Swasan OS Un nuovo inizio

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Hey Nalini!

A truly new and beautiful beginning! With the advent of a new life to enhance ones already so blessed by a love as pure as theirs, this child will be real start of a new chapter for a couple who have earned the right to bliss. And what bliss this was- the real involvement Sanskaar feels- one of the truly to be welcomed "new age" concepts if you like. A contrast to the now (rightfully) outdated world of fathers being mostly spectators particularly durning their wives pregnancies. But ofcourse Sanskaar was never going to be that husband or father. Give how his whole universe revolves around his Swara, the baby or later babies can only be a further extension of that love which truly would grow and multiply as shared and treasured. You managed to convey all that very tenderly and beautifully with this piece. I loved the story of the birds to show the allegory and then his conviction that it is a girl. Me somehow feels Papa is as usual right on this one too 😉

Sujata was simply hilarious- that touch of humour was perfectly balanced. Overall very nice work indeed!

Love

Shru X

Amazing OS! Such a beautiful imagination! Thank you!

Wow, beautifully written
This is what I woke up reading
So hopefully I will have an Amazing day
Thank you

Hey!! It's very cute and beautiful<3 Just loved the reference to weavers here. How sweet was that. And then SwaSan were so cute. So Sanskaar is jealous of the fact that Swara gets to experience everything before him...lol. Sanky she has the baby in her womb, and here he's acting so childish!! So Swara wants a boy and Sanskaar wants a princess just lile his Shona. He narrates stories to her!! Jeez what a loving dad<3
Just loved the OS!!
Fabulous job dude
Sakshi

Awesome work sweetheart nalini...<3 it was so refreshing and subtle

thats an awesome OS..

Lovely OS.. Loved every bit of it!

Res - had a quick read - and loved it - will unres for a detailed comment as soon as work permits.😲

Hey 😛