TWINJ OS:SHARING BED

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is my first OS so please let me know how it is
OS:SHARING BED

It was morning
T:kunj gud morning ye lo bed tea
K:kahan ja rahi ho itna sawere sawere
T:kahin nahin woh bas chinky ke sath shopping pe ja rahi thi itna stress hai mahi ki shadi ko leke socha thoda relax kar loon

(twink started leaving)

K:twinkle
T:haan kya hua
K:kuch nahi
T:sab thik hai na mein jaoon
K:haan jaoo

(kunj was a little bit upset)
NOW twink at chinky house

T:chinky tune sab kuch ready rakha hai na
C:haan maine ek meri friend ko bulaya hai chal
t:woh cake accha banati hai na
c:haan first class tu tension mat le woh tujhe sikha degi acche se cake banana aur tu apne pati ke liye pyaaar bhra cake apne hathon se bana lena
(twink blushed)
t:woh bas mein anyway leave it kahan hai woh jaldi chal

(actually today was kunj birthday although there was alot of tension due to mahiraj marriage but keeping those tension away twinkwanted to cheer her husband by giving him surprise)

Twink at chinky house learnt to bake cake from that very friend of chinky and came to home

kunj was a little bit upset as due to celebration and tension noone remembered his birthday but kunj also tried to ignore his birthday but he somewhere wanted to remember but it was also ok
whole day passed but noone wished him even twink was ignoring it

Even everyone took dinner and gone for sleep by 9 O'clock
twinj also slept with somewhat sad mood

Twink woke up when he slept and she silently gone to kitchen and baked the cake of kunj choice and came to the room with the cake

Twink rang kunj and he woke up and when he seen twink no. he somewhat panicked and gone to terrace by shouting twink name

HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU.. HAPPY BIRTHDAY YO YOU...

(and all terrace lighted up kunj was shocked when he turned face)

T:many many happy return of the day my patidev
K:thanks. to tumhe yaad tha
T:tumne soch bhi kaise ki mein tumhara birthday bhool jaoonge
K:tume phir subah se wish kyun nahi kiya
T:badla lene ke liye
K:badla kaisa badla
T:yaad hai tumne bhi mujhe mere birthday pe aise hi sataya tha . to bas meie thodi aur late kar di as mein tumse hi to sab kuch sikhkar aur efficiency se kaam karti hoon
anyway baate hi karte rahoonge ki cake bhi katoge warna pata chalega birthday bit gaya
tumhe pata hai kitni mehnat se subah se ye cake banana sikha aur kitne pyaar se tumhare liya banaya
chalo ab bakwas band karo aur cake kato

(kunj cut the cake and twink fed him a bit and not given abite to twink)

K; saara cake mein khaoonga aakhir meri biwi ne mere liye bare pyaaar se banaya hai
T:kunj kitne selfish ho tum ek to meine pehli baar itne mehnat se aur pyaar se banaya aur tum mujhe taste bhi karne nahi de rahe hoo
K:thats why my siyaapa queen
T: kunj tum mujhe ye siyaapa queen bulana band karo

(twink managed to snatch the cake and took a bite)

T:ewww tumne ese khaya kaise ye itna salty hai
K:isliye to tujhe nahi de raha tha
T:I m sorry kunj woh jaldi jaldi mein chini ke jagah namak dal diya
K:Its ok twink this is the best cake i ever ate and especially for today its very special as today when none remembered my birthday u only remembered it and moreover my wife has made it with alot love
aur aise bhi humara rishta bhi todha salty aur unique hai baki sab se is cake ki tarah

(kunj was now happy and relaxed as now mainly for him his wife mattered the most and if she rembered then he doesnt want anything more
both twinj enjoyed alot done dance gappe sappe )

clock strike 11:45

T:arre meine timhe tumhara gift to diya hi nahi anyway guess what it would be
K:mujhe kuch nahi chahiye bas tu humesha muskurati rah
T: anyway chalo aao

(twink took him to the bed and pointed it)

K:ye kya hai twink
T:BED hai aur aaj se mein tumhara bed tumhe bapas karti hoon
K:nahin twink mein sofe pe thik hoon tum sofe pe nahiin so sakti mein...
T:chup tum bahoot bolte ho(she created pillow wall) tume kya laga mere khadoos sarna tumhari ye siyapa queen tumhe poora bed de degi aur woh sofe pe soegi mein itni bhi badi dil wali nahin
tum es taraf mein is taraf (she pointed to the side of bed)
K:lekin twink
T: kintu parantu lekin kuch bhi nahi look kunj we have to spend whole life withone another sharing this single roomkab tak tum sofe pe tang maror ke soonge i know u miss ur bed
K:aisa kuch nahin hai twink mein thik hoon
T:kunj mein janti hoon tum mujhe sari khusiyaan dena chahte ho khud ko chahe kitni bhi paresani uthani pare par mein bhi tumhari biwi hun kunj
K:TWINK WO
T:firstly when we were married then there was no trust between us due to i dont want to remember
but now our missunderstanding is cleared and I TRUST U KUNJ and when i trust u then there is no quenstion on sleeping on the same bed and ye pillow wal hai na agar thoda moda niyat phisal gaya to (she blinked and asked naughtingly)
K;phir mujhe jimmedar mat kehna as i have warned u
T:aise mujhe koi problem nahin hai and she blinked accha ab so jayein raat ho gayi hai
gud night and once again happy birthday

(both slept on their side and were happy and at peace and content that now they trust each other alot and r with each other and for each other by their side)


ANYWAY THIS IS MY FIRST OS SO PLEASE COMENT AND LET ME KNOW HOW IT IS U LIKED IT OR NOT SO I CAN WRITE MORE OR NOT
Edited by UMAT - 9 years ago

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kabirslover thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awww that was good!! plz do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nyc...😊
Pillow wall e sahi..but kunj.ko bed toh mila...
Please write more...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow it's so cute and a lovely OS😳😛
OMG! it's ua 1st ever writing 😲 awesome 😃
Plz do write more 😊😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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oh so sweet os...😳😳
gr8...👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was lovely and so sweet

i loved it
awesome os for first time umat

do write more

twij r so adorable
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Love this..cutest Os.
Wonderful umat 👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
GREAT JOB UMAT DIDI👏👏
LOVELY AND SWEET😳😳😛
TWINJ R SOOO ADORABLE😳😳
DO WRITE MORE OF THESE LOVELY ONE SHOTS😛😛
Sanavi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice attempt.
Abhi bed share kiya hain, dheere dheere pyaar ka ehsaas bhi ho jayega.
Why don't u write a series of OS where their love story blossoms.
Plz write more.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice one...it was really cute... 👍🏼 😊

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