SidNi SS MohabattDurJaneNaDe,NafratPassAneNaDe Part 2 pg 3

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So guys, as per the poll, this story is selected by the readers.. i hope you enjoy!

Prologue

Sid's P.O.V

Meri life ka sirf ek hi matlab tha... Aiyaashi! Ya hun kaho... bade baap ki bigdi aulaad tha main. Principal ki daant, teachers ki maar... mere liye common the. Meri zndgi mere doston k naam thi... sach pucho toh sayad sirf wahi the.. jinhe main apna manta tha... jinse pyar karta tha. Lekin phir... wo meri life me aayi. Uske liye mujhe apne pyar k do hisse karne pade. Ab wo meri life thi... Ya... HAI...!

Roshni's P.O.V

Meri life ka bus ek hi maksat tha, Dance. Dance k bina life ka jaise koi matlab hi nahi tha... yah un kaho... Dance hi meri life thi. Chote seher se zarur thi... par mere iraade bahut bade the. Main sabko bata dena chahti thi k ek ladki kya kuch nahi kar sakti... lekin Akeli thi na... darti thi. Par phir... meri life me entry hui Someone Special ki.. uss ek mulakaat ne meri kismat badal di... ab wo meri kismet the... ah.. HAIN!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1


A school bus comes and stops. All the students inside are shouting and chilling. A girl climbs up. She perhaps she was the new admission. She had a different attitude which makes her different from others. When she comes all becomes silent and starts glaring at her. She was nervous as it was her first day at school. There was no seat blank for her so she went backside and stood up there only. The bus started but there ws a silence continued. Suddenly the bus braked and she fell upon someone who was sitting on the side seat. She was so scared that she closed her eyes and holds anything she found tightly. When she opened her eyes, she found a handsome face looking at her. His one hand was over her waist and other on her cheek (perhaps trying to protect her). Her one hand was round his neck and other holding his shirt tightly. She looked in his eyes, it was as deep as ocean and his face was so cute. He looks into her eyes, it was something most beautiful he had ever seen with a charming face. Their eye lock was broke by the bus horn. She got up asap and he let her to. A boy comes.

Boy: "Sid!" u r ok?

Sid: ah.. Swayam... yes m ok!

All comes out of the bus. The girl was going when rey was continuously looking at her. To his surprise, she turned back and smiled. He smiled back and she left.

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Prayer Class

Roshini comes and all other girls makes her stand at the first of the row coz her height was short. She stood and looked front. There was a guy staring at her.

Roshni(in mind): ye... Kaun hai yeh? Kahin toh dekha hai.. par kahan? Soch Roshni soch! Come on!! Oh yeah! Yeh toh wahi hai jiske upar main bus me gir gayi thi... kya naam hai... han. Sid!

Sid(in mind): yeh mujhe dekhkar itni confuse kyun hai? subah toh mile the, itni jaldi bhul gayi? Bhul gayi toh bhul jaye. Mujhe kya?? Waise naam kya hai iska? Come on rey, kuch bhi ho... tu itni tension kyun le rha hai?

Lunch Break

Roshni was looking here and there. She was alone and need company. A girl comes.

Girl: hello!

Roshni: hi!

Girl: hae, I m Sharon... Sharon Rai Prakash. M ur class mate.

Roshni: Roshini... Roshni Patel...

Sharon: so... friends?

Roshni: friends. Lunch kar len/

Sharon: han... tum chalo main aati hun.

She leaves. Sharon looks aside. There was Sid standing. She ups her thumb saying him done and he replied with the same.

Sid: Roshni...

He smiles.

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Sid and his friends are sitting in the canteen.

Vicky: yaar tum logon ko wo ladki yaad hai... subah wali?

Nilesh: kaun subah wali?

Amar: kahin tu us bus wali k bare me toh nahi bol rha?

Vicky: han han wahi wahi...

Swayam:(in a teasing tone) acha??? Wo jo Sid k upar gir gayi thi???

Sid glares at him.

Bharat: a vickky... Kahin tu uske saath time pass karne k bare me toh nahi soch raha na???

Amar: time pass kya? Yeh toh sala line mar raha hai uspe.

Nilesh: waise ladki hai toh different... try karte hai... kya bolte ho?

Sid: stop it yaar guys! Nayi hai wo. Aur phir... abhi sirf 8th me hai Roshni aur tum log...

Swayam: ek sec, ek sec, kya bola tu?? 8th me hai kaun???

