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Well guys this is my first time writing a STORY... I hope u guys will like it and please do comment and I welcome criticism coz it will only help me in writing it better the next time..
Well I felt curious to write this Two Shorts after seeing the Precap of Saturday's episode (20th Feb 2016).. And Abhi finding the truth.. Well m going to leave this TS at a stage where Abhi learns the truth and him going through the a roller coaster of emotions.. If every1 likes it then I can continue it as a SS with how Abhi will react and gets things done after knowing the truth...
It's starts off Abhi leaving the room in which Sarla is in after blasting off at Pragya.. He leaves the room and closes the door behind him..
Pragya starts crying and fallen to her knees.. Daasi also has tears in her eyes and walks over to Pragya and sits in the chair beside her..
D: (puts her hand on Pragyas head and immediately Pragya falls on Daadi's lap) Don't cry Pragya... Please don't cry... Abhi doesn't know the truth naa that's y hez reacting like this... And hez worried about ur Maa also.. And on top of it Tanu is forcing him about the shaadi..
P: (keeps sobbing heavily)
D: even he is going through the a ray of emotions just like you.. Hez confused y Sarla gave ur hand in his when she gave him permission for his marriage with Tanu.. Please don't take it to ur heart about what he said.. Please meri bachi don't cry (saying this Daadi lifts Pragyas head and wipes her tears)
P: (looks at Daadi teary eyed and starts to speak) why always with me Daadi... Y do things always happen with me?? I don't have anymore strength or courage to fight further Daadi.. I keep on loosing my loved one in this battle and m no where near the end.. I can't do this anymore.. Y does God always do such things for me only.. Y did he make me meet him and then fall in love with him n now hez keeping us apart and making me loose all my loved ones for just one person..
(Saying this Pragya again falls on Daadi's lap and cries... Daadi gently strokes her head with her eyes closed )
D: everything will be alright meri bachi... These are just testing times.. God wants to see weather u have strength in u to fight with the evil.. See how he made u listen to Both Aliyas convo and Tanu's convo when u gave up this marriage.. God doesn't want u to loose.. That's y He made he made me go to the same hospital which u were in and struggling b/w life and death.. It's because of God and the love of ur loved ones that you got a second life and I found you..
(Pragya raises her head wipes her tears and looks at Daadi)..
D: And when u told be they Aliya is trying to destroy her own brother and Tanu is not carrying Abhi's child .. I wanted u to take up this Roop and throw away all the evil in Abhi's life.. I am selfish beta.. (Daadi sobs) yes I am .. Making you go through the all this.. My heart was breaking into pieces seeing how every1 is hating you and how Abhi is treating you.. I couldn't console you openly.. U had to bear everything alone when m supposed to share it with you..
P: don't say like that Daadi.. Please..
D: nahi beta let me speak... To save Abhi u even had to lie to ur mother and take her wrath.. I know how much u craved for her love... U had fallen for life threatening attacks to expose Aliya Tanu and the 3rd person.. And Bulbul gave her life saving you and now ur Maa is in this condition.. M sorry beta it's all coz I asked u to put up this act..
P: no Daadi don't save like that.. It's not ur fault.. Even I agreed to do this.. I could have said no. But I didn't and I continued with the act.. U wanted to tell the truth to Abhi after Bulbul's death .. But I stopped u think that he will not believe us without proofs..
(Daadi and Pragya sob hugging each other)
D: ( Daadi looks at Sarla on the bed opposite her) Sarla ji found out the truth about u and u got ur mothers affection which u craved for long and she got 1 of her Beti back ... But then ... ( Daadi has tears in her eyes ) all this happened.. SArla ji get kidnapped and had an accident and now she's in this state..
(Both Pragya and Daadi look at Sarla )
D: ab hum kya Kare.. Sarla Ji ki halat is not good. And she hasent gained consciousness .. We don't know who did this and who is responsible for her condition.. And we also don't know who the really father is of Tanu 's baby.. She's forcing Abhi for the wedding.. We have to do something..
P: don't know Daadi what to do.. My mind is not working.. Maa ki halat aisa hai, o. Top of it we still don't know who's Tanu's BF and now Aliya is back from Jail... I don't have any courage to do anything seeing Maa in this condition..
D: everything will be alright meri bachi... Just trust God..
Scene shifts to outside the room it's dark outside as its late night and the lights are switched off ... Some1 is standing at the door and listening to the whole conversation with their front to the door..
Please comment guys .. I would like to know ur criticism and opinions ..
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