Abhigya TS _ Knowing the truth Pt2/pg4 completed. - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: vlhs12993

yay one more writer in our forum!!

really nice os. now you made me expect some thing positive from the precap.
waiting for part 2 and many more stories from you😃.


Thank you so much for ur compliment and appreciation..

Will surely write more if I keep on getting such compliments.. Well this is my 1st so was a little scare weather people will like it or not..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: azira

Hey... when will you update please update soon


I will finish updating it tonight..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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This Part if full of Abhi and his emotions.. I havent thought abt anything further than this Part. . So if you guys like it I shall try to make it into a SS..


PART 2



Previously:

outside the room it's dark outside as its late night and the lights are switched off ... Some1 is standing at the door and listening to the whole conversation with their front to the door..


Present:

It turns out that person is Abhi.. His eyes are blood red with tears.. he looses his balance a little bit and falls on the table behind making some noise.. Daadi and Pragya hear this and wipe their tears and get up to come out. Abhi immediately leave the place.. Daadi and Pragya come out of the room and notice no one their.
P: Daadi , you please go and sleep. Its quite late. I 'll Sleep here in Maa's room..
D: Ok beta. But do take some rest, ur exhausted..


Scene shifts to some Room.. Not Abhi's room.. Abhi comes in there in a rush and bangs the door closed .. He paces around the room throwing and breaking things madly.. his eyes are still blood red with tears and has a very Angry face at the same time.

A: WHY?? ( Keeps throwing things and keeps breaking the glass objects)

Abhi runs his hands on his face and his hair and shouts Agrr...

A: Inta badaa Sachh mujhse chupaya gaya hai... Kyu?? Kyu??

Abhi has a reversed flashback of everything quickly from today to the day Sarla confronted Abhi and took away Pragya.

Abhi see's that memory of Pragya and then remembers some guy comming in and telling that Abhi's wife met with an accident and Abhi madly searching for Pragya and then comming back home and Daadi comforting him..

Then Abhi remembers the letter that Pragya sent and then The entry of New Pragya.. and his conversation with her..

A: Why did you do this to me Fuggy? Why did you keep the truth from me? And Daadi even u hid the truth from me. (Tears start rolling from his eyes) ..

A: You guys know what m going through and still hid the truth from me? WHY?

Then Abhi remembers how Pragya stopped his wedding with Tanu citing the reasons of his new release.
He remembers dragging Pragya into his room and showing all her things and the diary.
He remembers all the times where he thought fuggy was in his dreams... He says you were in real.. You couldnt see my pain..

A: Why was i not able to recognise that you were my fuggy?? But what is my mistake.. When ever i thought u were my fuggy you changed ur attitude and gave some or the other excuse.

Abhi remembers Pragya giving him coffee, Abhi eating off Pragya's dinner and Pragya making him his fav breakfast.

A: smiles and says , U still kept doing things for me without my knowledge..

Abhi remembers the drunk Pragya when he took her for a date..

A: starts laughing.. U'll never change. U cant handle alcohol. pagal Fuggy...

Abhi then remembers the dussehra incidents and his facial expressions again change and he starts crying.. he remembers saving Pragya from the bell and the sindoor on her forehead. then he remembers seeing Pragya in the Ravan and saving her.

Abhi runs his hands all over his face..

Abhi then remembers the KC and how Pragya funnily made him break her fast.. Abhi has slite smile..

Abhi is lost in thoughts n he remembers all the moments he had with Pragya in the past as well as after she came back with her new avatar...

He then remembers the moments when ALiya asked Pragya to get out of the house and Tanu checking Pragya's bags and him seeing Fuggy doll and Abhi's photo in her bag and Pragya's face with tears.. Then he remembers how Pragya exposed ALiya and how Pragya supported him infront of Raj bhayya..

He then remembers all the times he cried thinking of Fuggy.. Talking with her chashma and fuggy doll...

A: Why did you do this?? You have seen what i was going through and still let me go through all that.. Even you were suffering along with me.. How many times have i shouted at you and insulted you .. but u didnt utter a single word but just went on listening to what i have to say.. Why did u give urself soo much Takleef and me too? WHY?? Each and every minute i was carving for you. going mad with ur changed behaviour and u stood there calmly..