Sid: Roshni!

Swayam: kya bat hai, pehle hi din uska naam pata kar liya??

Sid: aisa kuch nahi hai Swayam...

Vicky: kuch hai ki nahi mujhe nahi pata... par Sid yaar... plz tu mere liye use pata de na yaar plz..

Sid: Vicky, tu pagal ho gaya hai.

Vicky: come on Yaar, tu toh aisi chizon me expert hai na yaar... plz...

Sid: Vicky...

Vicky: tu mere liye itna nahi kar sakta?

Sid: chal.., koshish karta hun.

Vicky: Sid... u r d best!

Sid: I know!!

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Abhay: ab yeh kya kahani hai?

Swayam: yeh toh nahi maloom. Par isse Sid ko Rosni ke kareeb aane ka mauka mila. Ek dusre ko janne ka mauka mila. Kahin na kahin sayad they were falling for each other... par...

Uday: par kya?

Sharon: wo dono hi ye sab except karne ko taiyaar nahi the. Ya sayad wo abtak itne mature nahi the ki apni feelings samajh payen. Roshni khush thi, use sid ek saccha dost ban kar mila tha.

Swayam: aur Sid, dost toh wo tha... par asli maksat wo bhula nahi tha. Use Roshni ko Vicky k liye set karna tha. Koshis toh usne kai baar ki par... pata nahi kyun lekin nahi kar paya...

Sharon: waqt bitta gaya. Ek din Vicky ne Sid ko sawaal kar hi dia.

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Vicky: mujhe tujhse yeh umeed nahi thi Sid.

Sid: kya?

Vicky: itna time chala gaya, par teri taraf se ek bhi + point nahi aaya jisse me Roshni k kareeb ja sakun.

Sid: Vicky main koshish kar raha hun na...

Vicky: rehna de. Tu mujhe bewakoof nahi bana sakta kyun hum sab jante hain k ye sab tere bayen haath ka khel hai.

Sid: stop it Vicky. Maine kaha na main koshish kar rha hun...

Vicky: of course tu apni taraf se poori koshis kar raha hai. lekin mere liye nahi, apne liye.

Sid: what?

Vicky: sach toh yeh hai Sid ki Roshni k saath tu apni setting karna chahta hai.

Sid: what nonsense?

Nil: I think... Vicky sahi keh rha hai.

Sid: nilesh...

Amar: han... warna itna lamba interval toh tune pehle kabhi nahi liya.

Sid: pehle nahi liya that doesn't mean ab bhi nahi lunga... try to understand guys!

Bharat: understand kar rahe hai iss liye toh bol rahe hain. Come on Sid, hum tere dost hain, humse kya chipana? Accept it.

Sid: kya bol rahe ho tum log yaar guys...

Swayam: Sid, agar dhooaan utha hai, toh matlab kahin na kahin aag toh lagi hi hai.

Sid: swayam tu bhi??? Kamse kam tu toh mera yakin kar.

Vicky: ab ye dikhawa karne ki koi zarurat nahi hai... sach kya hai, yeh sabko pata hai.

Si looks everybody, all eyes were telling one thing only, what Vicky said. His BFF, whom he believed the most, swayam. He too had questions in his eyes. Sid took a deep breath.

Sid: ok. Fine. Kuch na ho kar bhi agar tum logon ko lagta hai na ki kuch hai... toh thik hai. ek mahina. Sirf ek mahine k andar, Roshni meri bahon me hogi. Mujhse apne pyar ka izhaar karegi. Sirf 1 mahine me, Siddharth ki Jaal me Roshni Phasegi...


to be continued...


guys, if some one wants the updates in english then tell me. Are you all comfortable with Hindi? Reply in comments.


Love,

Shirisha :-)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res..welcome to our forum..nd thanks for writing...
Wil read soon..nd m OK wid hindi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Welcome to forum..🤗Its nice to have new writer
I really loved it 😉I am totally okay with hindi...also I liked how you wrote it...Oh Sid will try to lure Roshni now but am scared Roshni might find out after and misunderstand Sid
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Awesome start👍🏼 Thanks for start writing on SidNi😳 Would love to read more keep writing😃
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Awesome start dear loved it do continue soon...
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Nice beginning of the story! You wrote it well and had me intrigued! Continue soon...
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super interesting teddy do continue soon😳
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Part 2: will you be my Girl Friend??

