MaNan TS : Coz You're Mine [Part Two Updated - PG 22] 28 Nov

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Akanksha Jain

@akankshajain05

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

It was an awesome story..
I really loved these two parts..
Thanku for these two parts... 👏
They were amazing..
Thanku for writing this dear...
Love a lot.. 😳

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asmi.6

@asmi.6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

Brilliant as usual !

Haha I don't believe Cabir and nandini actually practiced that stunt :P wow !

Loved this beautiful story :*

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mounicareddyc

@mounicareddyc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

Ahhh Juhi like always u killed it gal... Dis part was par excellence.. Superb it was.. Der plan was indeed superb n maniks cute confession nandus gussa all in one scene fab it was... Cute two shot..

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ChocolatePie14

@ChocolatePie14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

JUHI, IT WAS SO AWSOME... THANKS YOU SO MUCH FOR THE LOVELY TS... YOUR WORKS HAVE THE ABILITY TO TOUCH MY HEART... THE WHOLE ACT WAS DEFINITELY COOL... LOVE YOU SHONA...

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parth_luv

@parth_luv

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

awsum update
finally they r together

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tas456

@tas456

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Awesome!!!!!

Loved it completely

Miss cabir so so much😭

You r truly an amazing writer

Tqvm for the pm dear

Take care and stay blessed

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

wow..

what a beautiful ending.

just love this story. .

I dont believe ki cabir n nandu practice that stunt..

n manik ka cuye sa confession.

first hug n kiss.

wow..

that was awesome. .

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. .
more write..
aise two shots.

itss amazing.

U r such a beautiful writer...

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Thanks for pm too. ..

Stay blessed

Love Geet