morning , merii jaann... aajao brkfst krlo"

N," no dad, today is my first day of clg, me church jar hi hu , clg k sth me hi haii, uske bd hi bkrfst kr lungii clg me hi "

Shalini, " kyaa bt haii,, aaj subah subah church and all ,, hann ?? kya chl rha haii. " shalini ask mischievously coz she know her daughter very well that she is not going there to pray for her first day in clg but , for something else.

N :" kyyyaaa baaa baatt maaa , aesaa kch nii...maine btayaaa na clg k liye " she stammers

And rajesh shalini laughes at her. She hiding her face ran outside after saying bye to them.

IN THE CHURCH

Nandini POV

Ufff , yeh maa bhii na... sb pta hai fr bhii . ohh jesus,,, plss plss plss... aaj mera clg ka first day haii .. ohh m sry ...appk to pta hi hoga... and yeh bhii ki me yha kyuu aayi hu.. (she makes cute face ) woo...aapko to pta hai mere prince charming k bare me... (then she makes a sad face and say.) u knowww jesuuss,,, maa ne mjhe aaaj fr uthaa diyaa... maine fr ussse nii dekhaa... aap pls use mere saamne le aaonaa...plss plsss plss...

Now i getting very late...haaan jesus.. . abhi i have togo.. but i will come again over here...ab to hum padosii haii hai...(and she winks at looking toward jesus.)

Dhruv enters the college in his new car, and everyone is awestruck to see such a car, he smirks looking at people's reactions, parked his car, and came out , and looks towards a group of girl,, admiring him from a distance, and gives his ever famous smile to them...

He was looking around the clg and passing through a ground, he saw a stage and a guitur on the it..and smiles ... he go on the stages... and starts playing the guitar and sings

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale


Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare

Idhar nahi
Udhar nahi
Teri Ore Chale

(Soon students started gathering , cheering for him , few of them know him so they started hooting for him with his name, and soon everyone started cheering him ... " maaaddyyy madddyyy maaddyyy ")


Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya

Zara der main
Yeh kya ho gaya
Nazar milte hi
Kahan kho gaya

Bheed mein logo ki woh hain wahan
Aur pyaar ki mele mein akela Kitna hoon mein yahan

(In the crowd of so many people, there was one pairs of eyes which was looking at him continuously.. and dhruv notice her coz she was standing at the end of everyone, so she was clearly visible to him , he smirks and found her attractive, her big eyes , That big lipss and her hairs .. he starts coming towards her , after completing the songs.)

Nandini enters the college , and was going towards her class, but then she heard, some girls, " oh my god ,,, maddy is singing in the ground"

She also loves singing, so just starts walking towards it, and soon a melodious voice fell into her ears and she just stopped at her place,

N:" ohh aaiyaapaa... he sings so well, and its my fav songs." And then she remembers, that , a day before in her dream, her prince charming was singing the same song for her. And her eyes starts, shining,,, knowing the fact. And she runs towards the ground.

She stood at the distance looking at him, singing so heart fully, and starts admiring him.

N : ohh aaiyaapa... Is he the one ?? " She thinks.

Dhruv came near her, and both looks towards each other , but then someone came between them... holds dhruv's collar.

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HEELLOOO PEOPLE..

DO HIT LIKE AND COMMENT

AND I WILL TRY TO GIVE ANOTHER CHAPTER IN COUPLE OF DAYS COZ M GOING ON HOLIDAY THIS WEEKEND, SO WONT BE UPDATING NXT WEEK!

TYSMM

APYYY⭐️



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Edited by apy1608 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
Awesome update
Eagerly to know what will happen next
Update next part soonish...
Tysm for pm

Keep smiling always
N Stay Blessed
😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
Awesome update...
Nandu dream 😆...

Going to church before clg...

What is going to happen next...

Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
AMAZING ...
EAGERLY WAITING
UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
Lovely update
Cont soon
Thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
Nandu is so cute... Clg ki koi tension nahi hai... Sari tension prince charming ki hi hai.. Hehehe...
N Dhruv me mat dhoondo price charming ko.. Coz woh to Manik ki place hai na...

Loved the update... The story keeps getting better
Thanxx for the update n the pm

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