Roshni and Roshni were returning from her couching classes when she found Siddharth standing at the road side.

Roshni: Hi...tum yahan kya kar rahe ho?

Siddharth: kisika intzaar...

Roshni: intazaar?? Kiska?

Siddharth: kisi khas ka...

Roshni: tumhara ka ghar iss taraf hai?

Siddharth: nahi... kisiko kuch kehne jaa raha hun.

Roshni: oh...

Siddharth: suno... tum meri Girlfriend banogi?

Roshni: kya? Kya bak rahe ho tum? R u crazy??

Siddharth: of course I m... just for u only!

Roshni: stop this nonsense! Sharon, let's go.

Siddharth: are... Roshni suno toh. I know tum kya soch rahi ho... par Roshni yahi sach hai that I love u... I really love u Roshni...

Roshni: I don't like jokes!

Siddharth: its not a joke! It's the truth... think about it han...!

Roshni: tum...

Suddenly they saw their skul teacher and they proceeded in opposite way.

Next Day (School Bus)

Siddharth: principal ne agar kal k bare me pucha toh kya bologi?

Roshni: yahi... k khali rasta tha, hum akele aa rahe the toh bhaiya ne saath diya.

Siddharth: wow! Superb! But don't say bhaiya... I think u care for me.

Roshni: bhaiya nahi toh kya saiyan bolun?

Siddharth: han wo chalega...!

Roshni makes an O face and Siddharth winks smiling.

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Days passed. Siddharth tried his best to make Roshni fall for him. But it wasn't too easy.

One day (school canteen)

Roshni and Sharon are sitting as usual. Siddharth comes with a pack of chocolates.

Sharon: dekh Roshni... tere liye kya mast chocolates aa rahe hain yaar...

Roshni; shut up Sharon, bakwas band kar... mujhe nahi chahiye chocolate woclate.

Siddharth comes to them.

Siddharth: Hi girls!

Sharon: hi!

Roshni tries to avoid him.

Siddharth takes the chocolate and gives it to Sharon.

Siddharth: Sharon.. yeh tumhare liye.

Roshni: mere liye? Thnx!

Roshni looks at them surprised. Siddharth watches her expression.

Siddharth: Sharon... tumhe nahi lagta kuch zal raha hai???

Roshni: jal raha hai? kya?

She then sees Siddharth looking at Roshni.

Sharon: I think u r right! Smell toh mujhe b aa rahi hai. kyun Roshni???

She stands up.

Roshni: mujhe koi smell nahi aa rahi hai... main jaa rahi hun. Tu chocolate kha.

She leaves. Sharonm laughs and have a high-five.

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Roshni is sitting in the park.

Roshni: khud ko samajhte kya hain? Honge wo smart... par main b kacchi khiladi nahi hun. Itni jaldi haath nahi aane wali. Bade aaye zal raha hai kuch... main nahi jalti kisise.!

Siddharth: toh mene kab kaha k tum zal rahi thi?

Roshni looks aside and shocks seeing Siddharth sitting beside her.

Roshni: aap... Yahan kya kar rahe ho???

Siddharth: oh hello! Yeh tumhari private property nahi hai k main nahi aa sakta.

Roshni: mujhe aapse baat nahi karni.

Siddharth: mujhe karni hai.

Roshni: par mujhe nahi karni na...

She stood up and about to go when Siddharth hold her hand and drag her. She was exactly oh his lap!

Roshni: Siddharth... Siddharth kya kar rahe ho chodo mujhe... koi dekh lega.

Siddharth: dekhne do.

Roshni: Siddharth plz leave me koi aa jayega.

Siddharth: aane do... waise bhi, tum toh bahana banane me expert ho na...

Roshni tries her best to be free but she was in a strong hold. Siddharth smiled mischievously and left her. She looks into his eyes and gets lost in it, Siddharth smiled.

Siddharth: ab hume koi nahi dekhega??

Roshni gets her senses back and stands straight.

Siddharth: waise... kal picnic par toh aa rahi ho na???

Roshni: picnic?

Siddharth: han..

Roshni: dekhungi.

She was about to go.

Siddharth: Roshni!

She stops.

Siddharth: I Love You!

She smiles unknowingly and leaves.

Siddharth: kab tak Roshni? Kabtak dabaogi apni feelings? Kabhi na kabhi toh... bologi hi.

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PICNIC

Sharon: Roshni jaldi kar... late ho jayenge.

Roshni: han tu chal main aati hun.

