Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued) - Page 12

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Posted: 9 years ago


Chapter 8:

Hello guys...new chapter for u all..as I'm happy that my exam went pretty well...ok now enjoy!!
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Nandini's Pov:I was going back to my room when I thought..what about navya ..she will get scared and I won't be with her..I think I should stay in her room..but what if it eats both of us...no no no...ill talk to Manik...

I went back to his room and knocked!

Manik opened the door...

Manik:ab kya hua?

Nandini:Manik..mera toh theek hai..but what about navya...she would be scared...so I have to stay with her...

Manik:what?..no no no...

Nandini:why r u shouting...ok listen...I think we three should stay in one room..what say?

Manik:no Nandini...I mean..navya ..she's not scared...she will manage...

Nandini:are no...I know her na...she will...so I have decided ..we will both stay with you...

Manik:no...only u r staying with me...

Nandini:are lekin...

Manik:nandu...navya can stay with Cabir na...why r u worrying...?

Nandini:are you sure?

Manik:101%

Nandini:ok...then I'll tell her to stay in cabir's room...

I was about to go but he pulled me back..

Manik:no!..main Hun na I'll tell her...bana banaya plan kyun kharab karun main...

He said the last sentence in whisper...I was confused

Nandini:what?

Manik:I'll tell her myself...

Nandini:ok...Manik..

Manik:Han...

Nandini:I'm bored lets do something crazy!!

I said excitedly

Manik:plz...pehle hi tum bohat crazy ho..ab aur craziness...no..I can't handle it...

Nandini:if you won't come na...I will...I...I will...

Manik:you will what?

Nandini:I will throw you in the garbage bin..and they will take you to some isolated island where there will be rats and they will eat you...phir mat kehna...mujhe Nandini ki baat sun leni chahiye thi!!

Manik:really...tum mujhe Utha kar dikhao..apna size check kiya...ur like a small rat!

My mouth was wide open...how dare he call me a rat...now I will surely throw him in the bin...

Nandini:Manik malhotra..u r so dead...say sorry now!!

Manik:Manik malhotra kisi se sorry nahi bolta dude!

Nandini:aur Nandini murthy sorry bulwa kar hi rehti hai dude!

Manik:acha...make me!!...he smirked

Nandini:oh you will!!

I went and pushed him...(tried)...but he didn't even move an inch...his body is like an elephant...so big and heavy...but at the same time..sexy too...shut up nandu...this is time for revenge..,

Nandini:...Manik...u r so gone...just wait till I complain uncle...and dekhna...u will say sorry...

I showed him my tongue and went running downstairs...

Manik:Nandini..wait...main bus mazak kar raha tha...Oh God...ab yeh koi ulti seedhi kahani bana kar bata de gi...then I'm gone!

I went downstairs running and fake crying...

Nandini:uncle..uncle!!!

Raj:kya hua beta...why r u crying..what happened?

Nandini:uncle..Manik...

Raj:kya kiya Manik ne ab?

Nandini:uncle...Manik...

Manik came there too...

Raj angrily:Manik..ab kya kiya tum ne...Nandini kyun ro rahi hai?

Nandini:Manik ne mujhe thappar Mara...

Raj shouted:Manik..what the hell...tum ne use thappar kyun Mara...how dare you ...aik larki per haath uthate hue sharam nahi ati tumhe!

Manik:no dad..she is lying...yeh drama kar rahi hai!

Nandini:uncle...aap ko lagta hai main drama kar sakti Hun...theek hai...agar sab ko mujh se itni hi lroblem hai toh main aaj Isi wakt chali jaon gi...

Raj:no beta...

Navya and cabir too arrived there listening to the noise...

Navya:kya hua Nandini?

Raj:Manik..say sorry to her!

Manik:but...

Raj shouted:say sorry!!!..

Manik looked at me angrily and I winked at him..then I saw him gritting his teeth...wow nandu...u should get a gold medal for such a superb acting!

Nandini:nahi rehne den uncle...'Manik Malhotra kisi se sorry nahi bolta!'

I said looking at him and he was glaring at me...hehe...now u will say sorry mr.malhotra...and us seto bhi Zada...

Raj:what are you waiting for?...an invitation?

Manik:Nandini...I'm...sor...sorry!

Nandini:nahi..I won't forgive you...main yahan se ja rahi Hun...

Raj:plz beta na jao...

Nandini:on one condition!

Raj:what condition?

Nandini:Manik...will go on his knees...and he will hold his ears and say sorry...then I won't go

Manik:what the hell...I'm not doing that...

Raj:you have to..come on...

Cabir:lekin dad..hua kya?

Raj:tumhar ladle bhai ne Nandini ko thappar Mara...I'm so ashamed of you Manik!!...ab tum karte ho ya phir...

Manik:ok fine...

Manik came in front of me and I was controlling my laughs...he sat on his knees..and held his ears...OMG!!...his picture holding his ears should be added in the Guinness book!!...like seriously..The Manik Malhotra is holding his ears and saying sorry...

Manik:I'm sorry Nandini..plz forgive me!

Nandini:it's ok Manik...I know tum ghusse main bohat kuch kar dete ho..and baad main phir pachtate ho..but I understand...

Manik whispered to her:just wait n watch miss.murthy...I will myself say to the dinosaurs to eat you alive..and I won't save you!!

My wyes popped out of my sockets...OMG...that means..this is the last day of my life...I didn't knew I would die so early...but still...I have achieved something today...and that is mr.malhotra apology!!...and that is something huge...I must say...but still...I think main ne kuch Zada hi kar diya...now who will save me??...