Abhi starts drinking..

A: Why do you have to go to such lengths? Why make every1 hate you? Why did you listen to Daadi. You could have told me everything directly.. And Daadi you tooo?? You know exactly what i am going through and still kept quite and kept on saying everything will be ok.. Why daadi? Dont you trust me with the truth?

A: (with rolling tears) Fuggy why did you do all this? Why did you take such a bigg risk.. Why did you leave me and came back in a different avatar altogether .. Why did you make me start hating you? We could have been together all this time. Bulbul lost her life due to all this (Has Angry expression on his face)...

and remembers how he behaved with Pragya when shez crying after Bulbul's death.. (now he has tears with angry expressions)

A: Now Sarla aunty is in this condition... Why do all this Pragya.. Why keep me in the dark? Why give Takleef to all your loved ones? Mee and ur Maa... (Confused look)

Suddenly he remembers Sarla giving Pragya's hand in his..

A: Does this mean Maa knows abt this and wanted me not to leave you? is that the reason she gave me ur hand?

Abhi then remembers the time Pragya questioned Tanu's intentions.. That Tanu is with him only for his money and what if the baby is not really his.. (Abhi has a shocked expression) and he throws the whisky bottle on the wall ..

He then remembers All the times Tanu fooled him with the baby stuff.. (Abhi's Anger keeps building up) .. He remembers how she fooled Pragya and him in the start.. He thinks of how she always gave some or the other excuses and avoided things. How she always in a hurry to get married. How she insulted and talked about Pragya's character when Pragya returned.. he thinks of all the incidents with tanu..

Abhi who is holding his Whisky glass breaks it in his fists in anger...

A: (he has a very serious expression) Enough.. I wont let to play games anymore Tanu.. You betrayed me. You were the reason my fuggy left me. I wont leave you. You talk about others characters.. but ur character is the worst.. If by any chance ur responsible for Sarla Maa's condition then m going to kill you for sure.. Its my mistake to even like you once upon a time.. Chiii...

A: Now i am going to end this game..

Abhi then gets up from there and leaves the room closing the door..



The End..



Well guys i thought of the story till here.. Hope you all will like it.. Please comment and criticise on how it was .. coz this is my first story and it will help me a lott in my future ones..
Edited by Sowmii_cutiee - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice soumya.. i m really surprise Abhi behaved so +vely.. hope cv's will also end like this..
btw why did u stop here? continue na about how he managed to expose Tanu..?😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: kulsum_5

Nice soumya.. i m really surprise Abhi behaved so +vely.. hope cv's will also end like this..

btw why did u stop here? continue na about how he managed to expose Tanu..?😳


Thankyou... It's not about showing +vly .. Well I tried to show how Abhi felt in those situations and he thinking how Pragya must have felt.. How much he suffered and so Pragya..

I don't think it will ever happen in the show..

Well I just thought of the story till here.. I need some encouragement to continue to next part..


M trying to weave the story for the next part and m getting some amazing points.. Which could add fun..

Well I might write the next part soon...

Thankyou once again for the compliment 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Well actually I loved it. Their feelings and emotions are beautifully described. And... And.. Yeah, I do not know how to describe your first attempt in writing. It's amazing...
And u should continue this, literally.
Btw thanks for pm. And u hope u will continue it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tisha1313

Well actually I loved it. Their feelings and emotions are beautifully described. And... And.. Yeah, I do not know how to describe your first attempt in writing. It's amazing...

And u should continue this, literally.
Btw thanks for pm. And u hope u will continue it.


😊 Thank you for your compliment ... Well tried my best.. This is my first time writing any kind of story..

Well I might continue with another chapter Soon if I get lots of encouragement 😆...

Thank you once again for liking it.. 😛

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved your writing. Loved Abhi's diff emotions and thoughts. Continue this pls about what will Abhi do further. Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice...somehow I was hoping that this is the way Abhi knows the truth. This way the CV will maintain Abhi's smartness...[the same as MMS track]
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update.
Abhi's emotions were beautifully described. Loved it.
Do continue as yo how Abhi expose Tanu.
Thanks for pm.

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