Sharon leaves.

Roshni: acha khasa picnic pea aye the, patanahi ye museum dekhne ka idea kise sujh gya... sara mazaa kirkira...!

After sometimes bus leaves. Roshni comes running out of tent.

Roshni: hi! Stop ruko mere liye!

Then Siddharth comes.

Siddharth: shit! Main phirse late ho gaya!

Both look at each other.

Siddharth: bus toh chut gayi!

Roshni: nahi.. hum chut gaye hain!

Siddharth: ab kya Karen?

Roshni: rasta dhunte hain.

Siddharth: han chalo.

Roshni: alag alag dhunde jaldi mil jayega.

Siddharth: lekin agar hum kho gaye toh?

Roshni: ek sec...

She takes out wool from her bag.

Siddharth: yeh kya hai?

Roshni: iska end aap pakdo, ek main pakadti hun. Alag alag jaate hain, jise rastsa mila wo dusre ko pukarega, aur hum khoenge b nahi!

Siddharth; wow! What an idea! Lets do it.

They go in opposite direction. After sometime, Roshni gets bump with an elephant and shouts. Siddharth hears it and runs to her direction. Both runs and gets bump to each other.

Siddharth: kya hua?

Roshni: kya? Kuch b toh nahi.

Siddharth: toh chikhi kyun?

Roshni: main??? Nahi toh!

Siddharth: Roshni, jhoot mat bolo.

Roshni: main jhoot nahi bol rahi hun. Sach yeh hai k aap akele darr rahe the issliye daudte hue chale aaye.

Siddharth: oh madam! Dar main nahi tum rahi thi!

Roshni: oye hello! Main kisise nahi darti. Apna khayal khud rakh sakti hun.

Siddharth: acha? Yeh baat? Toh thik hai. rakho apna khayal. Main jaa raha hun.

Roshni: haan toh jao na. mujhe b koi zarurat nahi hai aapki.

Siddharth: fine! I m going!

They go in different direction and throw the wool they were having. After a while it starts darkening and raining.

Roshni: pata nahi main itna akadti kyun hun! Siddharth se jhagda kar ke apne pair par khud hi kulhadi maar di maine. Ab toh andhera hone laga hai, barish bhi badh rahi hai, aur dar bhi!

Then she hears some sounds of wild animals. She starts crying in fear. Suddenly she feels something on her shoulder. She turns and about to shout when he keeps his other hand on her mouth. And that's Siddharth!

Siddharth: ssshhh! Chillana mat! Main hun.

Roshni haves a breath of relief and hugs him tightly crying.

Roshni: acha hua Siddharth, jo aap aa gaye... main bht dar gayi thi... mujhe laga main...

Siddharth: Roshni, Roshni relax! Main hun na... don't cry.

Roshni: par... (she looks at him) hum toh alag alag raste gaye the na? phir aap yaha kaise?

Siddharth: main janta tha k aisa hi kuch hone wala hai... isliye main tumhare piche piche hi aa raha tha.

Roshni: apko pata tha??? Kaise?

Siddharth: bus... aise hi!

Roshni: nahi Siddharth! Aise hi nahi... batayiye aapko kaise pata tha? Kaise jante the aap? Kaise jante ho aap mujhe..., itni achi tarah se..?

Siddharth: Roshni...

Siddharth: come on Siddharth! Tell me! Why???

Siddharth: because I love u!!! kyunki pyar karta hun main tumse! Sayad apni zaan se bhi jyada! I love u Roshni... I really love u very much!

They had a long eye lock, lost into each other's eyes.. Siddharth was looking into her eyes with love and care and Roshni was looking into his eyes with love and happiness. The rain made the moment more romantic!

Their eye lock was broken by the bus horn.

Roshni: lagta hai sab log aa gaye.

She was going when he hold her hand.

Siddharth: apna zawaab toh deti jao.

She tries to free her hand.

Siddharth comes close.

Siddharth: jabtak tum zawaab nahi deti, main haath nahi chodunga. (she looks at him) main chodunga nahi Roshni.

Roshni: wo... main...

Siddharth: tum kya??

Roshni: wo...

Siddharth: bolo...

Roshni: Siddharth main...

Siddharth: Roshni tum???

Roshni: main b aapse pyar karti hun. I Love You Too!!!

He left her hand in happiness and she ran away!

To be continued...

Love,

Shirisha😊


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Wonderful so confession over
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