Manik stood up

Raj:Manik..now you will stay away from Nandini...main tumhe us ke aas paas bhi na dekhun...I thought ke u will listen to me and do as I say..but now I think..it's no use...Nandini doesn't deserves a guy like you!!..shame on you!!

Saying this uncle went towards his room...

Manik:Nandini murthy...u will pay for doing this!!..I swear!!

I gulped my saliva...what will he do...and I know..when he says something..that means he will definitely do it...

Cabir:matlab yeh sab drama tha..bhabhi ji?

Nandini:Han..because he said that I'm a small rat..and then I said to say sorry..but he didn't listen cause he is The Manik Malhotra...so I thought ..to play with him...

Navya:wah nandu...tu ne toh kamal kar diya...wah wah...

Nandini:thanku thanku!!

Cabir:navya just shut up...warna...

Navya:warna kya Han...kyaa kar lo ge...tch tch tch...tum dono bhai ab hum dono ka kuch nahi bigar sakte...kyun ke agar tum logo ne kuch kiya...toh hum seedha ja ke uncle ko batayein ge...aur phir tum dono bheegi bills ban jayo ge!!

Me and navya both burst out laughing..and manbir went from there angrily...

Ok ..so now..I need to think something...where should I hide now...and the dinosaur is huge...and I'm small...so I can easily hide anywhere..and he can't find me..hehe

Night time:

I was in my room...looking out of the window..there was no sign of the dinosaur...then I heard some noise...I went towards my room door...

Roaaarrr!!!!!!!

I shrieked...and started sweating...the dinosaur has came to eat me...what should I do...now...plz someone help...I quickly called Manik's number..but damn...he is not picking up..probably he is still angry on me...but I'll say sorry to him..yeah...

Then I heard no noise...I think the dinosaur went away...ill make a run for Manik's room then...I slightly opened the door...and saw nothing...I tip toed outside...and ran as fast as I could...

I tried to open his door and it was open..thank God...I came in and locked the door...and saw him sleeping...I jumped on the bed and hugged him as tight as possible...

Manik's Pov:I can't believe what Nandini did...seriously now dad is very angry with me...and my and Nandini's marriage pakka cancel...but I'm Manik Malhotra...meri dictionary main no hai hi nahi...Nandini ko toh main bataon ga...then I remembered about the dinosaur thing..so I thought to play with her...I went towards her room and heard her blabbering something...and I knew what..hehe...then I played a ringtone on my mobile..so that she gets scared..and as expected..she did...now she will come running to me...yes...I quickly went back to my room but leaving my room door opened...and then lied down...after a minute or two...I heard the door being locked and I knew...it's her

She jumped on my bed and hugged me tight...hehe...Plan Successful!!...then I wrapped my hands around her tight!!

Then she spoke

Nandini:Manik..ur awake?

Manik:yes..and I was waiting for you!

Nandini:tumhe kaise pata I'll come?

Manik:because I knew when I'll play that sound...you will come running to me!!!

Nandini:what the...u ...it was you???

Manik:of course..meri Jan...nahi toh tum apne hone wale husband ke pas nahi ati na Baba...

Nandini tried to get free but I didn't let her go

Nandini:leave me..or I will tell uncle

Manik:oh I remember...ab tumhe punishment toh milni chahiye mujhe phasane ke liye...kyun?

Nandini:Manik..I was...I was just...joking...don't get so serious na...

Manik:no baby...this is a matter of seriousness...you will get punished!!

Nandini:Manik..I'm sorry..ab I won't complain..pakka!

Manik:I very well know your promises sweetheart!!

I grabbed her hands and pinned her to the bed...she was struggling to get free...but I didn't budge...I slammed my lips with hers...and she wasn't responding..I bit her lip and she opened her mouth...and I was relishing the taste...and enjoying...it has been quiet a while..I didn't kiss her...finally I broke the kiss as she was gasping for air...

Nandini:you can't just kiss me like that...first you should ask for permission...'Nandini ..may I kiss you?'...and then when I'll say yes...then you have to kiss me jerk!

Manik:oh..I'm so sorry...ok I'll ask...'dear Nandini...may I kiss you?'

Nandini:No!!

Manik:but why?

Nandini:one kiss is enough for one night

Manik:so I get a kiss every night?

Nandini:I'll think and let you know

Manik:ok

Nandini:now plz would you do the honors of leaving me..I'm very sleepy

Manik:oh..ok!!

After a while..we both drifted to sleep



Edited by LovelyKat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum update...
manik called him rat...hahaha...
nandu is such a drama queen...
she is too funny...
loved this nandu...
last part was hilarious...she is so innocent...
loved d update...
keep smiling..take care...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update...
Manan kissed...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting anxiously...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
super awesome ...beautiful update ...full on masti wala update ...jus loved it ...next update bhi jaldiii okay ...n tankew so much for the pm ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsme update n too cute nandini kya dimag paya h bechara manik n lst movement us soo cute may i kiss u
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazinggg
Superbbb update
Hahahaha manik malhotra kisi ko sorry nhi bolta...dramebaaz nandu kitna drama hehehehe...lovd it...continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
too cute yr... so sweet...c story
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Nandini is really a rat
Poor manik got scolded by his dad again very badly but what manik did was awesome
And nandini went running to him
And their kiss
If nandini likes manik so much why is she making it difficult for both of them
Agree manik is a jerk and he should not force himself on her
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh god , so funny update . And seeking permission for kiss this part was damn funny. Will eagerly wait for the next update

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